The Seventh Form of Dumbo

How to say it. I feel that the author's two e-sports articles are obviously much better than this one. I always feel that this article is a bit too much. The character creation is quite awkward in both language and behavior. It feels a little immature or far-fetched. A person's temperament. Behavior. Linguistically it should be one. It can be more natural and comfortable. Or it will be easy to cause drama. Sometimes it feels like using adjectives creates an image. But adding the language makes it feel a bit awkward. . . . . Purely personal opinion. Looking forward to better works.

Although I know it is unlikely that there will be a side story, I still want to see them know that each other has been together in the future.

This Nana is just like the heroine in the horror movie, she is timid and willing to die. She will really scare herself to death Σ(っ °Д °;)っ

Let me go, the style of painting has changed a bit quickly, it has become a supernatural novel, which is a bit convenient (￣_￣|||)

Why doesn't Dumbo remember Cen Zhiyuan? He remembers things with his sister so clearly at that time, and even earlier with Xiaojie. Why doesn't Mao remember him? He didn't recognize him at all. Why did Mrs. Zhang's expression change so much? Something happened. Look at the words you used, your face is pale and even more frightened The key is that you also wrote a male protagonist who always tells horror stories. I am a bit smart and can continue to watch it. Σ( ° △ °|||) I saw the red envelope given by the author, (づ￣ 3￣)づ

Weiwei and Weibo? Asking for Weibo

It must be my sister who lied T^T

T^TWeiwei really likes making up ghost stories

Hahaha. In the end, Cen Daxian and Qian Dashen were together.

What should I do if I feel that the extras are better than the main text (>_<)