Shi Ye Reviews Stories

Title of work: The development of a great foodie Author name: Pirate Patch Article link: http://www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=2864400 Article Type: Salted Egg Article word count: 3W5+ Long review and short review: Long review Article introduction: Sweet and sour pork ribs and mutton buns, Crab roe soup dumplings. Pearl meatballs and eight-treasure rice, Flavored Sausage Chicken Thighs. After Song Chi was forced to get married, he became addicted to online games and became a professional chef!? Excuse Me?! Who can tell him, was he really the one who made the eight-treasure duck with dribbling attributes just now? Ouch fog grass! Why is the gang leader chasing after the ingredients in his hand! "Master! Calm down! This is really raw and can't be eaten! ... Hey, hey, hey! Don't grab it!" #It is said that this is a story about a waste material becoming a god through delicious food# #It is said to be a story about the protagonist having sex with a great god# #It is said that this is a late-night newspaper article# Song Chi: Master, please tell the truth! Do you love me or love to eat! Ke Beiyi: Because of you, I love to eat. How many companies have you invested in: None... Specified power supply: Radish Commentary style: Any Send to the bottom of the article: Yes Others: Thank you for your hard work! Ovo

Title: "She is the Queen of Stalkers" Author name: Qi Sujin Article link: http://www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=2616397 Article type: future/present talk Article word count: 9w+ Long review and short review: Long review Introduction to the article: The heroine is a queen type, and the male protagonist is a paranoid, crazy, and perverted type. Big imagination. The heroine's intelligence and aura overwhelmed the audience. In addition, the male protagonist has a golden finger, and the female protagonist only has golden fingers in the middle period, mainly taking the route of inner strength. How many have invested: 1 Designated power supply: Moxingjun Commentary style: Either way, it depends on whether it suits the Maharaja's taste. Send to the bottom of the article: Yes Others: If you are interested in the uncensored meat version of Demon Xingjun, you can inform the author.

I'm here to remind you of the order. It's been almost a month!

[No. 035] "Evening mist sinks into fragrant crumbs" Light rain and gentle cold [Wen Xiao] Order No. 35 Cancellation Thank you! Sorry to cause you any trouble~~

Got it~ No need to post it below, but I'm very grateful to Luobao for pointing out the shortcomings to me! I will pay more attention to it in the future. As expected, the problems I noticed are much different from others. Thank you very much, Carrot. It's very helpful.

Received, thank you Strawberry, no need to post below

I don't know if this counts as a review, but thanks again!

Well, first of all, I want to thank Ah Shi for being so attentive and helping me add another collection to my collection. He is such a good person~ Regarding the issue of the supporting roles being equal to the protagonists, I was actually aware of it, but unfortunately I couldn't find the key point. You also reminded me about the typesetting. In fact, I gradually returned to normal starting from Chapter 15. 2333 I was also drunk when I saw the previous ones. Actually, I don't know why I show so much love to the supporting characters qwq Maybe it's because the existence of the prototype is too intense... [← Shirking Responsibility [Hey Overall, Ah Shi, you have been a big help! [Thumb As for the venomous tongue, I don't mind as long as it's good for me, not to mention that you finally analyzed some advantages that are not advantages ( # ▽ # ) I will continue to work hard to fix all the shortcomings next time! [Clench fist Ah Hu [Although it sounds a bit subtle, you are the first to call me Ah Shi by this nickname! It has been added to my nickname dictionary√] Thank you Ah Shi for your carefulness w PS: If I say I need some time [probably in months? Can resume updating - after all, revising articles is a bit of a mental effort. Ah Shi, can you not blacklist me? Qwq I'll post four and I will definitely fix the article conscientiously.

The Black Room is here to pick up the order~Thank you, Madam Thirteen, for your long review! "False Years of Twenty" is the first novel I wrote, and the long review of Madam Thirteen is the first long review I received, which is really meaningful. What Mrs. Thirteen said was very reasonable, and she did point out many things that I had not considered. I will definitely pay attention to them in the future. I also felt some shortcomings vaguely, but when the Thirteenth Madam pointed them out, I suddenly became enlightened~~ Reviews are not very strict~ I really like this style of review. They can point out my shortcomings and praise me~ I'm still a little lazy, I should write longer to explain more things clearly... Anyway, I will definitely work hard, hard, hard~ I wish Madam Thirteen all the best~ I wish Shi Ye Ping Pu is getting better and better~~

Title of work: [Original] The evil duo Author name: Shadow Demon Network Mentor Article link: http://www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=1868184 Article Type: Ancient Egg Article word count: 3w+ Long and short comments: please feel free to Article introduction: Anti-traditional journey through primitive social culture Several companies have already invested: This is the first time I've given it to you. Specified power supply: please feel free to Commentary style: strict Send to the bottom of the article: No Others: Clicks on the last three chapters have plummeted, and I feel relatively weak myself. I would like to ask the reviewer to comment on the plot direction, characterization, etc. In short, there are various aspects of the problem. I don't have a glass heart, and what I struggle with is not knowing where I went wrong. Comments are welcome! I will accept it humbly! Thanks!