Douluo: The Battle for Wings

The entire story has been heavily revised. The text was locked to keep you from getting confused by the before-and-after versions; they really are very different. Mo Shang: Dear readers, the author says... Tang San: Don't pay too much attention to the blurb. Mo Shang: And don't pay too much attention to... Tang San: Character changes, additions, and things like that. Mo Shang: There's also... Tang San: The little bugs in the story (please be sure to point out any big bugs), so don't pay too much attention to those either. Mo Shang: Anyway, in it, there is... Tang San (looking at the note, then falling silent...): ... Mo Shang: Hmm? Tang San: ... Mo Shang: All right, I'll say it. Anyway, it contains the entire process of me devouring Xiao San. Every. Single. Part. ~ Tang San (his face instantly turning bright red) Mo Shang chuckled: All right, everyone, goodbye~ Tang San: Goodbye, everyone... [Note: This story is yuri and danmei.] [Nine Fox: To be honest, I don't know how to write a gong protagonist orz] [P.S. This is not abandoned! This is not abandoned! This is not abandoned! (Important things must be said three times)] [Another P.S.: If you don't like it, click the X and be on your way. No need to comment!!!] "If you like it, read it; if not, leave. Why waste your time running your mouth? My writing's just that crappy. Sorry it offended your eyes."