A heartache as deep as a speck of ash. That man who stood through the cold dew until midnight had clear, handsome features, bright as the full moon. As he turned a jade cup in his hands and passed the cold night, he still could not understand how the two of them had ended up in such an impossible predicament. How could a single word of suspicion tear open the tenderness in his heart, leaving the pain unending?
She said that when a woman meets the right person, she will love him without needing him to get hurt for her, give anything up for her, or even do anything for her. But a man’s love is different. When he no longer loves her, her tears and tantrums are wrong, her silence is wrong, breathing while alive is wrong, and even dying is wrong...
If you find the prologue boring, skip straight to Chapter One.
If Chapter One is boring too, please stick with it until at least Chapter Six.
If you still find this story incredibly boring after six chapters, drop it at once and never come back! A deep bow ^_^
Spread flowers and cheer
Author's reply:
Thank you, little flower girl shoes. O(∩_∩)o
I have seen all your opinions and will try to change them as much as possible.
Half a year has passed in the blink of an eye...
I decided to leave...
I am even more confused after reading this chapter.
Did the heroine lose her memory due to something after she came here?
It looks great~~ Please write more!
I suggest you be more subtle in the title and be more educated. I am not a writer and I don't know how to think.
But some of my favorite titles I've seen on jj are:
The city is in chaos, dreaming of returning to the Yaochi, the stone is bound, the eyebrows are filled with tears, the situation is unspeakable, and the world is tested, the hibiscus is like a painting...
Some are literary and sophisticated, some are simple and straightforward, and some are very grand. What they all have in common is that they feel flavorful, seem to have depth, seem to be as wise as foolish, and are attractively elegant and vulgar~...
Examples of bad titles include: Unspeakable Love, Damn Princess, I'll Chase You... It's really bad!
I don't know if Soyin understands what I want to express... If I could give Soyin an artistic conception, it would not be difficult to come up with a good title based on Soyin's writing style.
Alas, I can't write.
So what kind of title is good? I am also very depressed... Any suggestions?
It's not that I don't want to write, it's just that the plot hasn't been laid out yet. What can I say?
I have to say it's that title, likes and dislikes...
Thank you for your opinion, I will try my best to explain clearly ^_^, and there will never be such a thing as NP.
Falling in love with the heroine will never be a sudden change, there must be a reason.
The beginning is very attractive, but then it becomes a bit boring...
Can the man's emotional changes be written in more detail? Otherwise, it would be too abrupt. How could he fall in love with a woman? How can a female resident be attractive?
Based on the emotional fluctuations of the female resident described by adults, I think she is very carefree, and there is a possibility of NP, which is very likely.
The beginning is very attractive, but then it becomes a bit boring...
Spread flowers and cheer Author's reply: Thank you, little flower girl shoes. O(∩_∩)o I have seen all your opinions and will try to change them as much as possible.
Half a year has passed in the blink of an eye... I decided to leave...
I am even more confused after reading this chapter.
Did the heroine lose her memory due to something after she came here? It looks great~~ Please write more!
I suggest you be more subtle in the title and be more educated. I am not a writer and I don't know how to think. But some of my favorite titles I've seen on jj are: The city is in chaos, dreaming of returning to the Yaochi, the stone is bound, the eyebrows are filled with tears, the situation is unspeakable, and the world is tested, the hibiscus is like a painting... Some are literary and sophisticated, some are simple and straightforward, and some are very grand. What they all have in common is that they feel flavorful, seem to have depth, seem to be as wise as foolish, and are attractively elegant and vulgar~... Examples of bad titles include: Unspeakable Love, Damn Princess, I'll Chase You... It's really bad! I don't know if Soyin understands what I want to express... If I could give Soyin an artistic conception, it would not be difficult to come up with a good title based on Soyin's writing style. Alas, I can't write.
So what kind of title is good? I am also very depressed... Any suggestions?
It's not that I don't want to write, it's just that the plot hasn't been laid out yet. What can I say? I have to say it's that title, likes and dislikes...
Thank you for your opinion, I will try my best to explain clearly ^_^, and there will never be such a thing as NP. Falling in love with the heroine will never be a sudden change, there must be a reason.
The beginning is very attractive, but then it becomes a bit boring... Can the man's emotional changes be written in more detail? Otherwise, it would be too abrupt. How could he fall in love with a woman? How can a female resident be attractive? Based on the emotional fluctuations of the female resident described by adults, I think she is very carefree, and there is a possibility of NP, which is very likely.
The beginning is very attractive, but then it becomes a bit boring...