The Alchemist's Wife

I thought about the heroine's encounters when she went to Beijing, and looked forward to the emotional entanglement between the male and female protagonists, but this is the result. Ah, it was the first time I read a poorly finished article. It was obviously good-looking. I stayed up late to watch the heroine go to Beijing and was chased and killed. I watched it get light, and I woke up after a long sleep. I was looking forward to continuing to read the ending and the result was broken [Cracked]

After reading it for a few days, I realized that it was not finished. I was speechless! What the hell is this ending? !

What a rip-off, this is the end of it, just read the pirated article if you know it. Why did I buy it all at once? I'm so angry.

I also think it's well written… but it's so bad…

I'm still waiting to gain weight before watching. I haven't been to Jinjiang for a long time. When I came in, I saw it was finished.

What a great article, what a pity. I hope the author will find inspiration and continue to finish it in a certain year and month.

I think the writing is quite good. Why can't I continue writing? I've always been very good.

Only after seeing the ending do you understand why there is a world of martial arts. It's very well written, keep it up!

Ah? Is this the end? Indeed... The ending was a bit disappointing╮(╯▽╰)╭The ending felt too rushed...

I have been following the article "Zai Wen Jun Fu" most diligently since then, and I am waiting for updates every day. I have also read all the previous articles. Keep chasing until now. I have been following this article since it started, and many people are also following it. A while ago, Dashangjun Learned to Drive stopped updating for a while, and I have been waiting for the update. I think many people are also waiting for the update. But I don't know why. After I came back, my writing style changed. It is no longer the style of Jun Fu that made people rack their brains every day to figure out the next plot. Since I wrote about going to the capital to chase the young Houye, the whole style of painting has changed. In the past, it was still a strict ancient style of writing, but later it became a style of Jianghu instead of Jianghu, imperial court instead of imperial court, and it was no longer ancient style, with a lot of modern Internet words. Moreover, the characters are neither male nor female. The men all make the women moan, moaning and groaning all day long. I'm not very good at talking. However, after following Dashanjun's articles for so long, I really don't want this article to become like this. Moreover, Dashan Jun must write professionally, and there will be no interruptions. If the article is good, the results will definitely be good. There are many writers nowadays, but not many are as good as Dashangjun. As long as you continue to write as good a novel as We Were Your Wife Again, it will definitely become popular in Jinjiang. As long as the quality is like that of Zai Weijun's wife, I will follow her to the end! Dashan, come on, I hope to see good works. Really, the updates after the hiatus are a bit like being time-traveled and written by someone else. The whole style has changed. It's like a rigorous ancient drama that suddenly turned into a stupid idol drama, which is tasteless. I may have said it too much, but I have always supported Dashangjun. I hope that Dashangjun will get better and better in his writing. I hope Dashangjun will not blame me if you give me some personal suggestions.