[Vampires] That Progenitor Father

This is the first vampire-themed novel I have read. The following are some of my "after-reading thoughts" for reference only: 1. The overall feeling is not bad, and it is very good for novices. The subject matter itself is relatively niche, and it is not a popular romance. Therefore, the author does not need to be unhappy because there are few readers and readers' comments are too extreme. The language reflects personal qualities, and there will always be some inappropriate remarks. I hope the author will not pay attention. 2. The first person narrative itself is more difficult. The story is told very clearly, but some details may not be in place. The characterization of the characters needs to be strengthened, and sometimes the character's emotional transformation is a bit abrupt. For example, the protagonist's father will suddenly become angry, and the two of them will suddenly quarrel. Maybe adding some dialogue will solve the problem. This question (I haven't written a book, I just infer from personal life experience) 3. Because it is a Western background, we may not be so sensitive to names. The author's explanation at the end of the article is very important and played a very important role in my understanding of the novel. It was too painful to confuse the characters. Thank you to the author. 4. The protagonist's character is indeed a bit weak. Girls can be ambitious and cruel. There is no need to be kind at all times. 5. The part where the protagonist's emotions are missing is not very good, the description is not delicate enough, and the protagonist's reaction after the emotions come back is somewhat inappropriate. From the perspective of Chinese people traveling through the past, the protagonist should express an apology to his father, because Chinese people value family affection more, and he should apologize for causing emotional harm to other people, rather than acting like nothing happened. 6. The background of Thirteen Blood Hostels can be appropriately supplemented to enrich the plot. 7. Is it really appropriate for the protagonist to be beaten every day in the early stage? (Laughing and crying), this must be for that PTSD (sorry, I forgot the name), in short, it is quite scary. If it really doesn't work, let's change it. Finally, this is my first time writing a long review. I apologize for the immaturity. I hope the author will get better and better, and I hope the article will be seen by more people!

Aha, then who is having a lesbian relationship with whom? I always feel so much. Basically every male character can corrupt others, except Thrall.

Quiet and elegant temperament~~I like this kind of temperament~~Mokavi is such a good father~~~~~That Apollo. . Don't hurt Makavi!! I think it would be better for Elijah not to know how to kill his father. .

I clearly know that vampires sleep during the day, but I still felt happy when I saw the phrase "while sleeping during the day." Maybe subconsciously I didn't see Elijah as a vampire. . In fact, he is just a cute little human boy. . . .

Do you still remember me~ I'm here to tell you the good news (probably) I took the exam this year... Although I'm not satisfied, I managed to pass the exam by a few￣￣)σ

The water in Jinjiang Lake is a thousand feet deep, and it's not as deep as your love~

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The author Jun's writing is great! I never tire of it. Although I have finished reading it long ago, sometimes I go back and read it again. It has a different taste, and there are no pitfalls. It is finished. It is such a good article, why do you have so few collections? Not happy (●—●) Looking forward to the new article~

Finished? Congratulations ^ω^ I feel so empty after reading it, it's over so soon

The father who rubs his thigh, damn (#?Д?). . . Nosebleed