Give Me Back Our Past

Like this story very much?ω?

This is well written~~ Looking forward to the temptation of the goddess

I've been waiting for Bo Yan for too long, so I came to read the previous article, eh! This article is more beautiful than Bo Yan 23333

The girls in the author's articles are always more lovable than the boys

Nowadays, we talk about equality between men and women, but I personally think that men should be more responsible. When the male protagonist was young, he could be said to be proud and had his own arrogance. Ten years later, if he knows what he really wants, he should not be like this. I feel that the ending is just a common compromise between the two people. I worry about their future lives. This girl is too proud and self-reliant, and this boy does not know how to bend back. Love also needs to be tempered. They are too fragile.

There are still several decades that can be missed

So what is the ending?

Good looking! ! The writing is sharp and sophisticated, and the story faces reality. However, I feel that the male protagonist does not understand the female protagonist too well and is not allowed to take the college entrance examination. Is there such a crazy person?

Unscrupulous readers Give me back two of my past. I loved your past regardless of my future. You loved my past without any retreat. How should I put it? Xi Jiuda first said it was an old joke and asked me to take a look, but after seeing the first three sentences, I have to say that it feels very good. Although this meaning is clearly stated by many people, these three sentences are very touching. (Continue to emphasize that all my points are a bit crooked.) Then Xi Jiuda said not to make long comments. You are so lucky to have worked so hard to write so many words. How can you be fair if you don't leave a long review? So I decided to write a long review. Although it is not that long, it may be regarded as a long review. Then I woke up from XX bed. My expression is Σ( ° △ °|||). Okay, although this is actually a relatively old joke. But I didn't expect to start with this. I have to say, it is said that the JJ reunion is popular recently, but I don't know if it is true. Then the bad boy and the good girl in the article are another old joke, but it feels okay and handled well, without the feeling of making people abandon them. It should be said that the old story ended soon. I read the rest in one breath and didn't have much chance to read and comment on it. From this point of view, this article has a much better continuity than the previous article. The story contains the most common misunderstandings, the most common coincidences and unexplanations. I like the male protagonist of this one better than the male protagonist of the previous short story. The male and female protagonists in this article are equally stubborn, have their own pride and self-esteem, and are unwilling to say anything about what they have done for each other. The hero wants to make the heroine happy in his own way, but the heroine is a very assertive and independent person. She has her own choices. Her pride prevents her from accepting the life arranged by the hero for her. But it can be seen from the hospitalization of the male protagonist that the male protagonist's status in her heart is still very, very important, so important that she does not care about the future and leaves no way out. Why didn't she pay for the male protagonist? But her pride also made her unwilling to tell the male protagonist how much she had contributed, and she always felt like she was shrinking. The male protagonist is also a tough and indifferent person. He was once considered a bad boy, but he also has his own pride. He is used to being casual and cannot understand the life and thoughts of an ordinary child like the female protagonist. I think the author has several great points in this article. 1 The first is the narration of reality and memories. Although this is used a lot, I personally feel that it is very appropriate to use this method to write this article. 2 The author writes the life story of the male protagonist very well. Although I don't know if it is intentional or unintentional. But it's awesome that it doesn't directly write about the male protagonist's life experience, blabla, but writes about his life experience from the side, without having to work hard and other aspects. Moreover, they have different attitudes toward the female protagonist and the male protagonist due to their different life experiences. The male protagonist grew up in a relatively powerful family. He didn't particularly care about using his power. He only cared about being with the female protagonist. The heroine comes from an ordinary background, and the pride in her bones makes her unwilling to take advantage of the male protagonist's power to rise to power. Very well written. The story written by 3 gives people a very real feeling. Modern writing sometimes needs to be so real, but online writing doesn't need to be so real, exposing all kinds of darkness. The author believes that this article gives people a just right sense of reality, a sense of intimacy close to reality, and at the same time, it does not have the depressing feeling of being too close to reality. For example, later the heroine wants to get married. Personally speaking, it is closer to the real thing. "I only got along with Ji Yang for two short months, and he proposed to me, and I decisively agreed. I thought I wanted to marry myself off, and it was time to marry myself off." There are also feelings reflected between the lines in the article. Very good. 4. After reading the previous article, the character design came to the end, and it felt a bit broken in my eyes. In this story, a girl with good grades grows up to be a stubborn and capable woman, and a bad boy becomes a willful, somewhat authoritarian and cold man. The direction of character development is generally relatively stable and seems to be smoother. 5 I also read the previous short article and felt that the author didn't seem to be particularly good at writing about how two people fall in love (actually, neither do I). The emotions in the previous article jumped too quickly. This article handles this aspect more cleverly. Although it writes about the past of two people, it lacks the ink on the love between the two and focuses more on the reunion. Exploiting strengths and avoiding weaknesses. Of course, the main theme of this text is about reunion after a broken mirror. It can also be said that the author's writing is very accurate and does not waste too much pen and ink on the aspect of love. Overall, it's good, I hope you'll keep up the good work!

Ten years, how many decades can a person's life last? . . . The whole article is very interesting to read.