Cloud Ink

What about the story of Ruyi and Hengshanjun?

Well, I just want to say that many of the foreshadowings are not clearly stated. Author, do you want to stifle us obsessive-compulsive disorder?

I can't help but complain, this article is really frustrating to read, I feel like the author is deliberately stretching his words, and always makes the explanation unclear and a bit procrastinating. The scholar is also getting more and more annoying the more I read, he is cowardly, timid and irresponsible.

Just finished watching it. Like it very much. It felt like the ending was a bit rushed, and left me hanging. Did they successfully go up the mountain to reunite in the end? But I read this article with great concern, and it touched my heart so much. Come on, adults!

I just forgot to rate it. . .

It was because of Chen Sanlang that I discovered the master. I have been reading adult articles these past few days, and I really like them. The ancient prose has a strong flavor and taste, and it is also an article about monsters, which is very interesting to read. After reading other comments from adults, Yu Yunmo is not very satisfied. In fact, I like this article very much. Many details are very delicate, and the ending seems to be a bit faster. The writing, details and mood of the characters are all very good, but the plot seems to be a little lacking. However, I have listed adults' works as newly discovered good articles, haha. Is there a market for light-hearted writing? This kind of delicate and frightening emotion is also a favorite of our generation.

If I have any regrets about this article, it's that the ending is too hasty. To be honest, I have watched all the costumes of adults so far, and my favorites are this and "Saving Karma", but I always feel that there is a common problem, or is it the style of adults? I just felt that the ending was a bit rushed. I like it very much. Come on, adults, I like your costume!

Yunmo is too miserable Da Da is the stepmother!

I couldn't connect in the middle, so I had to search for the Xilu address to read it. To be precise, the second part is not as attractive as the first part, probably because the plot is caught in an emotional whirlpool and the plot is not ups and downs enough. Like many people said, I felt that the subsequent plot was very jumpy and not coherent, so it was a bit confusing. It would be better if the plot was expanded and written. Looking forward to the chapter~

I couldn't connect in the middle, so I had to search for the Xilu address to read it. To be precise, the second part is not as attractive as the first part, probably because the plot is caught in an emotional whirlpool and the plot is not ups and downs enough. Like many people said, I felt that the subsequent plot was very jumpy and not coherent, so it was a bit confusing. It would be better if the plot was expanded and written. Looking forward to the chapter~