Back then: "There's no reason needed to bite weaklings to death."
"I know that one day I'll die at this person's hands."
Now: "I don't have a reason to bite such a weakling to death."
"It's true, I survived. And I don't have to fear death anymore."
In the future: "Just stay behind me. What kind of man can't even bite to death someone who hurt you?"
"Mr. Hibari, um... I'm a guy too, actually."
I am Ning Nuo, devoted to exploring new frontiers.
Anyway, as you can see, this story's pairing... Am I perhaps the first person to write this couple? This is also my first time writing BL, so please forgive me if it's not very good.
Some people have said that I've, well, made Hibari too out of character. I admit I'm not very good at capturing his character, but I wrote him according to my own interpretation. If you spot any other problems or plot holes, please point them out too.
I always feel that Skylark despises life a little too much 🤔
Does the host still remember me? The story of Skylark and Kuroko The original poster will update soon. I have a small request: Erhuang CP Prison Temple
Remus? HP's ╮(╯▽╰)╭ Not bad, not bad
Ten years later, the banner in Hibari's house is the only one I own, so I think it is unlikely that Akaashi would be too timid to bite and kill him because he is a business partner. Akashi's attitude and the above saying that Akashi's father's hand was long enough are enough for Hibari to bite and kill him a thousand times, don't you agree? Skylark will beat you until you obey.
I think even a skylark 10 or 20 years from now will be ruthless when it wants to bite and kill.
Hello, author, I am Qian Yao from Pingwen Shop. First of all, I would like to express my apologies, because I haven't watched Tutoring in almost two years, so when I received your order, I almost forgot about the character of the character, so I temporarily made up for twenty episodes of Tutoring of Skylark. Maybe some parts are not very good, so please bear with me. ① [Setting] I am a little uncomfortable with this setting, and it feels a bit like a romantic match. Maybe it is because I have never read the fanfic of these two people before, and I feel inexplicably curious. I don't know whether to poke at other people's cuteness (maybe because I have always been an ALL red party...) ②CopywritingThis copywriting is too average. I asked three people to help me think about the copywriting. Everyone agreed that it must be changed. The author can change it a little. Kuroko is originally a basketball player, and he feels that he has nothing to do with being weak... A normal person would be weaker than Hibari and the others... And readers will be confused when they click on it, such as: Why did Hibari kill Kuroko as a weakling, and why did Kuroko die in the hands of Hibari. It is recommended to keep only that small section (in the future). ③Content There's a lot to say, so I hope the author won't find me verbose. 1. The encounter between Kuroko and Hibari is a bit strange. Especially the description of this paragraph → [Kuroko's body lost his balance for a moment...] Is too abrupt. Even though the author wants to show that he was attacked, it seems too rigid and blunt, and there is no sense of substitution at all. The same is true for the author's later descriptions. He pursues some trivial things and ignores the subjective color. For example, he pursues language too much. One moment he wants to express Italian, another moment Japanese, and another moment English (remind the author, expert is not added with "s"), which will make people feel that the author is a bit showy, and the dialogue is biased in some places. It would be better to add some psychological descriptions from God's perspective. 2. Characters... Let's talk about Skylark first. Because I'm not familiar with Skylark, I sent this article to one of my fandom friends. He felt that Skylark was a bit broken, but he couldn't tell the specifics. I think it's probably a matter of language and character. Let's not talk about his attitude towards Heizi. The key is that he has a weakness for basketball [...]. Why do we have to remind others that we are carnivores from time to time, and then bite, bite, bite, bite, why must we bite and kill! Hibari is not such an unprincipled person... Let's look at Kuroko again, Chapter 1... Someone points a gun at you, and in the end you ask others to help you find a hotel. Isn't this a bit too much... Although Kuroko has a lower sense of existence and is more innocent, he is not so ungrateful... At least he should express his inner anger... 3. Maybe there are too few chapters, and I still don't know when the author's foreshadowing will be used. ④Language The language is okay, relatively fluent, at least not novice or stupid. It respects the original work to a certain extent. The character collapse is not too serious, just for a few chapters. All in all, this article is only written because of the word count, so I can't judge it too much. I just think the author should not put too much thought into the Western background and dialogue, and focus more on the plot. And, this is true for many articles. You must persist in finishing it, and there will always be someone who will appreciate you. I wish the author many collections and comments. ——Shicheng Studio Qian Yao commented
I have read this article in Tieba (?? . ??) Thank you so much↖(^ω^)↗