
White Feathers on a Sword Robe
剑衣白羽
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- Completed
- Length
- 159k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 11y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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34Chapters
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It's so well written...
When I first saw this, I felt that Boss Wen's treatment of Zheng Ji was really different. He always treated his friends and subordinates in a very gentle and polite manner, but he treated Zheng Ji with the same deep love and responsibility as a parent. He treats Nie Yingqi differently, he is always helpless towards him
This way, after reading them all and then coming back to comment, I really feel like I can visualize the future plot development in my mind in just a few minutes~ Let me write a long review for you later.
When it comes to writing a long review, I'm torn. Yin Ming Ling is the second one that surprised me after reading so many fan fictions (the other one is from another genre). Not only because of my true love CP, but also because of its own characteristics that amaze me. (Of course, it may not be this point for others.) Therefore, I am particularly cautious when writing. It can be said that the first impression I had after watching Yin Ming Ling was that it was very flavorful. Taste is really a vague thing, and can only be described in the most intuitive and emotional way. In addition to the very orthodox and strong martial arts flavor, there is also a sense that people are fighting in the world, but the disputes are not harmful to others. The protagonist of the story is not the center of the incident. They are not among the waves under the still water, but they have to follow the waves. Experience the ups and downs. As a secret fan of Wanmei, when I was about to starve to death, I suddenly found such an article, which can be regarded as a treasure! What's more, there is also a Peichen spin-off CP that I also like very much. Another ancient style martial arts that I can really enjoy. The author's writing power is powerful, and the setting of the story is very clever. Both the description and the dialogue in the article are all about the people in the article. This is very important to me. I have always believed that although the writing of a novel develops with the author's pen, one must think about the rationality of every action of the protagonist in the novel. If you can do this correctly, the character will naturally stand up. A good author can use writing and plot to convince readers that this is the right direction. Yin Ming Ling is an article that convinced me. Therefore, I feel that it is a bit sadistic and a bit benign. I also admit that this is a conscientious movie, although it cannot be regarded as a complete movie. At the same time, we must not forget that although it is completely fictitious, it still has the foundation of a fan, and fans inevitably have prototypes. The most surprising thing is that I can find the shadow of the prototype in all kinds of ingenious details throughout the article, and this setting has been processed and grafted into the world of ancient martial arts without any violation. People who are not familiar with the prototype will feel that this is a great novel. People who are familiar with it will find familiar things in a strange world. As the plot unfolds, the similarities and similarities coincide. The character's personality is biased after processing, but some very important traits are restored invisibly. In short, it's a joy to watch. Zheng Ji's appearance started with an injury. At that time, I felt that this simply indicated that he would be injured many times in the article (as expected, there were many, which made my heart hurt). Details such as an old injury on the back have already revealed his identity. In the following text, there are similar details such as fear of spiders, craving for spicy food, stomach problems, and insomnia. After the author's artistic processing, they are interspersed in the text, adding interest to the plot, making it very smooth without being forced and abrupt. For those of us who read fan fiction, it makes us smile more empathetically. I always feel that Zheng Ji in the article is probably a combination of the characters of Xiao Mei and Ting Chen, and there may be some shadows and processing of other characters. Ji'er is loyal, sensitive and restrained, and occasionally lively and venomous. In the first encounter with Xiang Yu, as well as in several subsequent confrontations with him and others, one of his characteristics was clearly revealed, which is tolerance. Of course, the shackles of his identity meant that he could not be a flamboyant person now. When he was young and frivolous, Marquis Jianyi looked after him as a younger brother. He had also been flamboyant as a young man, but what time left for him was silence. Such a forbearing person can endure what ordinary people cannot. There is a blade on the head of the heart, and while you endure it, you are also hurting yourself. Zheng Ji seems to be a person who is accustomed to hurting himself but does not want to hurt others. He only seeks the perfection of others and makes sacrifices for himself. For example, in the Langya Group of Heroes incident, he helped to hear that his boss was desperate for his life, but later he insisted on staying at Xiang Yu's place just to wait for news about Nie Yingqi. This is like Tingchen's life based on friendship. There are also some shadows of a younger sister (in my perception). Zheng Ji wholeheartedly hoped that Wen Tao would be safe and sound. The starting point for all his planning and planning was his Lord Marquis. He was tired from running around, seriously injured and endangered, and always did things with a sacrificial mentality. He has always been proud and aloof, but he also puts himself very low (as he talks, he feels like a little sister again=.=) Although he later became the sword robe of the Sword Yi Hou, his duty was to protect and protect him. Such a sacrificial gesture is really sad. Sometimes, there are even those who just give without asking whether the other party wants to pay in this way. There is also a bit of sensitivity and thoughtfulness, which may have been gradually tempered by the infatuation in youth. After hearing that the boss and Nie Yingqi were together, the young man probably finally understood his feelings for each other. What followed was the bitterness of not getting what she wanted. She changed her name and no longer called her "Xiaoyu". After Nie Yingqi left, even though Boss Wen knew what he was thinking, he still remained ambiguous and flirtatious. Zheng Ji's sensitivity was tempered by being cautious and a little gloomy. When he was hiding in Lao Cen in Shanyin, he would rather use similar fonts to see things and think about people in front of Xie Gongji. Uncertainty, sensitivity and the deep knowledge that Boss Wen once loved Nie Yingqi made him a little timid. When Boss Wen came to find him, he even thought he was in a dream at first sight. Or maybe they thought he was looking for the missing Nie Yingqi. But he didn't believe that the other party was looking for him. The article uses reflection in water to describe him, which is quite appropriate. The only thing that is immortal in his life is the light in his eyes, which carries all his persistence and stubbornness. It has to be said that Jian Yihou Wentao, at first glance, was scumbag, romantic and infatuated enough. The only Nie Yingqi he loved in the past, when the other party left everything and never came back, he didn't care about anything, and even did something for this lover who took the initiative to leave him. Probably the Bai Yueguang who will never become perfect in her heart. He is also very romantic when he is romantic. Lover. There are many bed partners. But she has always been flirting with Zheng Ji without really having a relationship. (So because of her love, Ji'er was eaten by Xiang Yu for the first time, and again and again. Ah, the general's heart hurts even though he ate people but was cannon fodder.) Boss Wen, who is gentle and noble on the surface, but actually sycophantic and shrewd, started to make few appearances, and his various scumbag behaviors were robbed of a lot of glory by General Xiang Yu. In the later period, he began to make a big impression on his presence, and the messy behavior of all kinds of responsible and considerate people was simply a representative of the world's aggressiveness. As a high-ranking person, what Boss Wen lacks most is actually someone who he can trust wholeheartedly and has a tacit understanding with. Zheng Ji happens to be such a person, and Zheng Ji loves him, so they can be together in the end. Boss Wen has always been a life mentor to Jill like a brother and a teacher. When Boss Wen gave Jill his sword with the word "" engraved on it and said "it's not worth breaking the sword", that's what really moved me. Zheng Ji seems to be loyal to Marquis Jianyi, but he is even more loyal under his own will. He is stubborn and stubborn, and no one can influence his decision. This seems to be freedom under a disguised form of indulgence, and willfulness within a moderate range. In the subsequent conversation between Nie Yingqi and Boss Wen, he mentioned that when they were together, Boss Wen was as strict with him as he was with Zheng Ji, probably out of guilt. And Zheng Ji's trust in him was all based on his belief in Zheng Ji. When the other party showed a little bit that he no longer trusted him, that is, after a plot from Lang Yahui, he found him in Xiang Yu and destroyed his meridians even though he knew he had not betrayed. (I feel so sorry for Jill). They ended up together, which was difficult but also natural. Zheng Ji naturally acted out of love, but whether he heard about his boss as a result of love or guilt, emotion and need is a bit confusing, and everyone may have their own understanding. For me, there is love, but it is not enough to last two people a lifetime. At that time, Young Shao Wen's boss probably had a momentary crush on Jill, but the excitement was not enough to lead to love. When Nie Yingqi appeared, the love between them was pure and sincere, so they restrained their romantic temperament and fell in love properly. Jianyi also became Nie Yingqi and not the Su He that everyone thought. But in the end they couldn't go on. During this period, he felt a sense of guilt and connivance towards the man who changed his name to Zheng Ji. At the end of the story, after going through a lot, they are finally together. Boss Wen can no longer erase Zheng Ji's figure from his dream. Compared with love, more than ten years of companionship and perseverance are actually more touching. Even if he leaves, he will definitely come back. This is the biggest difference between Zheng Ji and others. And even though Wen Tao could only give him a little bit, after long-term emotional forbearance and suppression, Ji Er was too easily satisfied. This little bit was enough to make him very happy and satisfied. Perhaps, being able to be with Boss Wen was the happiest thing in Ji Er's life. Wen Tao couldn't let go of such a pure and stubborn Ji'er. As for General Xiang Yu, from the very beginning of his merciless curiosity and excessive care and speculation about his relationship with Wen Tao, the subtle feelings of a young man who kept his promise were already embedded in his heart. With the words "Let the general handle it", I thought I could see the young man's lowered eyebrows and the general's heartbeat for a moment. A relationship was involved from the love cocoon. He didn't understand him well enough, but he probably fell in love with him slowly. And they couldn't be friends after all. Zheng Ji saved him twice, and he also had a slightly blind trust in Zheng Ji. But since early in the morning, he has been in love with his father-in-law, but others can no longer enter his eyes. It was an unexpected encounter of fate between them, which led to a bad relationship, but they could no longer intersect. Like a bird flying across the sky without leaving any trace, only the sky knows that the bird has been there. And the birds will eventually return to their nests. (Although the generals in the early stage almost overshadowed Boss Wen.) (The cannon fodder's Peichen spawn, giving some wax to the generals) Many details in the article moved my heart very much, such as some dialogues and descriptions of some scenes, which seemed unintentional but very touching. Language is limited and cannot describe it, but you will know it when you see it. Some sensitive RPS girls can be heeded in this article in such a way. As a true fan, I was moved to tears. It can be said that Wan Mei is such a kind of brotherly relationship and life mentor who has never left each other through thick and thin, for more than ten years. The best ten years of my younger sister's life were filled with that person's presence. Most of my younger sister's hobbies were that person's hobbies, including family affection, companionship, and tacit understanding, mixed with a little bit of ambiguous affection. Wanmei, who has to hold her face up every time to watch JQ, finally has an article like this, and the process of abuse perfectly reflects the cp characteristics of Wanmei, who is more beautiful when she is abused. (Ah, forgive me for being a fan of Wanmei. General, I'm sorry for you.) The first part of "Jianyi Baiyu" is a hearty he, but for me, it can be regarded as a he-medium. Because, from the perspective of a third party, the relationship between two people is very unequal, which is my biggest pet peeve. It was like it was an immersive 3D movie. I watched it very clearly and it was very enjoyable. But when I watched it in 2D, it was a bit blurry and a bit detached. I found that this kind of emotional scale is unbalanced. It is difficult to move on if it is unbalanced, but the protagonist does not care about this imbalance. This kind of happy situation is helpless and sad. You know that their happy life together is perfect for either of them. But you feel less than satisfied. This creates regrets in perfection, which often make people forget them quickly, and the incomplete ones are more beautiful. Such deep helplessness is like another form of be, so I am waiting for the even more sadistic second "Peacock Knife" and working hard for his career. Ps: "Peacock Knife" has released several clips. I have been deeply hurt and then healed a little. Since some settings cannot be revealed, I won't talk about it now=. =After watching the first part, I deeply discovered some echoes of those fragments that I added intentionally or unintentionally to my imagination. The abuse was even worse. Keep posting comments~
Come and make up points! I read a few chapters and it was very interesting. I carefully memorized the background settings ~ the characters are also quite interesting●▽●
People who eat meat smile with satisfaction when they see [the part below the neck cannot be described]~~
The complete and unabridged version is delicious =w=
Make up points Looking for the second part