The Moon Weeps

Alas In fact, the author's writing style is OK, it's just logical thinking and the plot arrangement is better.

The ending above is better...

I can understand the basic meaning, but author, shouldn't you have taken a composition cram school?

It's a complete mess behind

What a mess, I can't even understand it

After downloading this book, I realized that I had read it once before, and now I have read it again. I feel that the emotional entanglement of this article is not strong. I personally feel that many parts are a bit baffling. It seems that it does not match the content written above, and the content does not match the title of the book. Originally, I thought it was The title of the book and the article should be about the same, and I felt a little bit offended, but after reading it, it is no longer the case. It seems to be even more superficial than Xiaobai. I hope the author will work harder, and I hope to see a book with a tight plot and deeper emotional content next time.

The author himself needs to improve his writing skills!

What nonsense is written? Has the author ever read it himself?!!!

Um~ I have also written some things. However, the author, please come on~~ I feel it is still a bit lacking.

It's not easy to write so much. But you really need to exercise more!