Qing Yu never thought he would be reborn.
Just as he decided to treat everything before as a fleeting dream, that scum of an attacker, who had died a miserable death, came crawling back...
Even after dying once, would he really make the same mistake again?
So he'd rather go raise a child...
Madam Wang: "This child is clever, kindhearted, wealthy, beautiful as a celestial maiden, utterly devoted, and can go seven rounds in one night..."
Qing Yu: "Tell me the flaws."
Madam Wang: "He's a little terror!"
In a nutshell: A story about a death-seeking Taoist who is reborn, makes the same mistake again, and gets thoroughly devoured by his beloved disciple!
Little terror: "You think you deserve to be my master?"
Little terror: "If you take another disciple, I'll kill him!"
Little terror: "Come on, let's cultivate together!"
Proud gong x reserved shou. Happy ending.
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"My Emperor Is Here (Transmigration)"
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Alas, my Yueyue, I only hope that I can stay with my brother in the next life and never leave him.
Orz... The main character, the Holy Mother, couldn't bear to watch Orz anymore. No wonder she was tricked to death in her previous life. You really deserved to die! With such a rotten heart, even if he doesn't die for love, he will be tricked into death sooner or later...
I can't stand it any longer. Goodbye manually...
Seeing this, I would like to make a few comments.
1. The characters' personalities are not distinct enough, and there are too many people. Qingyu is gentle and has no personality. Being treated like this by his amnesiac disciple seems to be no big deal, and he doesn't feel any resentment in his heart. In the early stage, Ming Yuan was too unreasonable and his emotions were too sudden after losing his memory, and the transitions were too abrupt. Qingxuan's shaping is relatively obvious, but not too outstanding.
2. I don't know how long I plan to write it, but I always feel like the plot goes too fast. It was not so obvious at the beginning when he went to the mortal world to catch the fox demon, but when his apprentice was taken away, the plot of Qingyu entering the demon world moved very quickly. In the previous chapter, he was looking for someone, and in the next chapter, he would have sex. In the next chapter, the apprentice started to please Qingyu and then a jealous man appeared. Then the villain brother appeared and Qingyu was captured. When Qingyu escaped, the apprentice was provoked to madness. In the next chapter, the villain plot immediately appeared and started a fight to the death. After that, Qingyu's adventures escalated and he was in danger. So much content is completed in about twenty chapters, is it too fast?
3. Because the plot moves too fast, it feels a bit hazy. There are many supporting characters who appear to be very important but only appear once or twice, but I don't know what role they play. It seems like why the apprentice's mother wanted to save him, and why his father was so afraid of his mother. What role does the disciple's master in the demon world play, and is it one of the foreshadowings of the rebellion? What is the role of Anu? The mysterious place that suddenly appeared is used to make gold fingers?
What is this strange power? I'm so curious (><)
Neon: It's not easy for me to finally appear again...
Yoooo~What a big pot of dog blood=￣ω￣=I like it
I'll be crying every minute from now on
I just want to ask why it is said that priests are immortal while at the same time they are said to only have a lifespan of a hundred years. It's a contradiction...
Immortal but only has a lifespan of a hundred years,,,,
Alas, my Yueyue, I only hope that I can stay with my brother in the next life and never leave him.
Orz... The main character, the Holy Mother, couldn't bear to watch Orz anymore. No wonder she was tricked to death in her previous life. You really deserved to die! With such a rotten heart, even if he doesn't die for love, he will be tricked into death sooner or later... I can't stand it any longer. Goodbye manually...
Seeing this, I would like to make a few comments. 1. The characters' personalities are not distinct enough, and there are too many people. Qingyu is gentle and has no personality. Being treated like this by his amnesiac disciple seems to be no big deal, and he doesn't feel any resentment in his heart. In the early stage, Ming Yuan was too unreasonable and his emotions were too sudden after losing his memory, and the transitions were too abrupt. Qingxuan's shaping is relatively obvious, but not too outstanding. 2. I don't know how long I plan to write it, but I always feel like the plot goes too fast. It was not so obvious at the beginning when he went to the mortal world to catch the fox demon, but when his apprentice was taken away, the plot of Qingyu entering the demon world moved very quickly. In the previous chapter, he was looking for someone, and in the next chapter, he would have sex. In the next chapter, the apprentice started to please Qingyu and then a jealous man appeared. Then the villain brother appeared and Qingyu was captured. When Qingyu escaped, the apprentice was provoked to madness. In the next chapter, the villain plot immediately appeared and started a fight to the death. After that, Qingyu's adventures escalated and he was in danger. So much content is completed in about twenty chapters, is it too fast? 3. Because the plot moves too fast, it feels a bit hazy. There are many supporting characters who appear to be very important but only appear once or twice, but I don't know what role they play. It seems like why the apprentice's mother wanted to save him, and why his father was so afraid of his mother. What role does the disciple's master in the demon world play, and is it one of the foreshadowings of the rebellion? What is the role of Anu? The mysterious place that suddenly appeared is used to make gold fingers?
What is this strange power? I'm so curious (><)
Neon: It's not easy for me to finally appear again...
Yoooo~What a big pot of dog blood=￣ω￣=I like it
I'll be crying every minute from now on
I just want to ask why it is said that priests are immortal while at the same time they are said to only have a lifespan of a hundred years. It's a contradiction...
Immortal but only has a lifespan of a hundred years,,,,
Yoooooo~