Whirlwind Girl: Ruoqian
旋风少女之若浅
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 102k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 10y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
34Chapters
1.6kFavorites
8.8Score
41.1kClicks per chapter
74Comments
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Why do I think of Bai Qian from Sansheng III every time I see the name of this heroine (personal thoughts)
That... Is big It's your writing... How should I put it... A bit like a Mary Sue? The writing is okay... It's the first time this level is good. Is it possible that everyone should not like the heroine? The aura is too obvious. Also, the first person perspective is particularly uncomfortable to watch. Well, these are my little suggestions. I hope you will adopt it (^V^)
I actually cried when I saw this chapter, I felt so sad for Qianqian
The author is great, the name of the heroine reminds me of Aunt Qianqian from Three Lives, Three Worlds and Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms
The writing style of Da Da is a bit stiff. For example, the title of the heroine can be called Brother Yu Chuyuan. She doesn't need a brother, but it gives me a headache. When Yu Chu Yuan calls his sister, he should just call him Qian Qian or something else. It's not that the capital is not good.
What the hell, are you trying to apply Baicao's plot to the heroine?
You can write first person instead of third person. *^_^*This will look more comfortable!
Damn, what's your next work? ? (Looking forward to it)
This confession... Kudo Shinichi... Mourilan...
Author, please update soon.