She came from a vast, misty rain, carrying a blood feud. Her wait of more than ten years had all been for the chance to kill her enemy. But when the truth was finally revealed to her, where could she go from there?
P.S. This is a very long story. The romance develops slowly, and updates are slow, so proceed with caution!
I'm revising it now! (But don't worry, ladies, it's fine to read it as is (? -ω-`))
Good⊙▽⊙Looking forward to the next chapter. However, some sentences still need to be considered.
In fact, there are no big problems with your writing. Your writing style is better than the previous ones. All aspects of description are very good. However, some people have said that it is a plot problem. I suggest the author to look back after writing and find many problems. Maybe I have not noticed some. However, since it is pure ancient Chinese and not time travel (not time travel!), Then you have to pay attention to the language. Try not to use modern language, and it should not be too complicated for readers to understand. In fact, the author's language is not bad, he just needs to pay more attention to details. Come on↖(^ω^)↗
I read one chapter and it felt pretty good, but I felt like Ah Mian was a great god.