It is just a thousand years of waiting or a hundred years of tragedy. The flowers bloom and fall like the ups and downs of life. We want to live forever but are afraid of living forever alone, and the reincarnation of fate makes life tragic. Flowers bloom and fall, between dreams and waking up, the past is just a passing cloud, what is true and what is false, why bother to hold on to what is true and what is false. But looking back at that time, it was so embarrassing. Those days have gone, more or less, there is always a faint fragrance in the air, as if she has never left, maybe she really has not left, but the traces of those days have faded.
I don't like sad stories, but Qin's story feels like it's not finished yet, and there will probably be more to come. But the ending must be tragic, and it would be nice to have an open ending. Some scenes are beautiful, but it would be better if the character description of each different character could be highlighted, and then the integrity of the story and the appeal of the storyline could be enhanced. Some small places can be described with more pen and ink. The dialogues, expressions and inner world of the characters can be described more, so that readers can deepen their understanding of the characters. The combination of the previous and later chapters is pretty good, and the overall feeling is that the prologue is finished, but there are still a lot of things that have not been explained in the last two chapters. There should still be some small finishing touches and explanations.
There is a lot of room for free imagination in the last sentence. Gu Yue will never forget him, just like so many people who have passed through each of our lives, met and separated, only he is the protagonist. There are also people we can't forget but have already missed! Author's reply:
Thank you for your review!
I will improve the suggestions in a timely manner.
The article is indeed not finished, because it is about real life now, but the background has been moved to ancient times o(∩_∩)o...
Alternative style
Still a bonus
All endings have only one name
Desolate
Qin's writing is very sad
why
In fact, if possible, I would rather live in a dream forever. Whether it is with Meng Ge or with him, I don't have to think about anything. Don't wake up from the dream, stay together, and have no worries.
The story always has an ending
She is a beautiful butterfly, flying is the ultimate goal
The pain of heaven and earth will never end, and Pangu's descendants will reincarnate in pain
A million noises and a thunder
Is this just a preface?
There should be more at the back, right?
It looks familiar, maybe it has been changed.
It is just a thousand years of waiting or a hundred years of tragedy. The flowers bloom and fall like the ups and downs of life. We want to live forever but are afraid of living forever alone, and the reincarnation of fate makes life tragic. Flowers bloom and fall, between dreams and waking up, the past is just a passing cloud, what is true and what is false, why bother to hold on to what is true and what is false. But looking back at that time, it was so embarrassing. Those days have gone, more or less, there is always a faint fragrance in the air, as if she has never left, maybe she really has not left, but the traces of those days have faded. I don't like sad stories, but Qin's story feels like it's not finished yet, and there will probably be more to come. But the ending must be tragic, and it would be nice to have an open ending. Some scenes are beautiful, but it would be better if the character description of each different character could be highlighted, and then the integrity of the story and the appeal of the storyline could be enhanced. Some small places can be described with more pen and ink. The dialogues, expressions and inner world of the characters can be described more, so that readers can deepen their understanding of the characters. The combination of the previous and later chapters is pretty good, and the overall feeling is that the prologue is finished, but there are still a lot of things that have not been explained in the last two chapters. There should still be some small finishing touches and explanations. There is a lot of room for free imagination in the last sentence. Gu Yue will never forget him, just like so many people who have passed through each of our lives, met and separated, only he is the protagonist. There are also people we can't forget but have already missed! Author's reply: Thank you for your review! I will improve the suggestions in a timely manner. The article is indeed not finished, because it is about real life now, but the background has been moved to ancient times o(∩_∩)o...
Alternative style Still a bonus
All endings have only one name Desolate Qin's writing is very sad why
In fact, if possible, I would rather live in a dream forever. Whether it is with Meng Ge or with him, I don't have to think about anything. Don't wake up from the dream, stay together, and have no worries.
The story always has an ending
She is a beautiful butterfly, flying is the ultimate goal
The pain of heaven and earth will never end, and Pangu's descendants will reincarnate in pain
A million noises and a thunder
Is this just a preface? There should be more at the back, right?