Calamity in a Chaotic Age

You are really good! You write well! I will update the article soon. I really want to read it! Well, I just want to say that you can't tell the difference between reality and illusion! I'm impressed with you!

Well, the content has become much more concise and there is progress, but I want to say that you made three mistakes in writing. First, pain should be interpreted as pain, second, forceful eating should be interpreted as snatching food, and third, bruised eyes should be interpreted as clumsy eyes. Overall, it's not bad. Keep up the good work!