The Quest for Immortality

I'm not trying to be cute ╮(╯▽╰)╭, everyone! This is the beginning of "Seeking Immortals," so please point out any flaws. I'd love to hear them! [Applause] I'll be very diligent!

Let me be the first commenter! Hello everyone! [Waving paw] My new novel mainly focuses on cultivation and immortality, with occasional bizarre and outlandish elements. If you like it, get ready! Mwah! Feedback is welcome, and thank you again! [Bowing]