Blurb: Before Bai Yitan fell in love with Yun Lin, this was what their relationship was like:
"Your Highness, the Crown Prince is going to harm you." "I know."
After Bai Yitan fell in love with Yun Lin, this was what their relationship was like:
"Your Majesty, the edict is ready." "Leave it there."
After she'd used every golden finger she had, and the man still didn't love her, their conversations changed to this:
"Your Majesty, I wish to go home and retire." "I forbid it."
So she faked her death while overseeing the troops. She never expected the lofty ruler to embark on a thousand-mile search for his wife.
Wait, didn't he not love her?
A book-loving, ingenious, sharp-minded official and a reserved prince who hides deep affection and is even more cunning
Author's notes: This story is set in a dynasty where women can hold office, but it's not a matriarchy. One-on-one romance, happy ending.
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Yeah, interrupt me. If you want to write, "Fengtian Chengyun Emperor," Zhao said, the sentence should be broken up like this. "Fengtian Chengyun Emperor" is the honorific title. It should start with the title, and then read the content, Zhao said.
The update speed of Yiguang is the conscience of the industry, and the writing style has always been the ancient style that I like. There is no flashy rhetoric piled up with ingenuity, it is calm and not boring, and the occasional playfulness makes the heroine more cute. The heroine Bai Yitan has a clear love and hate. After rebirth, He cut off the front line freely and neatly for his ideal and way out, studied hard to become an official in the court, cared about the common people in the world, and was unconventional. Although there was less entanglement of bloody grudges, he kicked away the best relatives with a clean kick, which was also very satisfying.
Later, while working for the people to control floods, he met the male protagonist Yun Lin. The brief encounter allowed King Lin to see the resourcefulness and persistence of the heroine. They must have fallen into the water and embraced each other, planting a love in each other's hearts that is waiting to sprout. Well, the male protagonist seems to be quite aloof from the front, calm, calm, high IQ, and thoughtful. Thinking about it, he is really the image of a male protagonist in people's minds. The point is that the people in the royal family are all handsome, and King Lin does his part. What impressed me most is the description of King Lin returning to the capital: wearing a white jade crown with a tail on his head, and a brocade robe of Kuilong. It really makes people become nymphomaniacs instantly (face covering).
The second hug is also beautiful and picturesque. Although it feels like the end of the world for the asthmatic heroine, the heroine hugged by the hero is nestled in his arms, and the door is slowly closing with a rain of pink flowers. It really satisfies my pounding girlish feelings! ! ! The most heartwarming thing is the heroine's weak words: "Be careful, Prince Miao, King Miaojiang." I think it was at this time that the heroine entered King Lin's heart and felt love for him!
Then the plot came to a conclusion step by step, and each link reached the climax of the inheritance. The heroine complemented each other, and most of the golden fingers of rebirth were used on people's livelihood and King Lin. They also turned the tragedy of King Lin in the previous life around and ascended the throne. The heroine also found love, was honored as a queen, and was even more happy to win Linzi, a perfect ending.
After reading the whole article, I was surprised and surprised, but more importantly, I felt reluctant to leave. Although the second male lead, the gentle Dr. Wen, was imprisoned after he framed the male protagonist in the end, the impression he still left on me was the scene of him going to the river to play with the female protagonist. His doting eyes on the female protagonist, his worry about the female protagonist falling but his admiring mood, he didn't wait for the letter to arrive. The loss and every move of helping each other from thousands of miles away make people sigh that life is nothing like meeting for the first time. If you had known that you would be jealous because of love, why not protect you from a distance, at least you will still be your confidant brother who will tell you everything. It is just a word of love, it is really unavoidable.
The pairing of Su Youying and Xie Jinyu is also a highlight. What I like more is the character of the heroine. The tragic death in her previous life did not darken her kind heart. She even stayed away from the bad revenge and messy entanglements. She read her fame with a positive energy and used the golden finger of rebirth to avoid disasters for the people of the world. She was imprisoned by her previous husband for many years, but she still believed in love and received the love of King Lin. I saw some comments saying that the heroine was arrogant to the hero before. To be honest, considering the situation of the heroine's previous life, she doesn't regard men as the crows in the world because she has a better attitude. Her rebuttal is indeed a bit inappropriate and not round enough, but her uprightness is for the people's livelihood and the lives of the victims. Isn't it understandable enough? What's more, she is also made of flesh and blood, and a murder case is in front of her, so she shouldn't have the right to fight for it? On the other hand, if it is an elegant woman, she may not necessarily enter the examination and become an official, and it may turn into a house fight and a hard-working Qiong Yao. This is not a heroine. People who ask for orders for the people are upright. Of course, people don't know what King Lin is thinking.
All in all, this is a novel worth reading. At the same time, I am looking forward to Yi Guang's next book "Pillow Girl". I hope to see more delicate and richer emotions of the male and female protagonists. Congratulations on the completion of Sanhua~\\(≧▽≦)/~
It's not the first time I've read the old saying about rebirth, but it seems to be the first time that the male and female protagonists, including the bad guy, are all reborn, so the setting is actually quite novel and spicy, hahahahahaha →_→
First of all, for us readers, the title of the article is not too outstanding. I have actually told you this a long time ago, because when reading an article, the title and copy are the first things that catch your eye. This will determine whether you will click on the first chapter to read it and determine your click-through rate, so work hard on this aspect of your next new book! ! ! Then there is the content. To be honest, I basically skipped through the first half of the article. You know what to read in detail, hahaha, but I also got a general idea. How should I put it? Your emotional line is relatively weak, you focus too much on the plot, and ignore the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. For example, from realizing that they have some feelings, to being together, and then falling in love with each other and becoming biological monkeys, this is a long process, and it also requires us to use delicate writing and plot to write it out. Maybe many readers are plot lovers, but you have to believe that more readers like to watch emotional dramas. Of course, in their eyes, the best thing is to hurry up and have monkeys together, hahaha!
What I see more often is after two people officially get together. To be honest, at this time, the sweetness should be the most important. Although it is not wrong to have big twists and turns later, you should at least be sweeter later~ To put it simply, there are too many twists and turns and too little sweetness. The readers have not seen enough of the loving interaction between the two, and you are finished! ! ! Do you understand? ? ? In fact, your ending can still be extended a little bit, or you can write more about daily life in the extra chapter. What we readers want to see is the sweetness! ! !
As someone who focuses on writing ancient Chinese novels, in fact, there is nothing wrong with your writing, and you can completely control this reborn style. You just have a weak plot. In fact, many people are like this. The writing is passable, but the plot is weak, so everyone needs to work hard and encourage each other. Then when it comes to the characters of the male and female protagonists, this is actually my cute point. In ancient Chinese, I like the smart, indifferent and indifferent female protagonist the most, and I like the domineering and indifferent male protagonist who is only gentle to the female protagonist. I really like the cuteness, I really like it~
If you have the opportunity, you should try more articles of different styles or themes, because if you don't try, you won't know what you are suitable to write. Overall, this article has made a lot of progress compared to the previous one. The slow start and emotional scenes need to be greatly strengthened. I will whip you with a small whip! ! !
Hahaha, the last one is hot. The new article is my favorite type. I will definitely pursue it. I hope to see more progress from you. Remember the points I said I want to improve before~ Let's work together and make progress together, okay O(∩_∩)O
Congratulations on the completion! However, are you really embarrassed that there are so few extras? I feel very embarrassed! It will take at least three or four articles, right? Ahem, cough, cough, let's talk about this issue later. Let's discuss this article first and get serious.
As for the whole article, I don't like the first half of the heroine very much. She is very self-centered and stubborn. I think it may be because she is reborn with a little bit of emotions from her previous life. She wants to rely on her own abilities but misses a lot of things. Overall, I don't like her very much in the first half. I prefer Su Youying, who has a carefree personality. The love between him and Xie is also quite interesting to me. I think the male protagonist is very good, I really like the tone! It's a pity that there is only one male protagonist, otherwise I would give him a dozen! The second male lead is very gentle, but it's a pity that the second male lead will always be the second male lead.
The writing is smooth and the plot is quite interesting. However, the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is a bit thin. In the first half, I didn't see that the prince liked the female protagonist, not at all. If he hadn't exposed himself later, I guess I would have been confused and didn't know what happened.
This article makes me want to read it because there are so many reborn people. I originally thought it was a simple revenge article, but I was actually wrong. This is a article about collective rebirth. Even the male protagonist is reborn, and the bad guys are also reborn. In the end, the son is also reborn. Emma, I really didn't expect this at all.
My favorite part is probably the one where the male protagonist sets a trap to catch the villain. It's exciting every step of the way. I don't really like the part about the second female protagonist, maybe because the male and female protagonists just communicated with each other, but a splash of cold water ruined everything. At this time, I felt very sorry for the female protagonist. Although it was painful for the male protagonist to find her later, it was very enjoyable to watch, hahahaha.
Generally speaking, this article is more plot-oriented, and the emotional line is weak. I don't like reading plots very much, but this article is not bad. The conspiracy and plot are very coherent. It will be better if some emotional interweaving can be added in the future. The tone of the previous plot, which is too slow and heated, should be faster, which is more appropriate.
Overall, this article is good. It is an improvement compared to the first one. It would be better if it could be improved. I don't think there is a big problem with the writing and plot, but the plot arrangement and the emotional arrangement may need more thinking. Then my only regret is that there are too few emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists. It is really not enough to watch. Well, how can I put it? It should be sweet after experiencing life and death, but there are big twists and turns later, which is a little sweet. The prince chases his wife and it ends. It is not interesting at all. It will be better if there are some emotional extras in the future. This one seems to be called daily love. I also think it is too few. There are too few things to say. It is not thick and long at all. Bad review!
Finally, I seemed to appear! Throw flowers! Hope to see more appearances in future articles! I hope that Da Zhai will get better and better as he writes more, and become a great master in the future! What a great work, I look forward to a new article! Hurry up and write the article, I love you, okay! Come on, come on, come on! I will continue to support you! You must write the article quickly, and then I will read it and continue to make guest appearances, hahahaha!
Update tonight? I really like this kind of story about deep love for each other. I had a sweet dream after reading it, and I really look forward to the follow-up.
Anyway, there is no need to rely on the emperor's heir to compete for favor, it doesn't matter whether it's a boy or a girl. Personally, I prefer girls and want to see the male protagonist doting on his daughter.
I'm back, how can I torture my prince?
Fake update? I want to watch new content. When will Huang Sang know about the baby's existence? The two of them haven't spoken to each other yet.
Huang Sang will know about it in the next chapter, right?
Although I knew the heroine would be fine, I still felt at ease after seeing it. There is one detail I don't understand. Who is the person who has been waiting outside for a long time? Why?
Yeah, interrupt me. If you want to write, "Fengtian Chengyun Emperor," Zhao said, the sentence should be broken up like this. "Fengtian Chengyun Emperor" is the honorific title. It should start with the title, and then read the content, Zhao said.
The update speed of Yiguang is the conscience of the industry, and the writing style has always been the ancient style that I like. There is no flashy rhetoric piled up with ingenuity, it is calm and not boring, and the occasional playfulness makes the heroine more cute. The heroine Bai Yitan has a clear love and hate. After rebirth, He cut off the front line freely and neatly for his ideal and way out, studied hard to become an official in the court, cared about the common people in the world, and was unconventional. Although there was less entanglement of bloody grudges, he kicked away the best relatives with a clean kick, which was also very satisfying. Later, while working for the people to control floods, he met the male protagonist Yun Lin. The brief encounter allowed King Lin to see the resourcefulness and persistence of the heroine. They must have fallen into the water and embraced each other, planting a love in each other's hearts that is waiting to sprout. Well, the male protagonist seems to be quite aloof from the front, calm, calm, high IQ, and thoughtful. Thinking about it, he is really the image of a male protagonist in people's minds. The point is that the people in the royal family are all handsome, and King Lin does his part. What impressed me most is the description of King Lin returning to the capital: wearing a white jade crown with a tail on his head, and a brocade robe of Kuilong. It really makes people become nymphomaniacs instantly (face covering). The second hug is also beautiful and picturesque. Although it feels like the end of the world for the asthmatic heroine, the heroine hugged by the hero is nestled in his arms, and the door is slowly closing with a rain of pink flowers. It really satisfies my pounding girlish feelings! ! ! The most heartwarming thing is the heroine's weak words: "Be careful, Prince Miao, King Miaojiang." I think it was at this time that the heroine entered King Lin's heart and felt love for him! Then the plot came to a conclusion step by step, and each link reached the climax of the inheritance. The heroine complemented each other, and most of the golden fingers of rebirth were used on people's livelihood and King Lin. They also turned the tragedy of King Lin in the previous life around and ascended the throne. The heroine also found love, was honored as a queen, and was even more happy to win Linzi, a perfect ending. After reading the whole article, I was surprised and surprised, but more importantly, I felt reluctant to leave. Although the second male lead, the gentle Dr. Wen, was imprisoned after he framed the male protagonist in the end, the impression he still left on me was the scene of him going to the river to play with the female protagonist. His doting eyes on the female protagonist, his worry about the female protagonist falling but his admiring mood, he didn't wait for the letter to arrive. The loss and every move of helping each other from thousands of miles away make people sigh that life is nothing like meeting for the first time. If you had known that you would be jealous because of love, why not protect you from a distance, at least you will still be your confidant brother who will tell you everything. It is just a word of love, it is really unavoidable. The pairing of Su Youying and Xie Jinyu is also a highlight. What I like more is the character of the heroine. The tragic death in her previous life did not darken her kind heart. She even stayed away from the bad revenge and messy entanglements. She read her fame with a positive energy and used the golden finger of rebirth to avoid disasters for the people of the world. She was imprisoned by her previous husband for many years, but she still believed in love and received the love of King Lin. I saw some comments saying that the heroine was arrogant to the hero before. To be honest, considering the situation of the heroine's previous life, she doesn't regard men as the crows in the world because she has a better attitude. Her rebuttal is indeed a bit inappropriate and not round enough, but her uprightness is for the people's livelihood and the lives of the victims. Isn't it understandable enough? What's more, she is also made of flesh and blood, and a murder case is in front of her, so she shouldn't have the right to fight for it? On the other hand, if it is an elegant woman, she may not necessarily enter the examination and become an official, and it may turn into a house fight and a hard-working Qiong Yao. This is not a heroine. People who ask for orders for the people are upright. Of course, people don't know what King Lin is thinking. All in all, this is a novel worth reading. At the same time, I am looking forward to Yi Guang's next book "Pillow Girl". I hope to see more delicate and richer emotions of the male and female protagonists. Congratulations on the completion of Sanhua~\\(≧▽≦)/~
It's not the first time I've read the old saying about rebirth, but it seems to be the first time that the male and female protagonists, including the bad guy, are all reborn, so the setting is actually quite novel and spicy, hahahahahaha →_→ First of all, for us readers, the title of the article is not too outstanding. I have actually told you this a long time ago, because when reading an article, the title and copy are the first things that catch your eye. This will determine whether you will click on the first chapter to read it and determine your click-through rate, so work hard on this aspect of your next new book! ! ! Then there is the content. To be honest, I basically skipped through the first half of the article. You know what to read in detail, hahaha, but I also got a general idea. How should I put it? Your emotional line is relatively weak, you focus too much on the plot, and ignore the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. For example, from realizing that they have some feelings, to being together, and then falling in love with each other and becoming biological monkeys, this is a long process, and it also requires us to use delicate writing and plot to write it out. Maybe many readers are plot lovers, but you have to believe that more readers like to watch emotional dramas. Of course, in their eyes, the best thing is to hurry up and have monkeys together, hahaha! What I see more often is after two people officially get together. To be honest, at this time, the sweetness should be the most important. Although it is not wrong to have big twists and turns later, you should at least be sweeter later~ To put it simply, there are too many twists and turns and too little sweetness. The readers have not seen enough of the loving interaction between the two, and you are finished! ! ! Do you understand? ? ? In fact, your ending can still be extended a little bit, or you can write more about daily life in the extra chapter. What we readers want to see is the sweetness! ! ! As someone who focuses on writing ancient Chinese novels, in fact, there is nothing wrong with your writing, and you can completely control this reborn style. You just have a weak plot. In fact, many people are like this. The writing is passable, but the plot is weak, so everyone needs to work hard and encourage each other. Then when it comes to the characters of the male and female protagonists, this is actually my cute point. In ancient Chinese, I like the smart, indifferent and indifferent female protagonist the most, and I like the domineering and indifferent male protagonist who is only gentle to the female protagonist. I really like the cuteness, I really like it~ If you have the opportunity, you should try more articles of different styles or themes, because if you don't try, you won't know what you are suitable to write. Overall, this article has made a lot of progress compared to the previous one. The slow start and emotional scenes need to be greatly strengthened. I will whip you with a small whip! ! ! Hahaha, the last one is hot. The new article is my favorite type. I will definitely pursue it. I hope to see more progress from you. Remember the points I said I want to improve before~ Let's work together and make progress together, okay O(∩_∩)O
Congratulations on the completion! However, are you really embarrassed that there are so few extras? I feel very embarrassed! It will take at least three or four articles, right? Ahem, cough, cough, let's talk about this issue later. Let's discuss this article first and get serious. As for the whole article, I don't like the first half of the heroine very much. She is very self-centered and stubborn. I think it may be because she is reborn with a little bit of emotions from her previous life. She wants to rely on her own abilities but misses a lot of things. Overall, I don't like her very much in the first half. I prefer Su Youying, who has a carefree personality. The love between him and Xie is also quite interesting to me. I think the male protagonist is very good, I really like the tone! It's a pity that there is only one male protagonist, otherwise I would give him a dozen! The second male lead is very gentle, but it's a pity that the second male lead will always be the second male lead. The writing is smooth and the plot is quite interesting. However, the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is a bit thin. In the first half, I didn't see that the prince liked the female protagonist, not at all. If he hadn't exposed himself later, I guess I would have been confused and didn't know what happened. This article makes me want to read it because there are so many reborn people. I originally thought it was a simple revenge article, but I was actually wrong. This is a article about collective rebirth. Even the male protagonist is reborn, and the bad guys are also reborn. In the end, the son is also reborn. Emma, I really didn't expect this at all. My favorite part is probably the one where the male protagonist sets a trap to catch the villain. It's exciting every step of the way. I don't really like the part about the second female protagonist, maybe because the male and female protagonists just communicated with each other, but a splash of cold water ruined everything. At this time, I felt very sorry for the female protagonist. Although it was painful for the male protagonist to find her later, it was very enjoyable to watch, hahahaha. Generally speaking, this article is more plot-oriented, and the emotional line is weak. I don't like reading plots very much, but this article is not bad. The conspiracy and plot are very coherent. It will be better if some emotional interweaving can be added in the future. The tone of the previous plot, which is too slow and heated, should be faster, which is more appropriate. Overall, this article is good. It is an improvement compared to the first one. It would be better if it could be improved. I don't think there is a big problem with the writing and plot, but the plot arrangement and the emotional arrangement may need more thinking. Then my only regret is that there are too few emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists. It is really not enough to watch. Well, how can I put it? It should be sweet after experiencing life and death, but there are big twists and turns later, which is a little sweet. The prince chases his wife and it ends. It is not interesting at all. It will be better if there are some emotional extras in the future. This one seems to be called daily love. I also think it is too few. There are too few things to say. It is not thick and long at all. Bad review! Finally, I seemed to appear! Throw flowers! Hope to see more appearances in future articles! I hope that Da Zhai will get better and better as he writes more, and become a great master in the future! What a great work, I look forward to a new article! Hurry up and write the article, I love you, okay! Come on, come on, come on! I will continue to support you! You must write the article quickly, and then I will read it and continue to make guest appearances, hahahaha!
Update tonight? I really like this kind of story about deep love for each other. I had a sweet dream after reading it, and I really look forward to the follow-up.
Anyway, there is no need to rely on the emperor's heir to compete for favor, it doesn't matter whether it's a boy or a girl. Personally, I prefer girls and want to see the male protagonist doting on his daughter.
I'm back, how can I torture my prince?
Fake update? I want to watch new content. When will Huang Sang know about the baby's existence? The two of them haven't spoken to each other yet.
Huang Sang will know about it in the next chapter, right?
Although I knew the heroine would be fine, I still felt at ease after seeing it. There is one detail I don't understand. Who is the person who has been waiting outside for a long time? Why?