A short-story author's first submission to Jinjiang. I wrote this when I was in my second year of high school. Please read a little before clicking the X if you don't like it.
In short, it's a love story about a dashing female general and a beautiful male chancellor who love and fight each other.
Here are a few excerpts:
"Hey! Have you heard? General Qi has surrounded Wangyue Tower with her troops!"
"Really? Isn't Wangyue Tower a pleasure house? What would a woman like her be doing there, catching someone cheating?"
"Catching someone cheating? The chancellor isn't her husband! But... heh heh, why do you think the chancellor is always at odds with the general? Could it be that the chancellor..."
"Are you out of your mind? The general may be pretty, but she's so fierce she'd draw her sword and cut someone down over the slightest disagreement. Just thinking about it is terrifying!"
"True! The chancellor likes gentle, virtuous 'ladies of the capital.' A woman like the general would be too much for him to handle."
"Wait, did you just say... the chancellor is at Wangyue Tower?"
"That's right! Heh heh, this is going to be a good show!"
Theme:
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The writing style of Dada is good, the plot arrangement is in place, and the characterization is relatively full. Overall, it is very good. I would like to invite Dada to develop on the site. Is there any interest? Buckle: 3041, 756, 456
First of all, I read Dada's works carefully. The text of Dada is very delicate, but the rendering is not enough. As an external editor, if you are interested in signing Dada's works, I will add: 110, 402, 4474. Welcome to come and poke me.
The writing style of Dada is good, the plot arrangement is in place, and the characterization is relatively full. Overall, it is very good. I would like to invite Dada to develop on the site. Is there any interest? Buckle: 3041, 756, 456