Reborn: The Trials of a Worthy Minister

There are too many locks and the faults are severe.

The downstairs is so pertinent. I resisted all the messy words used by the author. When I saw this abdication system, I really couldn't help it... The abdication system was a thing during the time of Yao, Shun, and Yu. The feudal dynasty was not called abdication system. In addition, it can be used indiscriminately. I have seen many such misuses, but please don't It would be wrong to add "eyes wide open" at the end, which I can't accept. The charming eyes are like Shu Qi's... Why are they so big? Also, Luo Qianxue said at the time, "I've done some of this kind of thing where four ounces are used to push a thousand pounds." That's not how four ounces are used to move a thousand pounds, right? I was really confused when I saw this sentence; going further, Lin Xiao's lament that "the world is unkind, treating all things as stupid dogs", this sentence is too inappropriate for the scene. In addition, there are some obviously inappropriate usages, such as the "ghost" episode of Shengde, but I can't remember it clearly orz. I'm ashamed to say... I didn't buy V in the middle part because I read it as a pirated article (don't slap me in the face QAQ). After reading the whole story, I couldn't bear it anymore and came here to complain. As someone said downstairs, the plot setting of the girl is very good, the characters are also very likable, the plot is also interesting, but the writing is solid... Please at least make the sentences smooth and don't use words randomly, because it will be very funny when reading [laughing and crying]. I followed it from Fast Travel and have been following it for a long time. Yesterday I finished reading Robot Plane. I feel that the author's language in this part also has some problems. However, the ABO world is really sweet, so I will continue to follow it. It can indeed be seen that the author wrote in a hurry. Well... I still hope that the author will at least take a look at it after finishing a chapter to see if there are any irregularities. This can be regarded as being responsible for the novel. Finally, I hope the girl can write better articles

The concept of the text is good, and the attack and reception settings are also very pleasing. The shortcomings are that the writing is a bit lacking, the progress is a little rushed, and the relationship between the two is not written deeply enough, resulting in the inability to express the parts that should be very touching. Looking forward to better works in the future~

The ending of "Spreading Flowers" ~ I can't get enough of it

Hahahahahaha, fortunately, this book is not a double or an abo, and there is no plot of having a child. Hahahaha, the son is more valuable than the father.

Overall, it's pretty good-looking, and it's a good rebirth novel.

I can accept other people being locked, but it's hard not to be able to see the finale if it's locked.

Why did Mo have to torture him a little in the end? . .

Come on↖(^ω^)↗

QWQ, who has returned from the Lord God, likes big articles!