The palace gates are as deep as the sea, and the past is a sorrowful dream. A long-buried story is slowly being revealed, brewing a storm of blood and violence.
Don't trust prosperity: it is always at its bleakest when it shines brightest. Don't misunderstand love: when it comes, you often don't even notice. Don't give up on old grudges: without them, life would lose its extraordinary color.
Lie Yunfeng is cunning and sly; Tantai Meng is gloomy and elusive. When brilliant sunlight meets moonlight drifting with frost and snow, is there hope for day and night to overlap?
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This novel is extremely boring. Read at your own risk.
First, this is not danmei, romance, an NP story, or a purely martial arts novel, though of course I wrote it with the martial arts genre in mind.
Second, it is full of rambling and talking to oneself, and the plot moves slowly. I was hoping to write something more nuanced.
Third, the leads and supporting characters keep switching places, and the whole thing is a mess.
Fourth, this novel is extremely slow-paced, as clear as water with no fish in it. It reached one million words before ending, and still had no kiss, let alone anything explicit. I have no plans to go there.
Fifth, the later chapters are for subscribers. Log in to leave a comment, and please follow the comment guidelines. Don't forget to log in.
Fifth, this is my first long novel, and it has plenty of shortcomings. I sincerely welcome criticism and suggestions. Feel free to leave flowers or throw bricks.
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Continuation (Grand Finale):
Frontier Winds and Frost
A Certain Yao's Copycat Novel:
The Bandit Chief's Husband
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I feel a lot of pressure when I receive a text like this. When I open the page and see more than 180 chapters, each chapter is about 5,000 words, and I have turned on V, my little heart trembles... It's hard to say how to evaluate it... Let's take a look at the good and bad first. My habit is to say the bad things first, I hope you don't blame me... I've probably read about ten chapters, but I can't quite figure out the direction, so I won't analyze the plot or anything like that. I'll just briefly share my thoughts on the words and structure. It may not be right, but it's just for communication. Your reason for registration stated that this is a carefully written article. In fact, you can see this by reading the first chapter, and it is also reflected in the number of words and chapters. After reading it, just like what you said in the copy, I felt that this was a really epic work and the plot was a bit delayed. The writing of the article is very smooth, and the words and sentences are beautifully modified, but there is a feeling that it is endless. In fact, as a long article, there should be a clear main line direction at the beginning of the article. It does not necessarily have to clearly explain what the main line is, but at least there is a direction. For example, the first chapter of the article talks about the appearance of Xiao Yuxuan's master and apprentice. In order to introduce the identity of the young prince, he devised a fight without getting to know each other. This kind of plot is summarized in a thousand words, and the details are described very clearly, but the foreshadowing is too long. There is also the proportion of characters and scenery. The description of the scenery in "Swordsman of the Red Dust" is very strong, probably because the author is very skilled in the use of antiques. The descriptions of the scenes and scenes in the article are easy to image in the mind, with a rich atmosphere. In comparison, the characterization of the characters is relatively thin. For example, I don't know whether the author did this intentionally or accidentally forgot that Xiao Yuxuan was originally very majestic and Tan Taiying was gentle and beautiful. When the two saw the young prince bullying others, why did they rush up to each other and Dan yelled "shameless" and "shameless"? Isn't it too impulsive... The scenery seems to be supposed to serve the characters. The proportions between the scenery and the people are not coordinated, and the picture is distorted. Although the words of the characters in the article are all wise, I always feel that the tone is not much different. If the author can make a unique treatment, the characters will be more brilliant. Next, let's talk about the good things... First of all, what I want to express is... I admire the author very much. To write a million words is not something any author can boast of, but the author has written so much seriously and down-to-earth. Furthermore, I was surprised that this article is indeed not just a romance. It can be said that "Red Dust" contains group portraits, and all parties are carefully taken care of. This is not easy for a novel with complex characters. As a person who is very weak in writing about scenery, I have benefited a lot from reading the author's article. The scenery is so well written, especially the scene of the thatched cottage, which is very freehand with the use of a paintbrush. It can be said that everyone loves literature. I am indeed lucky to meet such an author in Jinjiang. Watched "Red Dust?" , I suddenly thought that there may be some literary principles that were lost when we pursued humans and beasts and pursued pure white literature. But I couldn't see clearly what the principle was. I didn't know whether it was a description of the emotions of the whole character rather than simply the emotions of men and women, or whether it was an insistence on craftsmanship and elaboration of sentences. "Red Dust" is an article that moves people simply by looking at its structure and text. I hope the author will stick to it.
I like Tantai Meng and Lie Yunfeng. I can't get any points this time.
Forgot to score, please make up for it
I've read it once, and now I'm reviewing it again. I never tire of it. It's just a bit too long, and it would take a lot of time to read through it again. The wind and frost in the frontier fortress are also quite beautiful, haha.
The writing is so good~ the main characters are so cute~ Feng and Meng feel like Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu~~~I don't know how long it will take for these two to bear fruit!!! There is also Xiaoyin. Every time I think of him, I want to say, S kid~~
Spread flowers~~~ Love this article so much!
It's so well written, keep chasing the frontier!
It's so well written~~Huhu
I didn't expect to see such a solid and good article here... I will continue to follow the article.
It took me a lot of time to finish it. It's well written and every character has flesh and blood. I'm going to watch the next part.