Breaking Through [Reborn]

After watching it, the ending is not as exciting as the beginning. From the moment Ogg and Ares meet again, the rest is not as attractive as before. However, this is the first time I have read an ABO article. The author's writing is pretty good, great!

Author, you wrote very well before, but you failed to finish it! I choose death (I haven't watched the extra yet, I hope the extra can make things come true = =

I think there is a problem: all the information collected during the war came from Erling's transmission. The Og Alliance seems to have made no other reconnaissance efforts except for this clue, so that the casualties were quite heavy until they came in to find out the situation. The process of destroying the eyes, ears and nose was too simple. At the beginning, Ogg was mentally exhausted when he killed an immature bastard all by himself, but now he has awakened to be able to take on the big boss. Since Nien wanted to create a country, he shouldn't tell Ellin such important information so easily. There are still a few unreasonable places, but your writing style is good and you have new ideas. I hope I can keep writing and see your progress and better-looking articles.

(ಥ_ಥ) Waiting for perfection

I feel like I haven't seen enough yet... I support you, prawn (′>ω<`) Good night =3=

Finished spreading flowers... Are Lin and Charon be together? (ಥ_ಥ)

What to do with Charon? Author, are you really not a stepmother?

As a result... Erling abandoned Charon... So pitiful... But having said that, Nien is indeed very kind to Erlin... And the prawn is a bit like Ellin's stepmother. I always feel that these two cloned twins... Are actually just as tragic as their eldest brother. Are you really not giving me meals?

~\\(≧▽≦)/~ When I came back from traveling, I was really happy to see that the author had updated a lot Yeah

I'm back again. I was so busy the past few days that I didn't catch up on updates (T_T)/~~