
[Brothers Conflict] 0:44
[BC兄弟战争]0:44
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 21k Words
- Genre
- No CP
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 11y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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Wow! I searched for dark-style articles on a whim, and this one is great! I didn't expect that the author would mix the story of an everyday otome into the background of the game with horror and supernatural elements, and it was written just right ~ but it ended too quickly, the heroine was over too quickly, and it was not enough to watch. I always feel that in the future plot, the brothers of the Asahina family will fall into a supernatural cloud hehehehe~
The author. . . Very powerful
Why is Ema getting entangled?
, I watched it at almost 2 o'clock, and I didn't dare to sleep (;???Д??`)
Hey, it's so scary and long, I actually finished reading it! ! ! This setting is unexpectedly exciting, I'm getting goosebumps! If possible, I would like to read similar articles again!
Author, please say goodbye~
"I was your life in the past life. If you want to continue our relationship, please draw a circle on the paper." After repeating it N times, if the pencil moves, then ask "Pen Fairy, are you here?" Because I have played it before, I care about this... Ah hahaha...
I was quite surprised when I saw that Pei had written about 20,000 long articles for his first attempt at the horror genre. Because from my point of view, the longer the horror-themed works are, the thinner the feeling of horror will be. This is because as they become more familiar with the protagonist and supernatural phenomena in the book, many readers will lose the freshness and excitement they felt at the beginning of the novel. Moreover, many long horror novels cannot create a scary atmosphere at all times, which makes readers spend most of their time watching the protagonists struggle or act stupidly, leading to the thought "Oh, it's so annoying, just kill them quickly." From the moment the reader came up with this idea, this horror-themed work has failed. Therefore, the length of general horror-themed works is within a few thousand words, and the structure of the story completely conforms to the simple pattern of beginning-development-climax-end. For longer horror works, it is necessary to design a unique exciting section every other paragraph, and at the same time, various methods must be used to maintain the reader's tension between the two exciting points. This writing method takes a lot of time and brainpower. What is horror? What factors bring about the sense of terror in horror movies and horror novels? First of all, it is unbeatable. Facing supernatural or invincible forces, people will immediately feel a sense of despair. For example, Resident Evil, its sense of terror appears when there are no bullets and blood replenishing potions. The loneliness of the protagonist without help and the despair of being unable to escape caused by the shortage of supplies are the source of terror. When the player gets unlimited ammunition weapons, the terror is greatly reduced. But despair against unmatched power alone is not the entirety of the horror component. Because when people face some natural disasters and diseases, they are also powerless, but you don't think there is anything scary about natural disasters and diseases. So what makes people tick? It is the mystery and unknown that cannot predict whether there is any upcoming danger. Unpredictability and suddenness are important elements of thriller. There may not be much horror when the protagonist dies in a horror movie, but the long period of struggle before death and the close contact with supernatural elements are the main reasons why horror movies make people feel scary. This kind of horror atmosphere can be created by dark scenes, scary music, sudden appearance of monsters, uneasy movements of the protagonist, etc. This all follows the strategy of using all means to make people feel that danger is everywhere. These are all designed to deepen people's "unknown". You're facing an angry, ugly monster you don't understand versus an angry rabbit. Even if the monster seems weaker than the rabbit, you'll still view it as a greater threat. Returning to Pei's novel, the novel creates a terrifying atmosphere at the beginning, but soon enters daily life. The subsequent scene where the protagonist sees other ghosts is in the presence of a large group of people, which greatly reduces the feeling of loneliness and powerlessness. Even after encountering ghosts that may cause casualties in the opening paragraph, the protagonist's teammates are still having sex. This is very damaging to maintaining the thriller atmosphere. In the following sections, it completely enters into daily life, and changing the background to the main character being sick would not feel out of place. In the end, the protagonist and his friends had no struggle and died instantly. It would be more terrifying if the protagonist is arranged to be the last one to die, and then uses different methods to arrange the deaths of his friends, and then shows the protagonist's powerlessness after seeing his friends die. But the protagonist dies instantly. This makes me suspect that Pei definitely doesn't like watching horror movies. At the same time, he is probably scared to death while writing this article, so he wants to end it quickly. All in all, this is a qualified daily fanfic, but it is a horror article that scares my own classmate Pei.
Author, who is the murderer? Why is Ema smiling?
This is the first time I have seen this type of wodema. . . .