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First meeting at the gambling house: The young master crashes the place? Pay me back my thousands of taels!
Second meeting, falling off a cliff: Our souls switch bodies, and the young master is the emperor?
"This silly girl? Just bundle her up and take her back to the palace to be my consort!"
Lei Zhenyu: I'll help you when you get your period.
Zheng Duojing: I'll make you deer-antler tonic.
Lei Zhenyu: I'll help you bully the empress.
Zheng Duojing: I'll help you seduce the imperial consorts.
Lei and Zheng: We're such a loving family...
A hilarious twist of fate in which a transmigrated merchant's daughter and the emperor switch souls!
[New Novel] (Quick Transmigration) The Male Gods Are All Crybabies. Ye Xiaoshuang: You can be fierce, proud, narcissistic, and flashy, but don't make me wreak havoc on the male gods! System: You can cry, throw tantrums, be adorably silly and tsundere, but you must find a crybaby! Pick any of the twelve zodiac signs, choose any CEO or superstar you like. There's only one ironclad mission: make them cry! Make them fall hard, and bring on those tears!! Ye Xiaoshuang: Can I not die? System: You only have to die twelve times. A long-suffering heroine is forced to transmigrate through twelve lives, trying to make twelve male gods, each of a different zodiac sign, cry. A Cancer fox immortal master, a scheming Scorpio fortune-teller, a vengeful Leo CEO, a Pisces superstar...
[New Horror and Suspense Novel] Nineteen Ancient Corpses
Recommended: My good friend's quick transmigration novel, a cultivation-world female supporting character, an ancient-times transmigration comedy
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Let me first say congratulations! (I am here again to make unprofessional comments)
If I look at this story from my perspective, the approximate components(?) Are as follows:
[10 is full: 5 for plot, 3 for emotion, 1 for palace fight, 1 for others]
The author's wording is pretty good, and the stories range from funny to serious.
What makes me very satisfied is that in terms of plot structure, it can be seen that the author designed the story very carefully, the story follows the outline very steadily, and the plot progresses quickly.
But after all, it is the author's first work, so there are many shortcomings, such as the obvious uneven distribution of plot content:
1. There are obviously more emotional scenes in the middle section (obviously less towards the end)
2. Hidden memes and character relationships explode quickly at the end (the amount of information is too huge, I hope it will not be concentrated at the end all at once in the future, and if possible, it will be gradually revealed in the middle)
3. The design plot is too big... Because the plot is fast, many things are covered quickly, and the ending is a bit rushed.
Although it is a young work, I really like the story. The whole story is more than 32,000 words and can be read in a few hours. If you are short of literature and can't find any articles to read, you can read this story.
The above is my comment (actually I don't know what I'm talking about... I'm not an expert OTZ)
(Worm~~)
-Akiyue-
I wish you a great end of spring! So diligent, come on, come on!
I'm so touched. The article I've been following for almost 4 or 5 months is about to be finished.
I am grateful to One Leaf Spring for not giving up the trap.
PS. Look at the copy... Is the new article still 1VS1?
In fact, Shangguan Wan left just like that... I felt like I wasn't angry enough.
I need to be tortured more like this in the future (make fist)
Is the author going to collect 100 chapters of END?
When I saw this, I thought
What is the relationship between Gong Sunyu and Jingjing?
The mysteries behind are solved one by one, the amount of information is really huge
This chapter is mainly about supporting characters =x=
But I also know the past of the Imperial Master
The plot becomes very fast
(Sprinkle flowers)
Give Parrot a thumbs up!
Alas... Because the living environment is different, these two sisters have different personalities.
Hold the grass... What should I do? Everyone really believes it! ?
Jingjing~~~Come back soon QAQ
The dialogue I wrote earlier is quite funny.
Let me first say congratulations! (I am here again to make unprofessional comments) If I look at this story from my perspective, the approximate components(?) Are as follows: [10 is full: 5 for plot, 3 for emotion, 1 for palace fight, 1 for others] The author's wording is pretty good, and the stories range from funny to serious. What makes me very satisfied is that in terms of plot structure, it can be seen that the author designed the story very carefully, the story follows the outline very steadily, and the plot progresses quickly. But after all, it is the author's first work, so there are many shortcomings, such as the obvious uneven distribution of plot content: 1. There are obviously more emotional scenes in the middle section (obviously less towards the end) 2. Hidden memes and character relationships explode quickly at the end (the amount of information is too huge, I hope it will not be concentrated at the end all at once in the future, and if possible, it will be gradually revealed in the middle) 3. The design plot is too big... Because the plot is fast, many things are covered quickly, and the ending is a bit rushed. Although it is a young work, I really like the story. The whole story is more than 32,000 words and can be read in a few hours. If you are short of literature and can't find any articles to read, you can read this story. The above is my comment (actually I don't know what I'm talking about... I'm not an expert OTZ)
(Worm~~) -Akiyue-
I wish you a great end of spring! So diligent, come on, come on!
I'm so touched. The article I've been following for almost 4 or 5 months is about to be finished. I am grateful to One Leaf Spring for not giving up the trap. PS. Look at the copy... Is the new article still 1VS1?
In fact, Shangguan Wan left just like that... I felt like I wasn't angry enough. I need to be tortured more like this in the future (make fist) Is the author going to collect 100 chapters of END?
When I saw this, I thought What is the relationship between Gong Sunyu and Jingjing? The mysteries behind are solved one by one, the amount of information is really huge
This chapter is mainly about supporting characters =x= But I also know the past of the Imperial Master The plot becomes very fast
(Sprinkle flowers) Give Parrot a thumbs up! Alas... Because the living environment is different, these two sisters have different personalities.
Hold the grass... What should I do? Everyone really believes it! ? Jingjing~~~Come back soon QAQ