See a single falling leaf and know that the year is drawing to a close; look once, and only then do you realize how vast life and death are.
From the simple village of Xianxia, to the old-fashioned town of Qingshi, and on to bustling Shanghai, Han Manqiu's life drifts like duckweed, carried wherever the water takes it.
One is a first love she cannot forget, a love engraved on her heart;
One is a perfect man, gentle and considerate, willing to give her everything;
How should she choose? Who is the one she can hold hands with and grow old beside?
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I think your writing is quite suspenseful and very good.
After reading the first chapter, it suddenly ended. Then I went back and found that the first chapter only had more than a thousand words. Then I felt that this chapter had not attracted me in terms of plot, and your chapter was over. However, at this moment, I still have the patience to read a few thousand more words, but you did not seize this opportunity to attract me, so I was too lazy to click on the second chapter (personal opinion~, but the girl's writing style is still relatively calm, come on)
After reading the first chapter, I have a suggestion. It is best to leave a blank line between each paragraph, so that readers will feel more comfortable. For details, please refer to the paragraphing methods of other authors. The writing is very good, smooth and natural.