I'm Fan Xiaoxi, Xiaoying's younger sister. I know I shouldn't love him, but I still can't help falling in love. I know loving him will get me hurt, but I still throw caution to the wind. How will our story end, though? Ruobai, I don't know what I can do for you. All I can do is try to make myself stronger, because I know that's the only way I can help you... Xiaoying, sometimes you just need to stop and turn around. Then you'll see that a knight has always been by your side, watching over and protecting you. Qi Baicao, simply staying by someone's side to protect them isn't always the right thing to do. Sometimes we must bravely face challenges and make ourselves stronger, so we can protect the people we want to protect.
Theme:
Very messy, and often without double quotes
I shook my head and looked at him with a worried look on his face, and couldn't help but blush. Senior Brother Ruobai saw my face so red and thought I was feeling comfortable. He stretched out his hand and touched my forehead. I only felt a chill spread to my forehead, but it made me feel indescribable comfort. I couldn't help but tremble slightly. Senior Brother Ruobai touched my forehead to make sure I didn't have a fever. I thought I felt comfortable... What the hell, but I still have to say that the author's writing style is very good, keep up the good work!
Why do characters look so weird without punctuation when they speak?
Are you sure this isn't Dagang?
Therefore, there needs to be communication between people
Since this heroine agreed to try it out with Senior Brother Chuyuan and is so ambiguous with Ruobai's father, I feel more and more that she is a replica of Qi Baicao, Mary Sue's heroine halo.
This is the messiest Tornado fanfic I have ever read, bar none. . . I can't understand it at all, and there are so many bugs
The score is wrong. It should be 0 points. It's good that I didn't give you a negative score. . .
I always felt that the development in the book was amazing. Also, didn't Fang Tinghao like the heroine? Why did he suddenly get together with Eun-soo?
Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update