The bewitching Lu Qingrong uses every trick in the book on Shen Shuangzhao, yet still suffers the agony of a broken heart.
To get away from Lu Qingrong, Shen Shuangzhao tries everything he can, but the other remains like a ghost that won't leave.
This story will enter VIP status on June 18, with three chapters released that day. Please note: Chapters 35 to 48 are the previously published chapters being moved behind the paywall! If you've already read them, please don't buy them again! Chapter 49 is the first new chapter! Please don't repost or pirate the story. Thank you!
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Completed work: Ye Sui Yu An
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The first half is very well written, the characters of the two characters are very distinct, and the love is also described very delicately, step by step, and very endearing. The rest is unsatisfactory, especially the ending. If you want to say that Luo Zhen is so powerful, what does it mean if the two protagonists can be together in the end? Is it considered a charity from Luo? One day she won't give in anymore and will slaughter Xu's city whenever she wants? Shen's mother was killed, Shen's senior sister was killed, and she still wanted to kiss Luo, and even steal the token close to her body. It was disgusting. Shen was so pitiful and miserable. Is it true that no one can beat Luo? This setting makes the protagonist too frustrated. Originally, I thought there would be an ending where Xu Qingcheng takes medicine and his skills are greatly enhanced to protect his beloved, but I didn't expect to be so frustrated in the end. No one had any choice but to use words to stimulate Luo. In the end, he didn't kill her or take revenge. Oh, so frustrating.
This ending is really sweet and sour.
Why do I feel sorry for Luo Qi?
I'm done... I feel like crying for some reason...
I would like to ask the author, can this article be adapted into a radio drama? Sit back and wait!! Hope you can see this message
The characters are well written, but the climax always felt like it was progressing too fast. I'm not just asking for sweets, sweets, and extras!
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Congratulations on the completion, the writing is great, I look forward to the author writing new articles (^_^)
Congratulations on the completion, it looks great
Ling Yan is fine, so he lives with Shen Wanrong_(:з)∠)_