Interstellar Fragrance Soul Master

I am super. Seven years ago six years ago. I am super

Picking up random people and bringing them back seems to be a cat cake

What if the system fails? What will happen to the heroine?

? ? ? Starting from here, it's a bit silly and sweet.

Every paragraph is so long. It's so tiring to read.

The ending came so quickly... Congratulations on the ending~

I created a special notebook in Evernote and put all the authors who have fooled you into it. See you next year, hum.

The description of the final attack was not very good.

I still have this feeling, how could a girl who was born into wealth confide her feelings to someone she has only known for a short time? No basic precautions? And she didn't even want to stay in this simple dormitory. How could she confide her feelings to someone she didn't know very well and only just met her? It feels like there are a lot of bugs

It feels a bit unscientific. You can invite someone you just met for a few days right away without being wary at all? It feels like the progress here is too fast, a bit like a Mary Sue