The Faithless One

↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗ Spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers. To be honest... The author of your article is torture for the sake of torture, but you don't feel the abuse... Everyone's feelings are not handled well... Compared with Ji Ye, the heroine of this article is very serious... Completely deviated from the setting... I feel that your plot layout... You need to work harder... The character settings should be brought into the plot... When reading this article, I feel a bit like I am just reading the article... Without bringing it into the plot... Just a suggestion... Please don't feel sad... I hope the author's writing can improve...

I don't intend to give a bad review, just because I found it depressing. The author's writing is pretty good, but I don't understand why he created such a male and female protagonist. The character of each character was reasonable in the early stage, but suddenly turned 180 degrees in the middle and late stages, especially the male and female protagonists. I wonder if the author wants to whitewash the male protagonist. Obviously A man who is obviously a ruthless and unjust man has to be suddenly changed into a cruel male protagonist. The same goes for the heroine. A heroine who is obviously not very intelligent has to be written as a revengeful heroine. There is also a big contrast in the personality of the heroine. Although she is a little angry in the early stage, she becomes a little crazy later. Revenge? May I ask if she is Jiang Chengyue? Even if she wants revenge, it is someone else's business. No matter how much the heroine hates the man, she is still standing as an outsider. Only both parties know what is right and wrong in the relationship. Moreover, Chengyue didn't ask her for revenge. Why did she insist on getting ahead? It's really inexplicable. Moreover, when the male protagonist abandoned her and she accepted it, that was a breakup. Moreover, the male protagonist was already married. Whether their marriage was happy or not was someone else's family matter. If she interfered in other people's marriages, she would be a mistress. To be honest, I really hate such bloody plots! I rarely write reviews when I read books. There are only two situations. One is that the writing is very good, and the other is that I feel very aggrieved after reading it and have to vent. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write the characters and plot structure better.

Personal opinions, no personal attacks. I like the author's writing style, but just because of this, I was dragged into this article. After reading it, my feeling was actually: Why isn't the heroine still dead? Maybe it's because the heroine has read few books and has low intelligence, so she only wants revenge and all this nonsense. To be honest, I have nothing to feel bad about this kind of female protagonist. Is it because the author regards the second female protagonist as the female protagonist... In my opinion, the male protagonist and the second male protagonist are indeed scumbags, but if the female protagonist and that other orange one put themselves in a position where they are inferior to others and only ask for charity and love from others, all this is just their own fault. I feel like this article is promoting negative values ​​and outlook on life... (Again, this is just a comment. Whether you accept it or not is none of my business...)

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↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗ Spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers. Congratulations on the completion... I actually think you wrote this chapter very well... It would be better if the memories between Yu Sheng and Zhuang Qi could be described in more detail in the text... I actually like the way the author set up the childhood memories of the two of them... It is the best part of the whole article.

↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗ Spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers. It is indeed coming to an end... Although Zhuang Qi is a scumbag... But in this chapter... The author has cleared his name very thoroughly... But his last memories of Yu Sheng, the author did a good job... Next time I will try a wider net... Basically, I think you are very suitable for writing sadomasochistic stories, but your ability to lay out the plot needs to be strengthened... It will be better to go into the inner world of the character... Come on...

Important notice! ! ! ! ! The author went on a trip and stopped updating for three days! ! But this week's list requires 10,000 words! ! So there will be a lot more when I come back! ! ! I guess this article is almost over! ! ! Just bear with it, everyone! ! Mwah! ! !

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