I'm the Beloved Consort

Finished reading. The setting of the characters is attractive, but the writing, well, really needs to be improved; the plot devices are simple and straightforward and acceptable, but the dialogue is too straightforward and modern spoken language is one of my shortcomings; and the heroine forced Concubine Shu to death in order to avenge the humiliation she suffered and to eliminate the powerful enemies on the way to the Holy Family? But it seems that Concubine Shu has not done anything to the heroine to make her do this frame-up, nor does she mean to make the heroine a little white flower. How can I put it, the power of the two sides is not equal. After watching it, I can't help but feel that the heroine is a bit out of character; there is also the "bitch" export, This is a point that will increase the dislike for the protagonist, but it can be tolerated even if it touches the heroine's reverse scale; the emperor's feelings are generated too quickly in the first part (this actually has something to do with the emperor's character, I personally feel that the shaping is not very successful), and the ending is a bit rushed later. In romance novels, feelings can be love at first sight, or love can grow over time. No matter what the situation is, if it is smooth and unobtrusive when read in conjunction with the character's personality, it is a success. Therefore, I personally think that character development is very important in romance novels. In fact, there are many sensitive aspects in shaping the protagonist's character, and if you are not careful, it will arouse readers' disgust, especially the heroine in this kind of harem novel, who is not a pretty girl. Some superficial personal opinions. This is the author's first article, so everything is understandable. I still hope that the author Jun will work hard.

It's a bit awkward, not enough foreshadowing

After reading it, sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers I like it very much A little bit cautious Also a little touched But I still like it very much

My best friend wore it together and I thought it was pretty good, touching.

Oh my god, I really love you! ! ! I came across this article when I wasn't sure whether it was genuine or pirated. I came here specifically to make up for it. I've read it no less than three times. I think Feng Jiangbai is the one who hates me the most. Later, the emperor suddenly found out about Feng Jiangbai and Yanran.

So warm, so warm (??ω??)

It's finished. It's really beautiful.

Sprinkle flowers Sprinkle flowers

Very much looking forward to it! Already collected!

Congratulations on the completion! The author is so bad~