The Protagonist's Counterattack Through Quick Transmigration

The original heroine was just a psychopath, right?

I would like to add a few points. Although the clues were explained, the title of the article is not very attractive. There are some discrepancies between the copywriting and the content of the article. For example, the identity of ty actor may have been forgotten because it was too long, but there is indeed no explanation of this in my mind. If you want to change the title of the article, you can easily change the cover. Mua

[This is an empty exercise review, please consider it and adopt it, there is no logic, just say it casually] Although what I want is encouragement, I still want to talk about my point of abandoning the article. First, the male protagonist behaves like a scheming girl in a palace. The second is that the writing is somewhat streamlined. I personally think it would be better if the fluctuations were a little bigger. In terms of writing, I am a bit immature, but I read the author column and I only wrote 20,000 to 30,000 words, so it will naturally get better as you write more. However, even though I say this, I still hope that the author can put more effort into character creation and language use. I personally feel that the characters are a bit weak and the language skills are not very strong. In terms of language, I don't know if the author reads his article after finishing it, but if the author reads it silently, he should be able to find some problems and revise them in time, so I believe that your writing has a lot of room for improvement - this does not mean that your writing is poor, it just tells you that you can do better, and it does not require you to write millions of words, it just requires you to be serious and patient. But if you want to write to the point where you have a million dollars, wait until you have a million dollars and then carefully consider what you have written over the years and see if you have made any progress. There is no need to rush into writing a document. At the same time, I personally thought it was a bit hasty to write about an emotion in just over 10,000 words, so when I read the first volume, I was confused??? Status. Take your time and write carefully. If you really can't write about characters, just observe people in life and record things in life. Come on, accumulate more, read more, and write more. Use everything you have at your disposal to create a prosperous world. Love you. Over.

72.8%: Girls' "door" →

Copywriting - the last line, when you → that year

Damn, they are both ranked tenth in the school?