The Ultimate Series: The Successor to the Power-Wielding Doctor

What the hell are you writing, and the article is so messed up that I have no idea what π_π is writing about, and it's not as good as the original (><)

Damn, don't be fooled! (T_T)

What on earth is it written? The original work is much better than this, and you just wrote it according to the TV, you just added some other things, and you added it so awkwardly

94, Great, needs to be strengthened.

The article has no emotions, the characters' personalities have been changed too much by the author, and several chapters of Zhi Ling'er are just cannon fodder.

The writing is so messy. It's clear that Mommy Gu is already well, so why is she written to death again? The content is too messy.

The water is rising, and I have no desire to see it.

The writing is a bit choppy and the character dialogue seems soulless, but I still like it.

Why does it feel a bit like a Mary Sue?

I am also a loyal reader of that article (ฅ>ω<*ฅ). I'm worried that the author has given up. It's great that you can continue writing. O(∩_∩)O