Blurb: If I could live it all over again, if I could hold him in my arms once more, I would gladly accept whatever came of it.
In his previous life, he suffered the agony of being cruelly abandoned by that person and died in pain. On the road to the underworld, he cast everything aside, became a demon, and returned. Now he would make that person taste all the anguish of love he had suffered throughout his life.
It was all a lie. It had all been arranged. He had endured so much pain that no matter how sincere that person's feelings were, he couldn't believe them.
"Come back to my side. This time, you're the only one I want by my side."
Characters: Lu Liusì, Jing Mang (Qing Jun) Supporting cast: ... Strong top, seductive bottom, doted on exclusively, angst, happy ending
The writing style is really good, the control between the lines is also very strong, and the characters are very fleshed out... I think you should hurry up and write about popular subjects after finishing this book. This gag is too cold, and I felt a little depressed from the first chapter. When reading articles nowadays, few readers are willing to read such heavy writing styles. They prefer to look down upon them. I think this is the reason why your writing is very good but your readers are few. I think if you are not the kind of reader who has accumulated a lot of readers and can respond to a large number of readers, you should try not to write too coldly at the beginning and write something that people like to read now. When you have a more solid foundation, you can try this kind of subject matter. But your writing is really great, there's no doubt about it.
Please don't abuse me. Except for the subtle points, the overall feeling is very good. It has my own writing style. However, after reading the first chapter, I felt that it might be a bit unpopular. If possible, if you change your writing style to a popular subject, it will definitely become popular. ——From a little transparent person who has been reading articles for many years