They were once young. They were once kind.
But once they entered the palace, they had no choice.
From then on, there was no right or wrong, only victory or defeat.
But those tiny drops of vermilion tears: for whom were they shed?
Besides the heroine, this story will also focus on the other women in the harem. The heroine is clever, but she isn't all-powerful. This story isn't meant to showcase her alone. What I want to portray, above all, is the love and hatred among the women of the imperial harem. The dynasty is fictional, so please be understanding of any inaccuracies. Historical sticklers, please stay away. And by the way, the male lead is not the emperor.
Theme:
For intervening in a good friend's marriage for the sake of so-called love, I can only say that Shen deserves to die. She should be cut into pieces and executed in Ling Chi. She should not die a good death.
The heroine entered the palace as a concubine and was later promoted to Jieyu. In other words, the author set Jieyu to be higher than the concubines. So why does it say in Chapter 15 that the heroine went to pay her respects to Concubine Kang? What a mess :-O
I like Concubine Ning as always and am waiting to be fattened up. (?>?<?)
I think writing is a very lonely thing. Thinking about what I express in this story, if someone can understand it, sometimes even a little bit of support can support me in going forward. I like the article you wrote. A good article needs a stage suitable for itself to shine, instead of missing the opportunity in the vast sea of books. Each work embodies the author's hard work and skill, and he hopes to achieve better development. I don't want my words to be left alone, and I don't want a good work to be buried. I hope I can make friends with Da Da. Occasionally, it will help Da Da gain more readers and increase the popularity of the Internet. Baba Wu Ling Yi Yi Umbrella Wu Baba
Hello, author, this is commentator Xiaoer. I am honored to comment on your article. When I saw the title, Xiaoer already knew that this was a Gongdouwen. To be honest, Xiaoer rarely reads Gongdouwen. Although I am an ancient style lover, I still rarely dabble in Gongdouwen. So Xiao Er boldly puts forward the following opinions.
First: Regarding the copywriting, it is recommended that the author look for Nalan Chexue's Jinjiang special effects code and arrange layout or beautification. Of course, if you don't know how to do it yourself, you can also find a beautification shop in the Tieba to make the layout of your copywriting neater. Another note: I think the author could revise the copy to make it more cheerful. Nowadays, many readers like to be cheerful, so he could create a funny little theater to attract everyone.
Second: Regarding the writing style, I won't say much about the great writing style. The writing style is quite smooth and there are not many bugs. This is something that many authors today cannot achieve. Reading a novel itself is a relaxing process, and too many bugs and loopholes will only make the reader lose interest.
Third: Regarding the content, after Xiaoer read it all, he found a problem. Because this was the order I took, I had to read it. However, according to Xiaoer's previous reading habits, this kind of article would be decisively discarded. The reason is that I have no desire to read it and it is not attractive enough for me. The author has probably not learned one thing, digging holes. The digging here is not to open many articles as usual, but to dig multiple holes in one article. For example, if you plan to fish, you must first bait the fish to whet the appetite of the fish. Written one pit after another, it makes readers feel like they are guessing and reading chapter by chapter. To put it bluntly, it is just to whet the appetite.
Fourth: Regarding the setting of the heroine, to be honest, I don't like the heroine of this book very much. Her temper and behavior make me feel that in the battlefield without gunpowder in Gongwei, she is a goddess who has opened cheats. She knows who wants to frame her. She knows who killed her sister. She knows that according to common sense, such things should be revealed slowly and should not be exposed in a few chapters. This makes it unnecessary to read.
Fifth: Regarding the palace fight, the waiter discovered a problem. The plot of the palace fight arranged by the author was too simple. To put it bluntly, he used very old jokes but did not write any new ideas of his own. A very simple intrigue between women, coupled with the author's detailed explanation, all the conspiracies are revealed, there is no sense of mystery at all, and it cannot arouse curiosity.
Sixth: Regarding the setting of the supporting characters, I admit that the characters in the author's works have very distinct personalities, and almost all the joys, sorrows, and joys are written on their faces, but it is in the palace after all. This is a life-and-death struggle. If all the beauties in the palace had such a temper, I am afraid that the emperor's three thousand beauties would have changed one after another. In short, this kind of woman is not suitable for life in the palace. Their performance is too obvious, their expressions and movements are clear about love and hate. In the harem, a woman whose thoughts are revealed will die the fastest.
Seventh: Regarding common sense, I have seen several inappropriate things, and I would like to point them out here.
1. "Good and beautiful people are jumping around." To be honest, the waiter laughed when he saw this. He should be taught royal etiquette before entering the palace. Since he is a beauty, jumping around like this is probably inappropriate.
2. "Xi'er hurriedly covered Concubine Shen's mouth." Xi'er is just a little maid here. She would be beheaded if she did such a thing to her master. No matter how bad Concubine Shen said, as a maid, she couldn't do such a transgressive thing.
3. Every time the heroine says something that doesn't mean what she means, or makes a slanderous comment, or rolls her eyes in her heart and says something, it will make people feel like she is out of drama. This is one of the reasons why I don't like the heroine. In my opinion, her heart is not very good either.
In fact, overall, the author must have put a lot of thought into it. The number of words in this article is not too much. Don't be discouraged. I am a novice. The data is similar to DaDa. It is always difficult to start in a small vacuum. The most important thing is persistence. Another thing: I have something to say about the author. You can make more use of it, sell it for cuteness, collect it, put it in a small theater, etc.
Finally, I wish the author to open up his mind and write more good articles. Come on!
By Crazy Return Shop Waiter
For intervening in a good friend's marriage for the sake of so-called love, I can only say that Shen deserves to die. She should be cut into pieces and executed in Ling Chi. She should not die a good death.
The heroine entered the palace as a concubine and was later promoted to Jieyu. In other words, the author set Jieyu to be higher than the concubines. So why does it say in Chapter 15 that the heroine went to pay her respects to Concubine Kang? What a mess :-O
I like Concubine Ning as always and am waiting to be fattened up. (?>?<?)
I think writing is a very lonely thing. Thinking about what I express in this story, if someone can understand it, sometimes even a little bit of support can support me in going forward. I like the article you wrote. A good article needs a stage suitable for itself to shine, instead of missing the opportunity in the vast sea of books. Each work embodies the author's hard work and skill, and he hopes to achieve better development. I don't want my words to be left alone, and I don't want a good work to be buried. I hope I can make friends with Da Da. Occasionally, it will help Da Da gain more readers and increase the popularity of the Internet. Baba Wu Ling Yi Yi Umbrella Wu Baba
Hello, author, this is commentator Xiaoer. I am honored to comment on your article. When I saw the title, Xiaoer already knew that this was a Gongdouwen. To be honest, Xiaoer rarely reads Gongdouwen. Although I am an ancient style lover, I still rarely dabble in Gongdouwen. So Xiao Er boldly puts forward the following opinions. First: Regarding the copywriting, it is recommended that the author look for Nalan Chexue's Jinjiang special effects code and arrange layout or beautification. Of course, if you don't know how to do it yourself, you can also find a beautification shop in the Tieba to make the layout of your copywriting neater. Another note: I think the author could revise the copy to make it more cheerful. Nowadays, many readers like to be cheerful, so he could create a funny little theater to attract everyone. Second: Regarding the writing style, I won't say much about the great writing style. The writing style is quite smooth and there are not many bugs. This is something that many authors today cannot achieve. Reading a novel itself is a relaxing process, and too many bugs and loopholes will only make the reader lose interest. Third: Regarding the content, after Xiaoer read it all, he found a problem. Because this was the order I took, I had to read it. However, according to Xiaoer's previous reading habits, this kind of article would be decisively discarded. The reason is that I have no desire to read it and it is not attractive enough for me. The author has probably not learned one thing, digging holes. The digging here is not to open many articles as usual, but to dig multiple holes in one article. For example, if you plan to fish, you must first bait the fish to whet the appetite of the fish. Written one pit after another, it makes readers feel like they are guessing and reading chapter by chapter. To put it bluntly, it is just to whet the appetite. Fourth: Regarding the setting of the heroine, to be honest, I don't like the heroine of this book very much. Her temper and behavior make me feel that in the battlefield without gunpowder in Gongwei, she is a goddess who has opened cheats. She knows who wants to frame her. She knows who killed her sister. She knows that according to common sense, such things should be revealed slowly and should not be exposed in a few chapters. This makes it unnecessary to read. Fifth: Regarding the palace fight, the waiter discovered a problem. The plot of the palace fight arranged by the author was too simple. To put it bluntly, he used very old jokes but did not write any new ideas of his own. A very simple intrigue between women, coupled with the author's detailed explanation, all the conspiracies are revealed, there is no sense of mystery at all, and it cannot arouse curiosity. Sixth: Regarding the setting of the supporting characters, I admit that the characters in the author's works have very distinct personalities, and almost all the joys, sorrows, and joys are written on their faces, but it is in the palace after all. This is a life-and-death struggle. If all the beauties in the palace had such a temper, I am afraid that the emperor's three thousand beauties would have changed one after another. In short, this kind of woman is not suitable for life in the palace. Their performance is too obvious, their expressions and movements are clear about love and hate. In the harem, a woman whose thoughts are revealed will die the fastest. Seventh: Regarding common sense, I have seen several inappropriate things, and I would like to point them out here. 1. "Good and beautiful people are jumping around." To be honest, the waiter laughed when he saw this. He should be taught royal etiquette before entering the palace. Since he is a beauty, jumping around like this is probably inappropriate. 2. "Xi'er hurriedly covered Concubine Shen's mouth." Xi'er is just a little maid here. She would be beheaded if she did such a thing to her master. No matter how bad Concubine Shen said, as a maid, she couldn't do such a transgressive thing. 3. Every time the heroine says something that doesn't mean what she means, or makes a slanderous comment, or rolls her eyes in her heart and says something, it will make people feel like she is out of drama. This is one of the reasons why I don't like the heroine. In my opinion, her heart is not very good either. In fact, overall, the author must have put a lot of thought into it. The number of words in this article is not too much. Don't be discouraged. I am a novice. The data is similar to DaDa. It is always difficult to start in a small vacuum. The most important thing is persistence. Another thing: I have something to say about the author. You can make more use of it, sell it for cuteness, collect it, put it in a small theater, etc. Finally, I wish the author to open up his mind and write more good articles. Come on! By Crazy Return Shop Waiter