A Fallen Immortal Clan Heir's Comeback [Transmigration]

Sure enough, it's better to skip and read. In this article, I like the parents of Gong and Shou better. They are much cuter.

I feel like there are a lot of things I haven't written out: 1. It was previously described that Jiufan was distracted when he transformed into a god and was injured later. I thought it would have some impact, but how did I know it didn't? 2. I spent a lot of pen and ink writing about Mung Bean before, thinking that the Candle Dragon War would play a very important role in the future. How did I know that it didn't? 3. I have been writing about extraordinary people who steal the sky and change the day. I thought that this would lead to some big figures later, but how did I know that there was no such thing? 4. In the past, Bai Nuo had a lot of villain roles, so I thought there must be a clear ending, but I didn't know there wasn't. 5. I have been writing about Han Yu struggling with his identity issue before, thinking that he would have a showdown with Jiufan Sanwu and others later, but how could he know that there was no such thing? In fact, there are still many details that I feel have not been written clearly, but the emotional development is actually complete at this point. No matter how much more it is, it may be a burden. But it would be great if you could write about the wedding night. O(∩_∩)O Haha~

The back is a mess, what do you recommend to me [rolls eyes], it's a waste of money

Is this an early article written by the author? I feel like the plot is a mess

In fact, I always thought that the truth about Han Yu's identity would be revealed in the end. It should be that Han Yu and the original owner are actually the same person. Otherwise, why would they have the same mother and not have low feelings for the original owner?

Han Sanwu, is this considered a be? Please give me a sequel...

Very well written. Keep up the good work???!!(??????)??

It's pretty, but it always feels like a eunuch~

The ending of this fight is too perfunctory, bad review →_→

After watching it, the first thing that made me a little uncomfortable was that the loser counterattacked at the end. . . The whole text was abused! I'm so unhappy, maybe that's why I'm not happy. It's good that I'm not picky about the emotional line. The several copies I downloaded are also well written, but what the heck is the ending? It's forced to end. The final boss, Zhulong, was sealed like a monster. . . Inexplicably won. . . . The description of the blood pool is too abstract, and the transition of the venue change is not detailed at all. I just go to another place to fight and win inexplicably. . . . Characters cannot be brought in either. These last few chapters are just unacceptable. I'm wrong not to pick the venue. As for Father Han at the end, a character who doesn't make much noise in the whole story but has a strong presence, and his inexplicable handling of the relationship with his son, I can't accept it. It's a pity that it started so well and ended so quickly. Give me some points to encourage you. I guess I won't have much passion at the end of the writing, and it's not easy to persevere. Thank you for your hard work writing the article.