The Right Way to Reform a Villain

Although the layout is very poor, the writing is good.

I set up automatic subscription for fear of abuse. After a long time, I found out that it is over. I originally wanted to give some spoilers but found that the comment section is very useful! Who can give me a spoiler for what's going on? Fear!

. . . . I think it's good to stop here.

Maybe I missed something and didn't understand what Xu Nian's mother meant. I felt that many things were not explained clearly. The blunt knife was used to grind the meat, and then the old driver drove a fast car and ran amok... The writing is good, and there are also plot arrangements and foreshadowing, but the layout is not very appropriate, and overall it falls apart. Good luck to the author for writing the next article.

Isn't this a bad ending? The world is now peaceful and peaceful. If I continue to write about those incidents, my gay friends and I will feel that the word count is too high. In fact, when I asked my gay friend to read the article, she pointed out the shortcomings of the slow pace and writing too many gratuitous things. I looked at it myself and thought why the pace was so slow T_T, so I sped up the pace in the second half of the article, and decided to focus on the protagonist and not pay too much attention to the side details. Talking about the ending of this article, it is actually the ending when Nian Nian and her senior brother meet again. I stopped updating for several days just to think about how to deal with the Kyushu issue as quickly as possible. It was long and slow-paced, and the word count was low. I originally thought that it could be completed in a few thousand words, but in the end I ended up dragging it out to 10,000 words. It already felt like nonsense. I originally thought of this side story, but after I wrote the beginning, I felt that these two people really couldn't get enough of each other. Black Dragon and Little Fox can be very sweet, but Xu Nian and Chu Heng are both very reserved. I can't even imagine how the two of them could get along so sweetly. It feels a bit inconsistent ≥≤ This ending is already a good ending that I thought of. There is no separation, and the life span is long. The only thing left is that the two of them walk through the mountains and rivers of Kyushu together.

…How do I say hello? So in the end, no one except Nian Nian was resurrected! There are pitfalls everywhere, you have to count how many are not filled in, oh, this makes the baby so angry.

Damn it, why don't you do it so perfunctorily?

I'm probably not the only one who wants to beat Da Da to death. Ouch, why should the ending be so casual?

At the end, I just want to say something about your sister.

So touching >^< As long as Nian Nian and senior brother can meet each other, nothing else matters.