Synopsis:
Jiang Chengshuo said that before he became famous, he once took part with his film crew in a variety show that tested celebrities' popularity.
They interacted at random with passersby on the street. Completely unknown and fresh out of his debut, he said, "I'm just here to be the supporting act."
But then a stunning high school freshman came running over in a frenzy. "I'm Jiang Chengshuo's devoted fan, and I'll support Shuoshuo forever!"
Jiang Chengshuo glanced at her out of the corner of his eye. This fan was pretty and had a great figure, but what did she mean by devoted fan?
Years later, Jiang Chengshuo gazed at the person on the sofa, his heart filled with love. Many years ago, she had been his devoted fan. Years later, she and his mother had both become the most important women in his life.
In a sentence: Becoming an award-winning actress is no dream, and the award-winning actor turns into a wife-doting husband!
Theme:
I read it in one sitting. It's great, although I feel like there are a few foreshadowings that I haven't put away yet.
This ending is pretty good
It's really great. My gay friend kept following it and recommended it to me. I was lucky enough to see the perfect ending on the third night of watching it. Ayin, your internship went well. We are waiting for you to come back. Come on!
It's finally over. . Why! I feel so reluctant to let go, I really want to just watch them go on and on and be sweet. . The author DaDa is very perseverant and has always persisted. In fact, I have always been wondering why such a good novel has not been included in v. Now I see DaDa said that it can be completed, and I am very happy for Da Da. Every effort should be rewarded. There are very few romance texts in the Jinjiang entertainment industry, and even fewer if they are well written, and the male and female protagonists have lovable characters. Therefore, I have always felt that being included in v is a great encouragement and support for everyone who writes seriously. . Closer to home, comment on the entire article, wherever you think of it. It is said that a review of more than 1,000 words is considered a long review, but I am not sure if I can write it to 1,000 words. If I can write it, it will be a small gift for the author to complete it. If I can't write it, it will be a long review, which is a reflection after reading it. In fact, I am also very surprised how I found this article. Jinjiang is very arrogant. As you all know, it is really difficult to recommend this kind of article that is not v-friendly. When I first started reading it, it had just progressed to the stage where I was still talking about it. When I collected it, I was a little worried. I have obsessive-compulsive disorder. If I see a cheating article, I will be sad for a long time, but I really like Yuzi as the heroine, so I saved it at that time and kept an eye on the updates every day. Before it was finished, I had read this article basically four times! The heroine Yuko is a very lovable girl. She is smart, beautiful, talented and hard-working. However, the heroine created by the author, in addition to these necessary qualities of a heroine, has several other attributes. She is not shy. If you like you, you will like it. If you love you, you will love it. If you hate you, you will hate it. If I like you, I will admit it. There is no need to chase after you. So it is really easy to fall in love with such a girl! This kind of girl is not slow in any way, but only when I have you in my heart can I accurately capture the signals you send out. If it's a coincidence that you like me too, that's a really happy thing. In comparison, Cheng is also a depressed male protagonist. He feels that his signals are obvious enough, but he forgets about the identity gap between him and Yuko. As a result, he has spent so much time on his own, and he can only blame himself. . Here is the second quality of Yuzi. I have always believed that girls should have a certain degree of self-awareness. This self-awareness is not a princess disease, but a sense of self-protection. Yuzi does a very good job in this regard. She feels that the confession may be interesting to her. She may also like the confession but repeatedly tells herself to calm down. She likes to confess, but she cannot hurt herself because of this, whether it is her career or her body and mind, so all she has to do is to calm down and do well. What she can do is that after the relationship between the two was confirmed, she felt that she didn't want to make a promise to herself during the award ceremony, so what she did was to temporarily withdraw from her heart because she didn't want to get hurt. Maybe some friends said that such a heroine is very selfish. I don't want to find the reason from the heroine's family environment, but I personally agree with this kind of heroine who is ruthless and I will leave her, because I am powerful enough to give myself everything, so why should I desperately seek abuse from someone who will hurt me? In the past few years, Taiwanese novels and Xiaoyan were very popular. The male protagonists in them were all powerful and domineering, and the female protagonists were all innocent and cute. After I met the male protagonist, they all abused me thousands of times. I treated the male protagonist as if I were in first love. . It's true that it makes people cry, but is it interesting? ? A healthy and good relationship should be based on the basic equality of emotional contribution and status between two people. If one party has lost the dignity to love the other party, it may be the last song of the ages, but it is definitely not a healthy love! This article by the author is a healthy and benign love. This is why towards the end, the heroine becomes more outstanding. The sweetness between the two people can overflow through the cold flat screen, because the status of the male and female protagonists tend to be equal. From guidance to support, this is a very beautiful process. The author narrates the whole process in a very powerful way. After talking about the female protagonist Yuko, let's talk about the male protagonist. Unlike movies and TV series, no matter how good the male protagonist is in a romance novel, he is still a match for the female protagonist. Sometimes when I read a novel, long after reading it, when I think back, I may still remember what happened to the female protagonist, and the male protagonist's name and character may have been forgotten. The author greatly praised this article. The female protagonist was very successful, and the male protagonist's character did not collapse from beginning to end, and in the male god-suitor- The identity transformation of boyfriend-husband-to-be-father is also very smooth, but I can really only say that as the male protagonist, he will only complete the supporting role of the heroine's man. Because when writing the article from the perspective of the female protagonist, it is difficult to see the growth and changes of the male protagonist. The male protagonist can only be seen through the female protagonist. However, throughout the entire article, the roles played by the male protagonist and the female protagonist are not only five but also four or six. The image presented is very complete and three-dimensional. However, with such a high appearance rate, his sense of presence is slightly thin. In fact, the image presented is gentle, not the domineering CEO, cold male god, and funny bastard that are popular today, but a gentle man. This kind of man has a warm jade effect even if he is not in contact. Yanshi Fanyanshi lacks some tension. Sometimes, the character creation needs to be opened and closed to make it more impressive. For example, I think the image presented is the most popular in the book What makes the scene feel is the night when Yuzi didn't win the award, Yuzi's unreasonable quarrel and the quarrel between the two. In that section, another image appeared, let's call it the image of the strict teacher, who severely criticized Yuzi. This section is an opening and closing of the image of the present. Of course, you can't just let the present show appear like this, it would be a subtle point. I just use this section to talk about the fullness of the character structure in my personal opinion. In short, both Yuzi and Chengshuo are three-dimensional and full, and their love is also complete. The greatest happiness in life is when you fall in love at first sight and meet again after a few years and say I like you, right? What a coincidence, so am I. . . Years pass by, leaving only the first memories and the most happy ending. If life is just the first time we see it, why bother painting a sad fan in the autumn wind. . It's not that people's hearts have changed, it's just that the time is wrong. . . Fortunately, the male and female protagonists in our book met at the right time, and their hearts have not changed. You are still the same person. . Destiny, what a blessing!
La la la la la, I saw the little bun, I'm so happy, I hope you continue to work hard, okay?
I have been reading novels about the entertainment industry recently, and this article is really good, even better than the red articles recommended on Weibo Tieba. Come on, author!
It's a pity that I have seen the video of eating baby food on the Internet, and now I feel very strange. How should I put it, a little disappointed, I can point it out privately, after all, this meme is not original.
Fortunately, I only fell into the trap after the update was restored... The expressions in some parts are a bit immature, but the three views are correct, and I really love the heroine with this kind of personality. Even if she is a bit suicidal, it is still fun to watch! ! ! Stay in style!
Jiang Cheng said that before he became famous, he once participated in a variety show (program) with the crew to test the popularity of celebrities.
(The content of the program is) randomly interacting with passers-by on the street, (.) Completely transparent, just debuting (at the time he just debuted, he was still a little transparent), he said (:) I am just doing Green Leaf.
(But / at this time /... Content to be added by itself) A very good-looking girl from the first year of high school ran over like crazy (crazy???) And said, "I am Jiang Chengshuo's mother's fan, and I will always support him."
Jiang Cheng said out of the corner of his eye that this fan was good-looking and had a good figure (this sentence felt so vulgar and told me that I was not alone), but what did he mean by biological mother?
Many years later, Jiang Cheng said he looked at the person on the sofa, full of love (in his eyes). She was his mother's fan many years ago, and many years later she and his mother became the most important woman in his life.
After reading this copy, I feel that my reading comprehension ability has improved a lot instantly O(∩_∩)O~
Okay, let's stop being cute, let's get serious and start analyzing:
First of all, this is a very typical article about the Mary Sue entertainment industry. The heroine has unparalleled charm, excellent acting skills, and a hidden identity and background. Her first movie appearance was so impressive that she instantly destroyed the supporting actress who had been influenced by her parents since she was a child and whose acting skills were as good as those of first-class stars. After that, she showed the tendency to sweep the entertainment industry with almost no setbacks.
Secondly, any handsome guy of the right age and status who appears in the novel will always have some kind of emotional entanglement with the heroine, such as the school beauty of the same class in college, the younger brother brought by his stepfather who is not related to him by blood, etc.
Fortunately, the heroine said very firmly from the beginning to the end-except for the hero, she would not like anyone else no matter how good she is!
Finally, the supporting characters opposite to the heroine all have IQs lower than 5. They either burst into hatred as if they were buffed when they see the protagonist, or they bow down after saying a few words.
Just looking at the summary above, it doesn't seem like there's much of a problem. After all, the subject matter of this article is quite good, including the entertainment industry, knocking down a male god, and the male protagonist's wife controlling his sweetheart.
These keywords alone can attract a large number of readers, and these readers who are attracted by hot topics are the largest group of all readers and the most tolerant to the author.
Even if the author's writing style is difficult to describe, the heroine Susu Susu is sky-breaking, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists comes faster than a hurricane, but as long as you insist on being cute every day for 3,000 updates, go to the harem diligently every week to make the list, and don't write a sadistic plot that will offend readers, you can still enter V smoothly.
The only difference is probably that someone's 80,000-word straight v can be pushed to 100,000 or even 120,000 to 120,000. In short, it is impossible to write 350,000 words and only have this data.
With this doubt, I glanced at your update time——
Can anyone tell me what the hell February 14, 2015 is?
See you manually, thank you for not sending it.
Then make a summary as usual:
Two stars for the writing style: Please read it yourself before posting next time. Although the Internet literary circle has very low requirements for the author's writing style, the most basic thing is not to have grammatical errors throughout the article. This should be done, right?
Two and a half stars for characterization: the heroine is very standard and very Mary Sue-like, and the hero's character and design are relatively likable, but overall they're still labeled.
Two stars for the storyline: The storyline is quite vulgar, and it is difficult for the author to write it smoothly, but it can be said to be smooth and natural, and there are relatively few problems such as bugs in the text.
A few final suggestions:
1. Change the copy.
When I read this copy, I really didn't realize that the protagonist of this article was actually the "excellent-looking freshman girl in high school." The gap between the copywriting and the content of the article is too big, and it is easy for people to feel out of touch when they click on the first chapter.
2. Revise the article.
There are a lot of grammatical errors in the article that need to be corrected. It would be better for the author to streamline the content of the article to a certain extent, reduce the number and roles of supporting characters, and make the main line of the story more prominent and more ups and downs.
Pay more attention to the protagonist, especially when the protagonist encounters any problems. Take the opportunity to show the protagonist's wisdom and strength to gain favor. Don't let your agent and team solve every problem.
For the plot, you can refer to entertainment industry news to further improve the plausibility. After all, the heroine has neither a system nor a rebirth. The setting is too simple and does not conform to the logic of normal people.
3. Daily updates are very important. Even if daily updates are not possible, it is best to explain in the copy how often you update, so as not to disappear easily.
——By guiwochangpingpu|guiwojia bags
The finale is coming soon, I'm so reluctant to part with it
I read it in one sitting. It's great, although I feel like there are a few foreshadowings that I haven't put away yet.
This ending is pretty good
It's really great. My gay friend kept following it and recommended it to me. I was lucky enough to see the perfect ending on the third night of watching it. Ayin, your internship went well. We are waiting for you to come back. Come on!
It's finally over. . Why! I feel so reluctant to let go, I really want to just watch them go on and on and be sweet. . The author DaDa is very perseverant and has always persisted. In fact, I have always been wondering why such a good novel has not been included in v. Now I see DaDa said that it can be completed, and I am very happy for Da Da. Every effort should be rewarded. There are very few romance texts in the Jinjiang entertainment industry, and even fewer if they are well written, and the male and female protagonists have lovable characters. Therefore, I have always felt that being included in v is a great encouragement and support for everyone who writes seriously. . Closer to home, comment on the entire article, wherever you think of it. It is said that a review of more than 1,000 words is considered a long review, but I am not sure if I can write it to 1,000 words. If I can write it, it will be a small gift for the author to complete it. If I can't write it, it will be a long review, which is a reflection after reading it. In fact, I am also very surprised how I found this article. Jinjiang is very arrogant. As you all know, it is really difficult to recommend this kind of article that is not v-friendly. When I first started reading it, it had just progressed to the stage where I was still talking about it. When I collected it, I was a little worried. I have obsessive-compulsive disorder. If I see a cheating article, I will be sad for a long time, but I really like Yuzi as the heroine, so I saved it at that time and kept an eye on the updates every day. Before it was finished, I had read this article basically four times! The heroine Yuko is a very lovable girl. She is smart, beautiful, talented and hard-working. However, the heroine created by the author, in addition to these necessary qualities of a heroine, has several other attributes. She is not shy. If you like you, you will like it. If you love you, you will love it. If you hate you, you will hate it. If I like you, I will admit it. There is no need to chase after you. So it is really easy to fall in love with such a girl! This kind of girl is not slow in any way, but only when I have you in my heart can I accurately capture the signals you send out. If it's a coincidence that you like me too, that's a really happy thing. In comparison, Cheng is also a depressed male protagonist. He feels that his signals are obvious enough, but he forgets about the identity gap between him and Yuko. As a result, he has spent so much time on his own, and he can only blame himself. . Here is the second quality of Yuzi. I have always believed that girls should have a certain degree of self-awareness. This self-awareness is not a princess disease, but a sense of self-protection. Yuzi does a very good job in this regard. She feels that the confession may be interesting to her. She may also like the confession but repeatedly tells herself to calm down. She likes to confess, but she cannot hurt herself because of this, whether it is her career or her body and mind, so all she has to do is to calm down and do well. What she can do is that after the relationship between the two was confirmed, she felt that she didn't want to make a promise to herself during the award ceremony, so what she did was to temporarily withdraw from her heart because she didn't want to get hurt. Maybe some friends said that such a heroine is very selfish. I don't want to find the reason from the heroine's family environment, but I personally agree with this kind of heroine who is ruthless and I will leave her, because I am powerful enough to give myself everything, so why should I desperately seek abuse from someone who will hurt me? In the past few years, Taiwanese novels and Xiaoyan were very popular. The male protagonists in them were all powerful and domineering, and the female protagonists were all innocent and cute. After I met the male protagonist, they all abused me thousands of times. I treated the male protagonist as if I were in first love. . It's true that it makes people cry, but is it interesting? ? A healthy and good relationship should be based on the basic equality of emotional contribution and status between two people. If one party has lost the dignity to love the other party, it may be the last song of the ages, but it is definitely not a healthy love! This article by the author is a healthy and benign love. This is why towards the end, the heroine becomes more outstanding. The sweetness between the two people can overflow through the cold flat screen, because the status of the male and female protagonists tend to be equal. From guidance to support, this is a very beautiful process. The author narrates the whole process in a very powerful way. After talking about the female protagonist Yuko, let's talk about the male protagonist. Unlike movies and TV series, no matter how good the male protagonist is in a romance novel, he is still a match for the female protagonist. Sometimes when I read a novel, long after reading it, when I think back, I may still remember what happened to the female protagonist, and the male protagonist's name and character may have been forgotten. The author greatly praised this article. The female protagonist was very successful, and the male protagonist's character did not collapse from beginning to end, and in the male god-suitor- The identity transformation of boyfriend-husband-to-be-father is also very smooth, but I can really only say that as the male protagonist, he will only complete the supporting role of the heroine's man. Because when writing the article from the perspective of the female protagonist, it is difficult to see the growth and changes of the male protagonist. The male protagonist can only be seen through the female protagonist. However, throughout the entire article, the roles played by the male protagonist and the female protagonist are not only five but also four or six. The image presented is very complete and three-dimensional. However, with such a high appearance rate, his sense of presence is slightly thin. In fact, the image presented is gentle, not the domineering CEO, cold male god, and funny bastard that are popular today, but a gentle man. This kind of man has a warm jade effect even if he is not in contact. Yanshi Fanyanshi lacks some tension. Sometimes, the character creation needs to be opened and closed to make it more impressive. For example, I think the image presented is the most popular in the book What makes the scene feel is the night when Yuzi didn't win the award, Yuzi's unreasonable quarrel and the quarrel between the two. In that section, another image appeared, let's call it the image of the strict teacher, who severely criticized Yuzi. This section is an opening and closing of the image of the present. Of course, you can't just let the present show appear like this, it would be a subtle point. I just use this section to talk about the fullness of the character structure in my personal opinion. In short, both Yuzi and Chengshuo are three-dimensional and full, and their love is also complete. The greatest happiness in life is when you fall in love at first sight and meet again after a few years and say I like you, right? What a coincidence, so am I. . . Years pass by, leaving only the first memories and the most happy ending. If life is just the first time we see it, why bother painting a sad fan in the autumn wind. . It's not that people's hearts have changed, it's just that the time is wrong. . . Fortunately, the male and female protagonists in our book met at the right time, and their hearts have not changed. You are still the same person. . Destiny, what a blessing!
La la la la la, I saw the little bun, I'm so happy, I hope you continue to work hard, okay?
I have been reading novels about the entertainment industry recently, and this article is really good, even better than the red articles recommended on Weibo Tieba. Come on, author!
It's a pity that I have seen the video of eating baby food on the Internet, and now I feel very strange. How should I put it, a little disappointed, I can point it out privately, after all, this meme is not original.
Fortunately, I only fell into the trap after the update was restored... The expressions in some parts are a bit immature, but the three views are correct, and I really love the heroine with this kind of personality. Even if she is a bit suicidal, it is still fun to watch! ! ! Stay in style!
Jiang Cheng said that before he became famous, he once participated in a variety show (program) with the crew to test the popularity of celebrities. (The content of the program is) randomly interacting with passers-by on the street, (.) Completely transparent, just debuting (at the time he just debuted, he was still a little transparent), he said (:) I am just doing Green Leaf. (But / at this time /... Content to be added by itself) A very good-looking girl from the first year of high school ran over like crazy (crazy???) And said, "I am Jiang Chengshuo's mother's fan, and I will always support him." Jiang Cheng said out of the corner of his eye that this fan was good-looking and had a good figure (this sentence felt so vulgar and told me that I was not alone), but what did he mean by biological mother? Many years later, Jiang Cheng said he looked at the person on the sofa, full of love (in his eyes). She was his mother's fan many years ago, and many years later she and his mother became the most important woman in his life. After reading this copy, I feel that my reading comprehension ability has improved a lot instantly O(∩_∩)O~ Okay, let's stop being cute, let's get serious and start analyzing: First of all, this is a very typical article about the Mary Sue entertainment industry. The heroine has unparalleled charm, excellent acting skills, and a hidden identity and background. Her first movie appearance was so impressive that she instantly destroyed the supporting actress who had been influenced by her parents since she was a child and whose acting skills were as good as those of first-class stars. After that, she showed the tendency to sweep the entertainment industry with almost no setbacks. Secondly, any handsome guy of the right age and status who appears in the novel will always have some kind of emotional entanglement with the heroine, such as the school beauty of the same class in college, the younger brother brought by his stepfather who is not related to him by blood, etc. Fortunately, the heroine said very firmly from the beginning to the end-except for the hero, she would not like anyone else no matter how good she is! Finally, the supporting characters opposite to the heroine all have IQs lower than 5. They either burst into hatred as if they were buffed when they see the protagonist, or they bow down after saying a few words. Just looking at the summary above, it doesn't seem like there's much of a problem. After all, the subject matter of this article is quite good, including the entertainment industry, knocking down a male god, and the male protagonist's wife controlling his sweetheart. These keywords alone can attract a large number of readers, and these readers who are attracted by hot topics are the largest group of all readers and the most tolerant to the author. Even if the author's writing style is difficult to describe, the heroine Susu Susu is sky-breaking, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists comes faster than a hurricane, but as long as you insist on being cute every day for 3,000 updates, go to the harem diligently every week to make the list, and don't write a sadistic plot that will offend readers, you can still enter V smoothly. The only difference is probably that someone's 80,000-word straight v can be pushed to 100,000 or even 120,000 to 120,000. In short, it is impossible to write 350,000 words and only have this data. With this doubt, I glanced at your update time—— Can anyone tell me what the hell February 14, 2015 is? See you manually, thank you for not sending it. Then make a summary as usual: Two stars for the writing style: Please read it yourself before posting next time. Although the Internet literary circle has very low requirements for the author's writing style, the most basic thing is not to have grammatical errors throughout the article. This should be done, right? Two and a half stars for characterization: the heroine is very standard and very Mary Sue-like, and the hero's character and design are relatively likable, but overall they're still labeled. Two stars for the storyline: The storyline is quite vulgar, and it is difficult for the author to write it smoothly, but it can be said to be smooth and natural, and there are relatively few problems such as bugs in the text. A few final suggestions: 1. Change the copy. When I read this copy, I really didn't realize that the protagonist of this article was actually the "excellent-looking freshman girl in high school." The gap between the copywriting and the content of the article is too big, and it is easy for people to feel out of touch when they click on the first chapter. 2. Revise the article. There are a lot of grammatical errors in the article that need to be corrected. It would be better for the author to streamline the content of the article to a certain extent, reduce the number and roles of supporting characters, and make the main line of the story more prominent and more ups and downs. Pay more attention to the protagonist, especially when the protagonist encounters any problems. Take the opportunity to show the protagonist's wisdom and strength to gain favor. Don't let your agent and team solve every problem. For the plot, you can refer to entertainment industry news to further improve the plausibility. After all, the heroine has neither a system nor a rebirth. The setting is too simple and does not conform to the logic of normal people. 3. Daily updates are very important. Even if daily updates are not possible, it is best to explain in the copy how often you update, so as not to disappear easily. ——By guiwochangpingpu|guiwojia bags
The finale is coming soon, I'm so reluctant to part with it