The Pearl Chronicles

Throw flowers! Love this ending! !

It's over, so sad! Xinwen continues to listen to Da Da's story.

Comments on "The Story of the Pearl" Off topic: First of all, let me bow deeply to express my deep apology. Now that school has started, the burden of studying is not as heavy as usual, and I can't find time to do anything else, so this comment will be extended indefinitely. I'm really, really, really, helpless T^T Back to the topic I'll start with the introduction of Jinshu Guliang's article. After reading it briefly, the first impression I get from the entire introduction is ① [Confused]. Then I took a look at the general content expressed in the introduction, and after gaining some insights, I added another impression ② [The introduction is very ordinary, even biased]. After refining some words and wording, the whole introduction gave me a slightly subtle feeling, [③Is this really an article from Jinjiang]... It seems to be an exaggeration, but the introduction is not very good. Next, we will elaborate on the three points listed above. ①The introduction seems to be explained from the author's perspective. I have to say that this perspective is very novel and bold. And precisely because it is "new" and the writing power is not very good, the effect is somewhat lost. It seemed like a one-man show. Although the article stated all the highlights, it did not leave the impression of the protagonist. That is, the character, background, and persona of the protagonist. So it's a bit confusing. ②The reason why the introduction is ordinary does not mean that its entry point and the innovation of the selected perspective are not good. This introduction is not the mainstream style in Jinjiang, but this does not hinder its creativity. It's a pity that the author's writing makes it lose its role as an introduction and its appeal. There is no doubt that an unattractive introduction will result in the loss of potential readers. To bid farewell to the ordinary, if the author likes this innovation, he can still start with the idea of ​​​​the current introduction and add some other details to make it fuller, more refined, and more stylish. Whether it's joyful, poetic, sad, or serious... Of course, it is best to change to a more common thinking angle. After all, readers' ability to accept is limited. If you like it, just click on the chapter to try it. If you don't understand it or find it strange, just click the cross button. ③It is a sigh from the heart. The introduction of this article made me feel a little bit of the articles on external websites such as HX and XX. The specific author can be studied in depth... Now that the introduction is over, let's jump into the article. Without talking about the plot, let's talk straight to the point about the writing style and some small details. To be honest, there is nothing wrong with the author's writing style. Recently, I suddenly discovered that the writing style of online articles does not need to be very high, as long as it is above the horizontal line, everything will be fine. In terms of details, to be honest, the article seems a bit exaggerated, like an HX or XX article. [Shangguan Yuqing's body is already trembling uncontrollably - the man in front of him is a young and elegant person, but he can actually kill Su Baiyuan, the most powerful female killer in the capital. What kind of person is he? You can find a lot of flaws in this section... ["On the land of China, there are three 'Phoenix Blood Night Pearls' of different colors scattered around. It is said that those who possess these three pearls at the same time can polish each other, take out three drops of Phoenix blood and drink it, and they will gain eternal life. Everyone in the world is fascinated by them and tries their best to find them." The prosperous age is in decline, and mediocrity is in power. The generals, prime ministers and dignitaries competed for the pearl and presented it to the emperor. He, Liu Zipei, is the son of the third prince; she, Shangguan Yuqing, is the daughter of the King of Jiangdong. They all came for the Phoenix Blood Night Pearl, and they were supposed to be tit-for-tat rivals, but unexpectedly, they secretly had feelings for each other and made a secret lifelong commitment to each other. Although the subject matter is about traveling through books, it clearly has hot elements, but it has been written in a cold style. Because the plot of this book where the main character wears is very cliche and tasteless. The entire article is written around a book that is unappetizing, not "appetizing." The plot of the article can put Jinjiang readers away, because they don't like this [it will offend people...] The summary is that the writing style is √, the subject matter is just a cover of the book, but inside it is still a cold article, so it is × as appropriate. I hope that the author's next article can rely on some interesting themes and plots, and the article will become popular one day. [Produced by Pumiao Grocery Store and Qingfan Liumo]

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It's so refreshing to travel through time and become a character in your own book

The love between master and servant is deep. Do they all like the King of East China Sea?

Changed the copywriting! I think it's still the same cute QWQ as before But the point is, I noticed that you changed "guaranteed daily updates" to "strive for frequent updates." Hehehe

Don't miss it if you pass by it. This is a good article. Be patient and you will be surprised! O(≧v≦)o