[Whirlwind Girl + Grave Robbers] Taking Their Place

Let me remind the author that this little brother is not an ordinary person. He has experienced life and death. He can beat a bloody corpse. Do you think Ruobai, who just practices Yuanwu Dao, can beat this little brother? If this is true, then where has the significance of Zhang Qiling's past decades or even centuries gone? Can we say protagonist halo? Defeat the little brother. The place where the little brother is is a real battlefield. It is not just a game. If you lose the game, you can fight again. And that place is a battle between life and death. Maybe you make a mistake and this will be irreparable. So don't write the little brother so ordinary. If Ruobai writes so powerfully, it feels like the protagonist's aura is too much.

Beautifully written in big letters! ! !

I felt that the character development of the protagonist was not too mature. At first, I thought that the heroine in Tomb Raiders was like a royal sister, and even if she wasn't, she would be a bit more ruthless. Later, I found that it was different from what I imagined. She was more cold-faced and warm-hearted, but sometimes she felt a little cute. In the later stages of the article, the protagonist's personality became much more distinct. I don't know if it's a problem with the show Tornado Girl or with the author's writing style. The sense of plot is not very strong and the atmosphere is not outstanding. Too many dialogues do not promote the development of the plot very well. Maybe it's because the show itself has a weak sense of plot? In fact, each character's language in a text should have its own fixed pattern. Too many language styles for a character can easily make the character's personality unclear. Overall, the article is good and readable. I hope the author doesn't mind if I make some minor comments.

I really want to read Ruobai and An An's post-marriage story

Congratulations to the author Da Da for finally finishing it. I have been chasing this novel for more than a year. I would like to thank the author Da Da for his perseverance to complete this novel perfectly without leaving any regrets. Thank you very much, author, I will always support you!

Thank you for your hard work, author. It was really hard to insist on writing until the ending without giving up. Although I was reluctant to let go of the ending, I was still very happy to see the happy ending.

Please fill in the two big holes you had before (Xin Shao and Ni Lun)

By the way, I just remembered that you still have two big pitfalls, the reverse wheel and the girl's dirt! Eight! Hundred! Year! Without! Even! Got it! Especially the reverse wheel!

Dad, please tell me about Ruobai and An An's post-marriage extras.

I want to watch the extra episode, I really want to watch it