[Prince of Tennis/Hiyoshi] Tremor

The lake is slightly rippled [produced by Ranxin] ——Pingwang Wang Tongren's "Zhen" When I first saw the title of the article, I thought it was novel. After watching about halfway through, I was still wondering why this title was chosen. It wasn't until I saw the Fukushima Nuclear Power Plant that I finally understood. Let's start with the title. The title is novel and concise, and it is consistent with the biggest conflict in the full text. In this regard, it shows that the author is a very considerate person. But correspondingly, the biggest conflict of the article does not actually run through the entire article. That is, the overall leadership of this topic is slightly weaker, but it is harmless. In terms of writing style, the author's writing style is naturally unpretentious and outstanding. Many descriptions in the whole text are very touching. Compared with exaggerated vocabulary, the author can use very ordinary vocabulary to create vivid plots and images, which requires great writing power. And in several important transitions, such as the beginning of memories, such as Sapling's breakup, the author is able to make the connection without any trace or deliberate. But in some descriptions, there is a suspicion of piled-up adjectives. For example, "Unexpectedly, no other girls expressed exaggerated sadness, they just showed a confused and aggrieved expression." This kind of thing. In terms of plot, love, confession, getting together, breaking up, and changes in family life are actually very common plots, but they are also completely unconventional in the author's writing. Of course, on the other hand, the author's use of these plots is not too outstanding, but it is already good. In an Internet King fan article, I wrote about the Fukushima nuclear leakage incident that shocked the world. I really appreciate this. Some of today's fan fiction writers have good writing skills and good control of characters, but those articles always lack meaning that can be thought through. Not to mention deep thought, most people would not even think of making an anime fanfic have the slightest bit of practical significance. I think the author is very good at thinking of this. So I can completely understand why the author chose such an article title. This is probably a small encouragement given by the author himself. It is a small self-satisfaction in being able to think of things that others cannot think of. Therefore, in this case, the general nature of the title is weak, and the flaws cannot be concealed. Furthermore, in terms of characters, there are slightly more minor problems in this article. First of all, the love era selected in the article is Hijiruo's junior high school grade, which is Hijiruo's time in the original work. In this article, Hiyoshi is certainly charming, able to notice girls looking at him, and able to show affection in front of others without leaving any trace. This kind of image can arouse people's goodwill, but it is slightly different from the image of Hiji in the original work. Hiyoshi himself is a person who is inseparable from the word "magic". He is very thrill-seeking, unpredictable, eager to win, and very ambitious, so "secret love" is not suitable for Hiyoshi. Just think about his straightforward pursuit of the head of the tennis club. Although in love, people's behavior will always be a little abnormal, but I don't think it will be as shown in the article. When I saw the description of "a smile floating in the eyes", to put it simply, it was a bit weird. Affectionate, intelligent, and sinister are good attributes, but they should be used in different ways. There are also some problems with the creation of the heroine. What struck me the most was when Sapling broke up with Hiyoshi after the Fukushima nuclear accident. The author hopes to use the huge changes in the family to make this transition reasonable, but in fact, it is very unreasonable to think of personal feelings just after the huge changes in the family. Even if you think about it and want to separate, it won't be because of the idea that "such a good person is not worthy of you." If you like the other person too much, you will become inferior to yourself. This is normal, but the author did not pave the way for this in the previous article. In fact, due to the abbreviation of the confession plot (I guess the author cleverly avoided this easily vulgar description), although it was handled well, the image and emotional development of the two parties became less clear. The heroine's sudden lack of confidence in the middle of the article made me feel a bit strange. Of course, overall, this article is still very well written. Compared to articles that are pretentious or have strange settings, this one is superior. Through this article, we seem to be able to see the gentle wind blowing on Japanese campuses, and as the article says - the shadows of the cherry leaves on campus are mottled and the sunlight is blurry. The breath of heartbeat is like the gentle ripples of lake water. ——Ah C on 2016.08.31 From the dyed heart.

It's so well written, it brings tears to my eyes [hold] Awesome! Write down the feeling in your heart

Although short. . But great

I grabbed the sofa, I'm happy. There are very few authors who would write about Hiyoshi, that ambitious young man who always wants to defeat his superiors. So I'm looking forward to the rest of the story, even though the heroine is not my cute type. Come on (laughing)