Bystander A: "Have you heard? The young lady of the Rothschild family ran away from home!"
Bystander B: "What?! Is that true?!"
Bystander A: "Of course it is! Lady Rothschild even offered a reward of one million pounds!"
Bystander C: "Hey, hey, are you still dreaming? How could the Rothschild family's young lady be worth only a million pounds? Add three more zeroes and that sounds about right."
Melody, who ran away from home, kept striving to become Varia's Cloud Guardian.
But sadly, she ended up as Varia's Rain Guardian's wife (what a twist!).
This is the story of how a spoiled, willful tsundere with a fake saintly streak became a gangster.
Reader advisory: 1. The male lead is an S-type girl, and it's strictly one-on-one. 2. There are all kinds of original characters and countless side pairings: original, canon, BG, and BL. 3. This work is entirely fictional and has no connection to any real people, stories, or groups. 4. The ending is BE, the characters are all wildly out of character, and the heroine is downright deranged (?). Read with caution!
It's a tragedy again. It's very heartbreaking to see so many tragic stories written by so many women. Can't it end in a comedy?
It's not a tragedy, right? I've read so many tragedies about Mother S. It's so heartbreaking. Can we let Mother S and the heroine have a comedy ending?
Why haven't there been any emotional scenes between the two of them?
A seven-seat car? Am I dazzled? Is the quantifier of car seat?
I thought I was going to confess~
After reading the whole article, I feel that the author has written a lot of portrait descriptions of Melody, and it is the kind of formal description that has a natural paragraph. In fact, it is enough to write this kind of portrait description with natural paragraphs once or twice, and every time you want to write this kind of paragraph specifically describing the portrait, it is best to be different every time. For example, last time I wrote about Melody's appearance before the change, this time I wrote about the appearance after the change, which is not too big. The best changes are made with a few strokes, such as double ponytails. If you have to write, just change the words. Now my mind has been brainwashed by words such as exquisite, double ponytails, and lace =_= First of all, it is a success to greatly create the character image, but this method is not as good as through The fragmentary description of one thing gradually gives the reader a better impression, allowing the reader to understand the characters themselves, so that there will be more room for discussion and expansion. The literary talent is quite good, especially in the psychological description and environmental description, the psychological description is very delicate It's very real, and the environment description is rich in words, but I feel that the connection between the environment and the characters' plot should be greatly strengthened. Sometimes after reading this environment description, I feel that it has no effect on the plot, nor does it have much effect on expressing the characters' mood, and it seems a bit abrupt. The above is just my personal opinion, please don't hit me →_→
You are really good at writing [Resentful Face]
It's a tragedy again. It's very heartbreaking to see so many tragic stories written by so many women. Can't it end in a comedy?
It's not a tragedy, right? I've read so many tragedies about Mother S. It's so heartbreaking. Can we let Mother S and the heroine have a comedy ending?
Why haven't there been any emotional scenes between the two of them?
A seven-seat car? Am I dazzled? Is the quantifier of car seat?
I thought I was going to confess~
After reading the whole article, I feel that the author has written a lot of portrait descriptions of Melody, and it is the kind of formal description that has a natural paragraph. In fact, it is enough to write this kind of portrait description with natural paragraphs once or twice, and every time you want to write this kind of paragraph specifically describing the portrait, it is best to be different every time. For example, last time I wrote about Melody's appearance before the change, this time I wrote about the appearance after the change, which is not too big. The best changes are made with a few strokes, such as double ponytails. If you have to write, just change the words. Now my mind has been brainwashed by words such as exquisite, double ponytails, and lace =_= First of all, it is a success to greatly create the character image, but this method is not as good as through The fragmentary description of one thing gradually gives the reader a better impression, allowing the reader to understand the characters themselves, so that there will be more room for discussion and expansion. The literary talent is quite good, especially in the psychological description and environmental description, the psychological description is very delicate It's very real, and the environment description is rich in words, but I feel that the connection between the environment and the characters' plot should be greatly strengthened. Sometimes after reading this environment description, I feel that it has no effect on the plot, nor does it have much effect on expressing the characters' mood, and it seems a bit abrupt. The above is just my personal opinion, please don't hit me →_→
What a reward~╭(╯ε╰)╮
What reward ∑(°A°`)╮
Come on, I wish you victory in the game