[One Piece] Get Up! You'll Catch a Cold If You Die Here!

I was actually quite shocked when I saw this. This is not a pirate story or a romance. This is Tasia's story, a legend of an era. There is no need to worry about who to be with, love, hate, etc., And there is no righteousness of being forced. Everything is just a simple person. Being able to live like this is the pinnacle of everyone.

I think I deleted the above comment because I thought it was a threesome at first, but when I saw this, I realized it wasn't...

Oh... God... Metaphysics... So scary (suddenly I remembered the fear of being dominated by metaphysics)

Let me start by saying that this is just my personal opinion. When I see fandoms, I like them just because there are some regrets in the original works, but there are often good endings in the fanfics, and good fanfics must have feelings and thoughts about the original work, or about a certain character. When reading such fanfics, I often feel like, ah, it turns out that there is such an idea and explanation, but I didn't see it. But there are also a lot of people who don't like it very much, and there are a lot of fans who just do it for the yy. Although I don't have much respect for the author, I still want to say that it's annoying to read it just for the sake of prostitution with those attractive characters. I like two kinds of fandoms. One is like joining that world and slowly growing up with the plot. The protagonist will have his own unique charm without forcibly suppressing the original characters. The other is like creating a new world, even if it is not similar to the original work, it is equally distinctive and touching. When I read these two kinds of fan fiction, I tend to be more careful. I describe it based on the reader's feelings. The former is like putting a butterfly into the original work. If it is well written, it will make people feel as if there is an extra character that has not been described in the original work. It would be great if there really was such a person. The latter is well-written because I regard it as a world similar to the original but completely different. The same thing is that it is extremely exciting and cannot be separated. This article falls into the latter category in my opinion. The perspective of this article is very unique, and the characters, politics, personalities, and plots involved are from angles that have never been described in the original work. Regarding the understanding of the Celestial Dragons and the government, especially the revolution in the Kingdom of Goa, it can be said that I don't know a more likely direction and reality. This is a darkness that is less described in the original work, but it is the real world of pirates. But I still have different understandings about several characters. It seems incredible to me that Ace and Melalda come together. Although little Ace is a very awkward person and has a very gentle heart, the only person who can get to the bottom of his heart is after Luffy. You can tell by looking at his behavior before agreeing with Luffy. Ace's experiences as a child made him build a very thick shell for himself. Even with Sabo's company, he was still gloomy. How did he become that polite and warm person like a flame? Because Luffy, it's not the one-celled one, it's not the person who can follow him for a month and still doesn't mind even after suffering countless injuries, and he will never abandon Luffy after that. Ah, the more I talk about it, the more I think he and Luffy should be a couple. Ahem, and Meralda is a noble, even if she can see Ace's gentleness, even if she is a girl and cannot treat him like Luffy, but if she does not have the strength and understanding, it is impossible to keep up with Ace. What I want to say is that with the setting of Meralda and the timing of their meeting, Ace was able to stay with her and fall in love with her. . . That violation lingers. Reading the original novel, I have neither a favorable nor a bad opinion of Sabo, and the same goes for Ryu. In terms of standpoint, the Revolutionary Army is a villain, but the biggest feature of the original work is that the good guys are well written and the bad guys are not that annoying. The original characters are okay, but the characters described in the original work are too dark and it's a bit ruined. What Sabo hates is people and the numbness of the world. It does not mean that he himself is like this. For example, when he treats Tasia, a dragon may do that. But Sabo is not mature enough. He will not allow himself to become the same person he hates. Therefore, the abuse of prisoners will not be something that Sabo turns a blind eye to. Considering Tasia's status, it is not something that Sabo, who has been cautious since childhood, cannot imagine. Even if these are not counted, based on the feelings of the three brothers, no matter what reason Tasia saved Ace, perhaps the political opposition cannot be changed and cannot be retreated, but after victory (Saab thinks) Tasia will definitely be cared for. (No matter how much I hate it, I will never be as despicable as you but am very upright. This is the mainstream of all hot-blooded comics, but in terms of the darkness of this world, forget it.) I'm not sure, but this setting seems to be in the original work. The government not only has a navy, but also an army. The navy manages pirates, and the main enemy of the army is the revolutionary army. Although I haven't watched a few of the theatrical versions, the theatrical version of One Piece actually has a lot of setting additions. I don't know if the author has seen it.

I hope the heroine can win

I'll take the first kill after finishing it!

I originally thought Melada would end up being something like The Merchant of Venice. It doesn't matter if I can't beat you. I will buy your country directly. Normally, everyone holds a board of directors just like a parliament_(:з)∠)_ It's not easy for Ares to still personally handle the company's affairs. You need a trust fund. The new character is Kidd's granddaughter? They all marry late and have children. Captain Kidd should be 81 years old now:)

Although I really want to see the story between Ares and Kidd's granddaughter (?), It would be cruel to see Ares immortal and immortal...

This, this, this... Are you planning to continue the story of Ares? Horrified face... Can Tasia be resurrected? Was the one that Meralda saw just now alive or an illusion? Super curious... It would be interesting if it were alive.

Damn, I can't make it out from the back, so I have to do it separately. Please don't mind. Okay, this time I'm here to defend the original work (positive color). The first thing to make clear is that the world of One Piece is not developed. Although its technology tree is very strange (bloodline factor, artificial devil fruit, Enil goes to the moon, etc.), This is a world where everyone still uses flintlock pistols in battle, and the engine has not even been invented yet. It is true that Oda has some problems with the structure of the world. For example, I still don't know clearly whether the world of One Piece is considered an "empire (high level of execution)" or an "aristocratic system", whether the Five Old Stars are a "senator" or a "committee". Among the four hereditary countries that have appeared, except for Goa, the other three kingdoms actually have no aristocrats... But Mariejoia's war that can change the world with 100,000 people is "right". The impact of the decisive battle on the top is based on the mutual restraint and balance of the three major forces of "the 'Three Generals', the 'Shichibukai', and the 'Four Emperors'". What changed the world was not "the 100,000 people who participated in the war" but "the subsequent effects of that war." One of the Four Emperors died in the battle and his forces immediately collapsed (otherwise Marco wouldn't have had to reorganize for a year before seeking revenge on Blackbeard). The fugitives from Impel Down and the resignation of the Navy Marshal triggered a direct confrontation between two of the three generals, resulting in the reorganization of the three generals and the departure of one of the original three generals. The Yonko One Piece, and three of the seven Shichibukai were removed from the war. It's not like Cyberpunk. Such a big personnel change would certainly change the world. I very much agree with individual heroism. The cyberpunk mentioned above, some people think that will be the direction of human development. A highly intelligent society, a world with intubation in the back of the head, a polarized gap between rich and poor people, blablabal... In almost all literary and film and television works with cyberpunk style characteristics, a kind of personal heroism is emphasized, such as "The Matrix", "Ghost in the Shell", "Blade Runner"... (As a science student, my political and historical knowledge basically comes from the game "Civilization" series, "Kingdom Storm" series and related radio programs on the Machine Core Network. Please point out and forgive me if I have misunderstood_(:з)∠)_) Finally, I boldly recommend two outstanding Japanese writers to the author, Tanaka Yoshi (lao) Shu (zei) (representative works "Legend of the Galaxy Heroes" and "Arslan War") and Ono Fuyumi (representative work "Twelve Kingdoms"). The world and wars they wrote may change the author's inherent concept of the small number of Japanese writers (damn, it seems to be showing his age)