His previous life was full of hardships. The too-kind man was repaid for his good intentions with nothing but misfortune.
He transmigrates to another world and gets a new life. On the long road to immortality, he fears nothing, not even walking alongside demons.
But what exactly is this thing...
Du: I heard you used to be covered in fur from head to toe.
Gong: Don't you think your man is so manly?
Du: ...
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1. I'll stick to one-on-one pairings for thirty years without wavering. After thirty years, who knows?
2. Happy ending, lighthearted tone, slow-witted bottom vs. loyal-dog top, both pure.
Theme:
The author's writing style is actually good, and the theme of cultivating immortals is quite satisfactory. There are time travel, space, spiritual springs, planting, loyal dogs, and cute pets, and gathering friends to upgrade together. It is a bit exciting but not bright... Of course, the author has written so much and has not yet entered v. It is also full of sincerity, but the protagonist's mind is becoming more and more childish, and he relies heavily on friends and loyal dogs. It stands to reason that the protagonist has already matured mentally before time travel. This should not be like this. I hope the author will make it more The characters should be well polished and polished, and some highlights and creativity should be added to the setting or plot. To be honest, I still feel that the most interesting part of the whole text I read was before Xiao Gong appeared... At that time, I felt that White did not have the aura to be an attacker. But after Xiao Gong appeared, Xiao Gong had aura, a loyal dog, a sinister side, a story, and an iceberg... There are many good points. At this time, I feel It would be better to serve as a minor attacker for White, because the minor is very weak, and White is not very strong. The two of them can slowly grow stronger together, and the relationship will come naturally. Moreover, White should be a little free and uninhibited, and it is heartwarming to be fully polished into a perfect partner. And this real minor attacker... It's hard to describe the emotional drama of love at first sight, and the dark side that eats people and sucks blood, but his force His character is so good that after the final confrontation with him, the monsters he encountered immediately jumped from level 15 to level 50... Xiao Shou had not had time to level up, and now he has completely become a vase relying on Xiao Gong and his friends, and even his personality has become like a confused little girl... And the white chess that originally had some highlights has become ordinary, and the good upgrading process of mature time-travelers who cultivate immortality has turned into a sinister loyal dog attacking Xiao Bai Shouwen...
When he saw a nail pinning the zombie with his eyes open to the ground, he stupidly pulled out the nail. This was no longer the protagonist's IQ overtaking the chicken, but the author's IQ overachieving... Is the idea of pulling out the nail so difficult to pull off? You just say that the protagonist accidentally pounces on him and pulls it out unconsciously. Your writing like this makes me think that the protagonist is greedy, brainless and stupid. This is not cute at all.
Sprinkle flowers~~Come on~~
Sprinkle flowers~~Come on~~
Sprinkle flowers~~Come on~~
Sprinkle flowers~~Come on~~
Sprinkle flowers~~Come on~~
Sprinkle flowers~~Come on~~
Sprinkle flowers~~Come on~~
Sprinkle flowers~~Come on~~