[Brothers Conflict] How to Fix Your Flaws the Right Way

It makes me feel embarrassed. Isn't this a brotherly war? I can't even understand how it's written.

After reading the comments, I realized that the protagonist was already in his 20s? ? O. OI thought he was a middle school student. I don't quite understand the author's setting of Thirteen Hairpins, maybe it's because the writing is progressing slowly and hasn't been developed yet. What I'm more confused about is Yusuke's preferences and Feng Dou's manor = = From the first chapter, you can feel that the protagonist is a selfish boy based on his family background and appearance, who dislikes poverty, loves wealth, hates ugliness, and loves beauty. Perhaps these are also the shortcomings that the system aims to get rid of. However, the text seems to have little connection with the title... It can be seen that although the author is not good at writing, the text is still somewhat interesting, and the subject matter angle is rare. I don't know why it feels a bit boring when I look at it. As for Feng Dou's character = = The original work is a devil's character, to put it mildly, he likes to play pranks, and he can be considered a naughty kid who bullies the weak and fears the strong... When I saw some negative comments because of Feng Dou, I felt a little pity for the author hhhhhh I hope the author can improve his imagination and write the brother war story in your heart. Just like the cat said, just write how you want.

I feel like the author went too far! I liked it at first, but then it became too much. Is he really the protagonist? It's really suspicious! ! ! And it's too outrageous for an adult to be bullied by a group of children! Even if the protagonist wears clothes on a child, it doesn't mean he is an idiot! ! ! (￣^￣)ゞ

Hello, author, are you new? For tension, I recommend books about the unlucky man's life of cultivating immortals and books about romantic nerds. I feel that your writing is very weak. As long as the book ends smoothly at this level, some people will definitely read and like it. This is my first time to comment, but I have read a lot of online novels. I will post about your Sun Rui, not Zimei. Sun Rui has a family waiting for him. Zimei changed because Sun Rui is not Zimei. Six years of oppression cannot be represented by a few words. It is very heavy. I have experienced it for three years and ruined me for five years. I am only 19 years old this year. How old is your Sun Rui or Zimei? If this is reality, they will be abolished.

Seeing this, I feel that no matter who likes him, he will be blind... He is not like a well-educated family, but a bit like a child from a nouveau riche family... I hope you won't be disappointed after reading it.

Pig's trotters have such a novel personality and I really like them. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Sun Rui is just like a mentally retarded child with so much joy

Damn it, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

The protagonist may be unlikable, but Fuuto Asahina is no better, if not worse.

Aren't you stupid? A bunch of bean sprouts are bullying each other...