(Naruto) I Will Always Watch Over You

Hello, author, this is the vicious tongue-in-cheek guy from Silly Meow's long review shop. The girl actually called me by name. To be honest, I was shocked. However, it probably doesn't matter if the girl's article is finished as you said. Then because the girl's word count is not enough for a long review, this is a short review. Then let's start the review. I personally feel that the title and copy of the book are not good enough. After all, in the text, it seems that the gaze is not described enough. So as a title of the book, I think something like "Missing You" would be more appropriate. When I read the main text of Girl, I really had the urge to close it when I entered the first chapter, because Girl, this chapter is all about dialogue, and I am personally a little concerned about this. If you write the first chapter next time, please write down what is happening now and who is speaking? For what kind of events will come here, and what happened to Shisui on the girl's body, please describe it clearly, otherwise no matter how good the writing is, it will inevitably make people feel like the switch and the middle part were cut off. Looking at it later, I personally think it is well written. , At least made me cry, but based on the character of Naruto, I personally can't accept Shisui Ni's performance, but no matter what, it's okay, after all, this is a short story, so the short review ends here, I hope the girl will go further in her writing career in the future, here's to you, Mr. Venomous Tongue! ——Simmiao Changpingpu by Poisonous Tongue Jun

I was watching "Wei Lan" at the same time, and I was so tortured that I came to QUQ. I must like it!