A hapless modern orphan and mercenary finally gets his life on the right track, only to transmigrate in an instant. Orphans have two defining traits: they're adaptable, and they're fiercely competitive. If I'm going to do something, I'll do it well. So what if I'm a female? Just watch me set an example for you all.
Mary Sue tropes and cringe-worthy stuff are no big deal. Strong x strong, with mpreg and rebirth in the womb. This story will be completed on October 21. Starting from Chapter 50, the completed chapters will be moved behind the paywall, so please don't buy them again if you've already read them. Thanks for your support! This story has been finished for a long time. Since the first draft was written three or four years ago, some of the setup in the early chapters may feel a little forced, and I apologize for that. I made up for it and polished the plot later on. The outline hasn't changed, but the setting is more logical now. Still, no matter how much time has passed, every story is a labor of love for its author. That's all I have to say.
My new story with a shou protagonist: Transmigrating as a Cannon-Fodder to Embrace the Main God
A food-and-wuxia-fandom romance
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In articles where there are few males, there will be comments about why they should not be kept in captivity. In articles where there are few females, there will be no comments on why they should not be kept in captivity.
The author recommends that there should not be too big a gap between personality and identity. As a mercenary, he loves to play, goes to the entertainment industry, and takes exams for professors, but it feels weird. Later he said that he is a very patient person, how can he be so rude to a person with a background, even if he dislikes that person. Don't say that because you have left your mercenary status, you no longer have any scruples in doing things. This is obviously not true. He has been in this identity for many years, so his personality must have been fixed, unless you just tell me that he is not only lazy, but also a funny guy. This setting is really weird.
I really can't stand it anymore. The main character was fine in the first few chapters and his IQ was online, but now his IQ is getting lower and lower as he goes to the end, and he becomes more and more effeminate. I can't stand it anymore.
Love comes too fast like a tornado
Big, actually everything else is fine, just punctuation, punctuation! Some places need to be separated by commas or periods, otherwise it will look very unsound. After reading eight chapters, almost all of them have punctuation problems. There are also segments as well. Didn't you pay much attention to it? For example, "Come around!" Yin Mei pulled the extremely shy child and pressed it against Luo Ling's back, and Luo Ling was completely trapped by him. "Are you satisfied?" Kong has a head full of theoretical knowledge. "Surround" is what the protagonist said, so it would be better to write the actions of Silver Phantom in one paragraph. The same is true for the following "Are you satisfied?" Although writing it in the original way will not affect reading too much, it will still be awkward.
There is also this paragraph: "The huge black bear that is fighting trapped beasts inside is much smaller than the model of the bear tribe after transformation, but the danger of pure beasts and orcs is not compared by size." In fact, it is easier to read and understand the meaning of this sentence by separating some parts with punctuation and replacing a few words. For example, "Looking at the huge black bear that is fighting a trapped beast inside, although the size is much smaller than the model of the bear tribe after transformation, the dangers of pure beasts and orcs are not compared by size."
I hope you will pay attention to punctuation and use it when you should use it. Long sentences will be very awkward to read if you don't use punctuation.
Chapter 14 is locked~ Where can I read it~?
I haven't read it yet, but I read the comments and thought the author was cute!
An international mercenary who has been fighting for seven years, a person who is vigilant even when sleeping, is unexpectedly thrown into the water by a person in the entertainment industry who is not usually very powerful... Speechless
What are you talking about now? I can't find it anywhere on Baidu! I can't even write by hand. Why?
Wow, very well written. Apart from the two protagonists, my favorite is actually Monroe, a cunning and sinister bear. In fact, this is truly in line with the nature of a bear. In addition, I think Munro's character is particularly vivid. I still remember Munro's persistent love for Xiao Gong's mention of honey. I really want to read Munro's content, and how he and his family's Xiao Shou got to know each other and love each other! ! !
In articles where there are few males, there will be comments about why they should not be kept in captivity. In articles where there are few females, there will be no comments on why they should not be kept in captivity.
The author recommends that there should not be too big a gap between personality and identity. As a mercenary, he loves to play, goes to the entertainment industry, and takes exams for professors, but it feels weird. Later he said that he is a very patient person, how can he be so rude to a person with a background, even if he dislikes that person. Don't say that because you have left your mercenary status, you no longer have any scruples in doing things. This is obviously not true. He has been in this identity for many years, so his personality must have been fixed, unless you just tell me that he is not only lazy, but also a funny guy. This setting is really weird.
I really can't stand it anymore. The main character was fine in the first few chapters and his IQ was online, but now his IQ is getting lower and lower as he goes to the end, and he becomes more and more effeminate. I can't stand it anymore.
Love comes too fast like a tornado
Big, actually everything else is fine, just punctuation, punctuation! Some places need to be separated by commas or periods, otherwise it will look very unsound. After reading eight chapters, almost all of them have punctuation problems. There are also segments as well. Didn't you pay much attention to it? For example, "Come around!" Yin Mei pulled the extremely shy child and pressed it against Luo Ling's back, and Luo Ling was completely trapped by him. "Are you satisfied?" Kong has a head full of theoretical knowledge. "Surround" is what the protagonist said, so it would be better to write the actions of Silver Phantom in one paragraph. The same is true for the following "Are you satisfied?" Although writing it in the original way will not affect reading too much, it will still be awkward. There is also this paragraph: "The huge black bear that is fighting trapped beasts inside is much smaller than the model of the bear tribe after transformation, but the danger of pure beasts and orcs is not compared by size." In fact, it is easier to read and understand the meaning of this sentence by separating some parts with punctuation and replacing a few words. For example, "Looking at the huge black bear that is fighting a trapped beast inside, although the size is much smaller than the model of the bear tribe after transformation, the dangers of pure beasts and orcs are not compared by size." I hope you will pay attention to punctuation and use it when you should use it. Long sentences will be very awkward to read if you don't use punctuation.
Chapter 14 is locked~ Where can I read it~?
I haven't read it yet, but I read the comments and thought the author was cute!
An international mercenary who has been fighting for seven years, a person who is vigilant even when sleeping, is unexpectedly thrown into the water by a person in the entertainment industry who is not usually very powerful... Speechless
What are you talking about now? I can't find it anywhere on Baidu! I can't even write by hand. Why?
Wow, very well written. Apart from the two protagonists, my favorite is actually Monroe, a cunning and sinister bear. In fact, this is truly in line with the nature of a bear. In addition, I think Munro's character is particularly vivid. I still remember Munro's persistent love for Xiao Gong's mention of honey. I really want to read Munro's content, and how he and his family's Xiao Shou got to know each other and love each other! ! !