
The Peak (The King's Avatar Fanfiction)
巅峰(全职高手同人)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 149k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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40Chapters
4.8kFavorites
9.0Score
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45.1kClicks per chapter
610Comments
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It's really hard for me to imagine the scene of Ye Xiu's death. It's so suffocating. But in this article, I went to Brother Umbrella. Ye Xiu had a deep obsession with Mu Qiu. Maybe it can be regarded as a kind of consummation. Cancer is really too painful... It's a bit overwhelming when I die. I'm going to read some cookies to restore my mood QAQ... This Generally speaking, I like the article very much. The only thing that made me uncomfortable was the Yu Huangxiang CP that popped up at the end. Because the author said it could be regarded as an allergy or an aller, I kept reading this article as an aller. As a result, the Yu Huang line that appeared at the end made me frown a bit.
After reading the previous content, I just shed a few tears quietly, thinking that I was ready to accept the ending of Ye Shen's death. To be honest, as long as it's not OOC, I'm quite receptive to identity and background changes in secondary creations. But when I read the last chapter, I really faced the separation of life and death from Ye Shen, and I couldn't stop crying, and I burst into tears. It's not a textual research, and I didn't check carefully whether there were bugs in the author's work. The literary work itself is fictional, and I didn't think about whether it had to be real. But the scenes of death and funerals were so real, it was as if I was witnessing the sadness and pain of the war. I saw Ye Shen's unwillingness and determination. Friends with whom we have only a short friendship feel regretful, while friends with whom we have deep friendship are filled with sorrow. There are even Ye Shen's family members whom the wife didn't describe too much, and I seemed to see how they couldn't accept it. It's so true that after not seeing each other for so many years, it's like saying goodbye forever. Even if it's Su Mucheng, I think it's quite reasonable. Someone previously questioned whether Su Mucheng didn't notice that Ye Shen was in poor condition. But Ye Shen's poor health has lasted for many years, not to mention that he can tolerate it so well. In fact, Su Mucheng said that she and Ye Xiu depended on each other, but I feel that their relationship should be more inclined to Mucheng relying more on Ye Shen. An orphaned little girl has always relied on her brother to take care of her. Even if she becomes an adult and makes money, even if Ye Shen leaves Excellent Era and leaves her alone for a while, the psychological dependence cannot be erased. Just like a stage when we treat our parents, we clearly realize that dad is not an omnipotent superman and can also get sick and tired. Understand that this stage does require a psychological change that takes time. Ye Shen must be omnipotent in Mucheng's heart, so it is really no joke that Ye Shen has been alone and supported for so many years. Even though Mucheng will care about him in life, when facing pressure, he is always the one who rushes in front, so powerfully clearing all obstacles. The setting of stomach problems is really good, because Ye Shen smokes openly, and everyone around him will remind him to smoke less or quit smoking. But if emotions are suppressed for a long time, emotional illness is also very reasonable. Maybe it's the fact that everything is reasonable and everything is logical and logical that makes people most heartbroken. I can't help but think about Ye Shen in Full Time. Is he okay in the World Invitational Tournament that I didn't write about?
When I saw Ye Shen leaning against Lao Han, I didn't know why I burst into tears. I started reading this article two years ago. The author's writing is really good. I shed tears when I saw Ye Shen saying to Mucheng that you haven't learned to be strong yet. When I saw other great gods being helpless because of Ye Shen's illness, I felt very distressed. I thought of that high-spirited boy, the young man who won the triple crown, the adult who returned to the competition, and how wonderful it was when we fought for bosses all over the world with them. For a moment, I was really lucky that this was a fanfic, and it was just a fanfic!
Thank you. Although there are still flaws in the writing and plot, the various descriptions are shocking and even highlight a sense of reality that is indifferent to terrifying. I can't stop crying at all.
I finished reading it at four in the morning. It's really well written and I really like it. Thank you to my wife for bringing such a wonderful fanfic. But for me, this article is actually a hegemony. Ashiu had fulfilled all his wishes before his death, and reunited with his childhood lover in another world with everyone's love.
I obviously know what the plot is like and I've watched it several times, but why do I still cry so much? (?д?;?)
I don't know why I just want to cry so much. It's obviously not the first time I watched it. My hands stopped on the keyboard and I don't know what to say. Su Muqiu alone is enough to make me burst into tears. But at least they are together in the end.
I cry every time I watch it
In fact, I have read a lot of sick leaves in the past two days, and I just finished watching The Dust the day before yesterday. I couldn't stop crying at that time. I waited for two days before starting to read this article. I thought I was fully mentally prepared, but I didn't expect that I still cried uncontrollably at the end.
After three brushes, I burst into tears. The more I watched it, the more I wanted to cry. Ye Shen's best ten years were wasted in Excellent Era! The most important years for a professional player were all wasted by Excellent Era. If he had known Xingxin earlier and spent his entire career smoothly, he wouldn't have had to endure a veteran's body to make a comeback. He has glorified so many people, and it seems like everyone knows him, but no one knows the real him. The person who knew Ye Shen best had already left. Ye Shen seems to be glorious in glory, but he has no one who can act coquettishly. He always maintains the attitude of a great god who is calm in everything. No one remembers that he is also a young man, and he should be able to act coquettishly to others. I cried so much! QWQ! !