Nina, I think since I came to see you, it would be very rude not to say something. But I am neither an excellent writer nor an experienced reader, so I don't have that many profound comments or useful suggestions for your work. [You have to forgive me for never growing flowers, you know...] I can only talk about my feelings as an ordinary reader. Please forgive me if I made any mistakes or anything that is inconsistent with your original intention.
It is impossible to say that I have never noticed this work of yours, but every time I see it in Siba, it will be mercilessly ignored by me, because I am not very fond of fan fiction, and I am very afraid of the whitewashing, smearing and weird CP of some authors' works. Because I didn't read enough, my writing was very stiff and I couldn't write smooth and touching stories. But this habit also brings me a benefit: I don't have to read the original work over and over again to purify my polluted (forgive me the wrong word) brain. It also makes me read purely excellent works. So I am really honored to have the opportunity to read such an excellent work again.
I think you have already understood my admiration for you very clearly in my usual communication with you, so I don't need to waste any more words. I still want to say something about this piece.
Different from Harry's perspective, the inner character of Severus himself [I really want to add an adjective in front of "character", forgive my incompetence] shows us a completely different story of "HP". It is precisely because of the difference in perspective (it should be said that it is the perspective of the quill) that the placement of every sentence and plot in the work is more complex and profound. Every word is exquisite, and you can see that Nina has made a careful analysis of each character, and every sentence and every word is just right. Especially what I observed in the article is Dumbledore. Without departing from the original work [there is no doubt about this], every word he says is very thought-provoking. In fact, I have to admit that it is still a bit difficult for me to read some places. I have to stop and think carefully before I can understand. Of course, this cannot be blamed on the author. It only shows that my own reading volume has led to my shallowness. So in this aspect, I don't hope Nina will change. Personally, I feel that changing this style of writing will more or less damage the quality of the work [my humble opinion].
Okay, okay, I'm actually discussing writing style with you. As a bad writer, I'd better step aside! I'm here to talk about my feelings!
The part that touched me the most was the part where I faced the centaurs in the Forbidden Forest. I can't describe what I felt, and simply saying it was uncomfortable cannot fully describe one ten thousandth of what I felt at that time. The appearance of the centaurs is a very clever plot, because the centaurs themselves are a special species (?). They can foresee the future, but are unable to change it, or cannot change it. This different omniscient perspective makes the dialogue between Firenze and Severus almost a communication between the reader and the characters. Severus really endured too much. For a mortal, so many pressures, restraints, shackles and cages were enough to break him. At least it almost broke me as a reader.
And the conversation between Madam Pomfrey and Madam Pomfrey in the infirmary really tortured me [I said it again]! Maybe I'm wrong, but I always feel that around Madam Pomfrey, Severus seems to have put down his usual coldness, and also put down his guard against others. When I read it, apart from the painful twitching of my heart, there was also a hint of... How should I say... Softness? (Okay, I admit that my thoughts are too complicated.)
You really have a lot of foreshadowings. I heard that after you finish writing 8 movies, I don't know if I can live to see the day when the truth is revealed. I really want to watch it! To be honest, I can't tell which part is your foreshadowing and which part is your candid explanation (hit me!)
I haven't watched the subsequent episodes yet, so I'm looking forward to your updates! Although reading your article is like asking for abuse, fortunately, when I feel abused, I can pull you out on my penis and scold you (...) To vent, so I don't worry about my body at all (...).
Where is the cruelty? Don't ask me this question again, because you don't have a long relationship to elaborate on, and a few very plain conversations have achieved a stronger effect. Stop it, be good.
I wrote a literary review that doesn't look like a literary review. Most of it is based on unfounded conjecture and my own humble opinion. If you dare to complain, I will kill you.
When will I be like you? I can only look at the sky. After seeing your quill, I folded my own quill! I plan to stop writing and farming! There is no way to survive! You said that Severus would be able to escape from the sea of suffering in the fourth film, but considering the current situation and the ending that you and I both know, I chose to ignore what you said.
Finally, I have to say that this review is just my humble opinion. Please ignore or forgive any distortions. (Or you can find me on Q and I can duel with you, dear!)
It's so prosperous, so dazzling, hahahaha
The heroine actually wants to live together, holy mother, right?
Nina, I think since I came to see you, it would be very rude not to say something. But I am neither an excellent writer nor an experienced reader, so I don't have that many profound comments or useful suggestions for your work. [You have to forgive me for never growing flowers, you know...] I can only talk about my feelings as an ordinary reader. Please forgive me if I made any mistakes or anything that is inconsistent with your original intention. It is impossible to say that I have never noticed this work of yours, but every time I see it in Siba, it will be mercilessly ignored by me, because I am not very fond of fan fiction, and I am very afraid of the whitewashing, smearing and weird CP of some authors' works. Because I didn't read enough, my writing was very stiff and I couldn't write smooth and touching stories. But this habit also brings me a benefit: I don't have to read the original work over and over again to purify my polluted (forgive me the wrong word) brain. It also makes me read purely excellent works. So I am really honored to have the opportunity to read such an excellent work again. I think you have already understood my admiration for you very clearly in my usual communication with you, so I don't need to waste any more words. I still want to say something about this piece. Different from Harry's perspective, the inner character of Severus himself [I really want to add an adjective in front of "character", forgive my incompetence] shows us a completely different story of "HP". It is precisely because of the difference in perspective (it should be said that it is the perspective of the quill) that the placement of every sentence and plot in the work is more complex and profound. Every word is exquisite, and you can see that Nina has made a careful analysis of each character, and every sentence and every word is just right. Especially what I observed in the article is Dumbledore. Without departing from the original work [there is no doubt about this], every word he says is very thought-provoking. In fact, I have to admit that it is still a bit difficult for me to read some places. I have to stop and think carefully before I can understand. Of course, this cannot be blamed on the author. It only shows that my own reading volume has led to my shallowness. So in this aspect, I don't hope Nina will change. Personally, I feel that changing this style of writing will more or less damage the quality of the work [my humble opinion]. Okay, okay, I'm actually discussing writing style with you. As a bad writer, I'd better step aside! I'm here to talk about my feelings! The part that touched me the most was the part where I faced the centaurs in the Forbidden Forest. I can't describe what I felt, and simply saying it was uncomfortable cannot fully describe one ten thousandth of what I felt at that time. The appearance of the centaurs is a very clever plot, because the centaurs themselves are a special species (?). They can foresee the future, but are unable to change it, or cannot change it. This different omniscient perspective makes the dialogue between Firenze and Severus almost a communication between the reader and the characters. Severus really endured too much. For a mortal, so many pressures, restraints, shackles and cages were enough to break him. At least it almost broke me as a reader. And the conversation between Madam Pomfrey and Madam Pomfrey in the infirmary really tortured me [I said it again]! Maybe I'm wrong, but I always feel that around Madam Pomfrey, Severus seems to have put down his usual coldness, and also put down his guard against others. When I read it, apart from the painful twitching of my heart, there was also a hint of... How should I say... Softness? (Okay, I admit that my thoughts are too complicated.) You really have a lot of foreshadowings. I heard that after you finish writing 8 movies, I don't know if I can live to see the day when the truth is revealed. I really want to watch it! To be honest, I can't tell which part is your foreshadowing and which part is your candid explanation (hit me!) I haven't watched the subsequent episodes yet, so I'm looking forward to your updates! Although reading your article is like asking for abuse, fortunately, when I feel abused, I can pull you out on my penis and scold you (...) To vent, so I don't worry about my body at all (...). Where is the cruelty? Don't ask me this question again, because you don't have a long relationship to elaborate on, and a few very plain conversations have achieved a stronger effect. Stop it, be good. I wrote a literary review that doesn't look like a literary review. Most of it is based on unfounded conjecture and my own humble opinion. If you dare to complain, I will kill you. When will I be like you? I can only look at the sky. After seeing your quill, I folded my own quill! I plan to stop writing and farming! There is no way to survive! You said that Severus would be able to escape from the sea of suffering in the fourth film, but considering the current situation and the ending that you and I both know, I chose to ignore what you said. Finally, I have to say that this review is just my humble opinion. Please ignore or forgive any distortions. (Or you can find me on Q and I can duel with you, dear!)
It's so prosperous, so dazzling, hahahaha
The heroine actually wants to live together, holy mother, right?