
When the Wind Rises (Claymore)
风起之时(大剑)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.3M Words
- Genre
- Unknown
- Era
- Unknown
- Updated
- 18y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
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In booklists 6
Some Free Reads~
Organizing the free books on my shelf. My tastes are all over the place: danmei, romance, original fiction, Marvel, soccer, wuxia, Naruto... There are some in the comments too.
Classic Fanfiction Recommendations (10+ Years Old)
I looked through the authors I’d bookmarked ages ago and wanted to recommend a few fanfics whose plots I still remember. I hope you can recommend some classic older ones to me too.
Fanfiction Without Moral Goodness, Embracing the Worst
An occasional roundup of romance-oriented, not-so-happy fanfiction, including some dark, obsessive male characters. Don't read if you're extremely attached to the original characters. The dark, brooding tone may inevitably make them OOC.
Favorites No. 2
Anime fanfiction, saved earlier so I don't lose it
Looking for Fellow Fans
I have eclectic tastes and prefer fanfiction. Anyone want to swap collections? I'm always running out of things to read.
Fanfiction Afterglow
The afterglow of fan fiction
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Come check in on August 3, 2020. This is a rare good article I have ever read. Although the writing style is a bit stiff and some plot rhythms are inevitably delayed, the overall flaws are not concealed. The background is grand, the logic is rigorous, and the story after 20 chapters is fascinating. In terms of setting, the original Clymore sword has its own merits. In my personal opinion, the private setting in this article is quite good and fits the plot. I am extremely honored to have read this wonderful book, and I regret that I cannot find the author of this book.
Let's review it again. Today's online articles are becoming less and less good, and they are highly homogenized. I once thought that classics are still classics. I didn't pay much attention to what happened back then. Looking at it now, does anyone remember it except for the big ones? The first long review I ever wrote was for Shuida. After watching the fandom, I went back to the anime and then came back to write it [laughing and crying]. It's quite interesting now that I think about it. After reading articles for so many years, only Shuida's articles made me feel this way. I really hope that I can see the completion of the Great Sword Trilogy in my lifetime.
There are 3k+ similarities in 110w words, which is about 0.27%. Is this also called plagiarism? Then my graduation thesis is plagiarized. The plagiarism rate is almost 3%.
I read it on QD before. I really liked this article at the time. Then I watched the animation and found that the author's world of swords was more attractive to me. After so many years, I suddenly remembered this article. I even forgot the name. I found the first article when I searched for the word "big sword". I'm so happy.
Come back to check in on January 30, 2020. Happy New Year! Junior high school enlightenment article!
I think Qianshui's Feng Qi is very well written. To this day, I have no interest in reading the original comic of Big Sword, but Feng Qi has read it for the third time. The author's writing is very logical and the plot is also very good. However, this wonderful feeling cannot be found in the new version of Fengyu. Is the author interested in writing the New World chapter of our Yarol? It must be a great story. Come on, author! Nowadays, there are all kinds of birds in the forest. Normal readers who read articles sincerely are the mainstream. We all like your articles, don't let it affect your mood?
Can't help but bubble... I found that some readers are similar to Priscilla in the article. Could it be said that the setting of Priscilla, one of the bosses in the article, is based on the inspiration brought by some readers?
Sorry for today's outcome. . . I have been reading Qianshui's articles all the way. It makes me sad and heartbroken that something like this happened. I also lament that our last piece of scholarly pure land may disappear completely in the near future. . . I don't want to comment on the dispute about the rights and wrongs of the whole thing. I have learned about relevant matters in my own way. As an old reader of Jinjiang, I only browsed without registering at the beginning; then only commented without registering; and then registered to comment. I have been in Jinjiang for 4 years. I have watched her grow little by little and experienced ups and downs, but I always feel pure and pure. But starting this year, things seem to be changing. I can't tell when and where it started, but I believe many old readers of Jinjiang will be aware of this change. Just when I started to worry about whether Jinjiang would eventually decline and be polluted, just like QD or something like that, this happened. It seems to be to confirm my premonition. I have followed the whole thing from beginning to end, and I know the real situation, but I rarely speak here. Because no matter when, I understand that when reading a text, you should first read more and talk less. Only with a calm mind can you truly integrate yourself into the text. And this so-called "debate", "just battle" or "plagiarism incident" that has changed its flavor has actually become the best stage for a bunch of boring and superficial people to show their teeth. I don't want to watch many people's ugly and funny performances. I always think that instead of having this experience, it is better to read more articles and make some comments that are helpful to the author. So I was almost always silent. But silence does not mean that I have no position, nor does it mean that I cannot distinguish between right and wrong. Now, Qian Shui is finally discouraged and ready to go to other places, even QD, which I think is very dirty. This is the biggest stimulation I have ever received. Obviously, in Qian Shui's mind, JJ has declined to the point where he is not as good as QD. It pains me to be honest. So I couldn't help but say something. In fact, there are not many. If interested people carefully study between the lines of my words, there are still many loopholes that can be caught, because I have never been very logical, and I can't compare with Qian Shui. I have admired Qian Shui's overall control ability before, and this article "When the Wind Rises" It requires a very rigorous logical thinking to complete. To sum up, you can feel free to find my loopholes. I don't mind, because many times, there is no need to invest energy at all when dealing with things and people who are indifferent. There is no need to invest even a drop of saliva, let alone brain cells. Okay, so to start, I will just tell you my opinion on the whole thing - as I said before, I have paid attention to the development and various situations of the whole incident, so I should know the whole story relatively well. In fact, Qian Shui and I are not close friends. Just because I have a good feeling about her writing, I have expressed a small opinion. If you have any questions, you can check the previous comment records; let alone a loyal reader of Qianshui, I only started reading this article halfway. At first, I didn't like to speak and often dived. Later, I had a few comments; I haven't even included this article yet. All in all, I have no reason to support or speak for Qianshui. I just can't help but say a few words because I really can't stand the current situation. First of all, we will not discuss the rights and wrongs of the whole matter for the time being, because now the handling opinions given by JJ are clear at a glance. Individuals are insignificant in the face of the system and power. I am not stupid enough to use my personal strength to fight against a huge organization. What's more, now that the author named Ye Kong has been deleted, many records and so-called evidence at that time have disappeared and are unconvincing. But it's okay for us to talk about the attitude issue of "No Words" after Ye Zong admitted his mistake. After all, "Wu Zi" has not been deleted yet ~ many of the comments can still be seen. To be honest, the author of "Wordless" seems to be an author named Fenghun. Although I haven't read your article, it shouldn't be an exaggeration to say that you have no character, right? Even though the person has apologized, he still goes to great lengths to ask for this and that. When he does, he still feels that the other party is not sincere and continues to ask for this and that, even to the point of threatening, not to mention the extremely arrogant attitude. You have a condescending attitude, I can do whatever I want to you. Not to mention the person involved, even I, the bystander, want to slap you. Are you still a writer? Do you understand what tolerance is? Do you understand what generosity means? Do you understand what a heart of kindness is? As a writer, if your own thoughts and morals are not pure enough, how can the things you write purify others and infect others? I really don't understand. Therefore, no matter how high the reviews are or how gorgeous the writing is, I will not read the book you write. This is first of all a matter of principle, and more importantly, a moral issue. Of course, if your masterpiece is missing an inconspicuous person like me, it won't be considered a loss, not even a drop in the bucket, so why should you care. Also, don't talk to me about "if you know you will be criticized or cursed by others, don't plagiarize before". In my opinion, this so-called plagiarism is actually nothing more than the similarity of about a hundred words. When two people are talking, it is possible for two people to say the same sentence at the same time, let alone a written sentence. As for those so-called plagiarized exquisite sentences, I have also read them. To be honest, they are nothing more than that. People with a little literary background may be able to say them, so why bother to be loyal? Since others have already apologized, why not be smarter and accept it as soon as possible. Maybe this matter will not get out of hand like it is today. I think the author himself knows that this so-called plagiarism is really a big label. Why not put yourself in their shoes and consider the situation and mood of the other person at that time? What are the benefits of being too cold-blooded? If I were Ye Tianzong, there would be absolutely no way I could apologize. Although she apologized out of respect for her favorite author, for me, the price was too high. It was not a big problem at first, but as a result, some people with ulterior motives considered it a sign of guilty conscience after actively admitting their mistake. Isn't it unfair? I have nothing to say about this result. This is Yekong's choice and Lord Fenghun's choice. We won't discuss it too much. Another point I want to emphasize is that as an author, Fenghun has the responsibility and obligation to guide his readers, especially when his readers do not have enough ability to distinguish right from wrong. And what did Wind Soul do? It is clear to everyone. Inciting your readers to carry out "malicious revenge" against the other party - I'm sorry, except for this word, I really can't think of any appropriate words to describe all kinds of heinous acts! Okay, at this point, I must say, Fenghun, you are not mature enough, you do not have enough ability to grasp the overall situation, and you have not done the guiding duty that an author should do. I remember that when the readers on the Wind Soul side attacked a certain supporter on the Ye Sky side, they once used this sentence: "What kind of author raises what kind of readers." I think this sentence is the most appropriate to describe you. An author with little moral quality is likely to bring out a group of readers who have no quality at all and are superficial and boring. Facts speak louder than words! Full of negative reviews, spam, slander, personal attacks, what else have you not done? Even words like NC are used, what else can I say? Isn't it an understatement to say it's breathtaking? I wonder why so many people waste so much energy on these boring wars of words. Instead of saying such vicious words (which can be considered classics), why can't they spend a little effort to write something decent and let people admire it? Also allow me to read it? I think JJ will be very happy this way. What's even more unbearable is that even Qian Shui, a bystander, was involved. Then, the comment section of "The Wind Rises" began to be bombarded for a long time. It was full of negative reviews and personal attacks with vicious words. I felt baffled. After going to find out more about it, I found out that because Qian Shui was familiar with Ye Kong, he couldn't help but said a few words in an attempt to defend him, but was bitten by others. It really makes people shake their heads. I dare to ask Lord Fenghun, is it true that those who argue contrary to yours will be killed? Should everyone shut up except those who agree with your views? In fact, if nothing else is said, if your readers maliciously attack Ye Kong personally, if Ye Kong has the intention, she can go through judicial procedures and fight this lawsuit, and I can say responsibly that she has a greater chance of winning this lawsuit than you! Do you know how serious slander and personal attacks are? It can kill a person virtually. Imagine the words Ruan Lingyu left before committing suicide: "People's words are terrible"! And an author like you just acts as a promoter who adds fuel to the flames! My second major in college was law. To be honest, I once asked Qian Shui if he needed to go through legal procedures. If so, I could help. But in the end Qian Shui didn't choose this way. The most fundamental reason was that he didn't want to make the matter a big deal. That's it, you're still being bitten and won't let go. It's reasonable to say that these people are not much different from canines, right? Later, I got angry and didn't bother to look at the devastation on this page anymore, so I didn't come here for a long time. As a result, when I came here today, I saw this announcement that was not an announcement. . . The last thing I want to say is that Qian Shui's departure is definitely a big loss for JJ. The price is huge to some extent. It is rare to see an author like Qian Shui who is good at constructing the overall story and has rigorous thinking and logic in JJ. The Wind Souls may have won this war, congratulations to you; but when the authors on JJ are all Wind Souls, don't say I didn't warn Jinjiang in advance that the end was coming! But I will not go to QD. This is my personal principle, so unfortunately, I may not be able to see Qian Shui's new version of "The Wind Rises" and other new books. This is really a pity. But when the physical book comes out, I will definitely collect it. This is a good book, and you can get into the drama without any problem without reading the original work. I will continue to stay in JJ, my original home, and watch her be polluted little by little and eventually disappear; or I will watch her be re-purified and rise again. No matter what the outcome is, I will wait for it.
After reading this, spread the flowers and say goodbye jj
I read this book in junior high school. The writing and logic are really great. I read it again every year. It's a pity that the author will never come back.