Ito Shinobu and Miyazaki Yoji

There is just so little dialogue...

Well, madam, can you change the narrative method? The beginning of each section is how Shinobu Ito is doing, and Shinobu Ito is doing this. It's a bit strange_(:з∠)_

I like the characters in the story very much. Please remember to update

Yes, Toho does some things beautifully, but at the same time, he is often too willful. Toho is actually just a few chuunibyou patients with some talent who idle around and act recklessly. After they grew up, they each struggled in their own fields, and then became the backbone of the younger generation's nonsense. . .

Eight "moves a bit"

In the early days, Dongbang's children, except for Ling Yang, were basically the eldest sons who were pampered by the family. They were heartless and never abused. It can be said that they lived completely in the sun. Ling Yang has accepted the dark side, and he and Ren may have some resonance in their feelings for their parents, both sunshine and shadow. It feels like Zhan Lingyang still cares about Ren, which is different from Dongbang and those who admire him, but he really doesn't care about Ren. Also, when I wrote about his wife later, she didn't think he loved her very much. . . Maybe he likes many people and is really nice to those people, but the only one he can love is himself.

Great, I really like this feeling between two people.

Seventeen "Ninja Pain". In the original work, Shinobu was indeed too aggressive towards Yohji, but the wonderful thing is that in telling the story of a junior, all three supporting characters, Shinobu and Yohji, have roles. Although it is still Shinobu who tortures Yohji, but from another perspective, Shinobu and Yohji are still entangled for a lifetime. If Shinobu really doesn't want to inherit the family business and can't stand Yohji, no one can force him to do it even at his age. What is also speechless about the fanfic is that both Shinobu and Toho deserve to be abused, but degrading Shinobu and Toho as worthless is a reflection of how good Yohji is, and how bad Yohji, who cared so much about Shinobu before, has poor vision. Yohji is good, but if he is perfect and unique in the world, then he is no longer him. . .

The last five are "thinking of old friends". I feel that Shinobu and Yohji are a perfect match. If they met without any prejudice, they should appreciate each other, complement each other, and naturally feel like the steamed buns written on them. Unfortunately, it didn't happen. Exhibition is the only thing forbearance. Tolerance is very important to Zhan, but it is not the only one. Even if there are no Toho ones, there will be other people who will interest him in the future. Even if he also likes tolerance, there are still many important people and important things in his heart. This kind of character is not bad, but it strongly conflicts with Ren's desire for exclusivity.

Four "all over the body", five "thinking of a sudden occurrence", eleven "listening to the means of thinking", twelve "the crackle of the abacus". Touch the steamed bun~ But this is your work and your hard work. It doesn't matter whether anyone reads it. What matters is whether you have finished telling the story you want to tell~